All the Pain

Disclaimer- I don't own Naruto, Too much

bluephenoix73- ...O...im speachless. i cant even...even...GAH!! UPDATE! *spazes* well that was my praise for the day :) now just one thing i figured id tell u cuz while mindless praise is awesome when i write something i want to know exactly what people think of my writing so..if you dont care what i think then just pm me and my next review will lack the constructive critisism :D this story is fast paced but dont worry about that. it works well for this story and that just might be your writing style. you can always add filler chapters to slow it down if you feel it's moving to fast. "Zetsu swiftly left the bowl from the floor and went over to Itachi, put the bowl lightly on the table." now this was probably a typo that you didnt catch but i think you ment "lifted" and "putting" though personaly i think "setting" would work better in that sentance but that's a matter of oppionion, both work. and this is the longest review ive ever left. see how much i love you :)

AkasukiMemberWoolfy- ...Yeah, Orochi, you can do whatever the hell you like to SasGAY, just stay away from Deidara and Sasori, and Im happy ^O^
... But so much as Touch Deidara or Sasori...AND YOUR AS GOOD AS 5 FEET UNDER!!
Good writting ^O^

black55widow-That was a freaky chapter.

Thank you, I usually put the story on word, but I don't reread them so it's ok, but I know I have a slot of typo's my stories come off the top of my head so i'm thinking about alot when I type so I usually mix up sentences. Gomen....

Chapter 5- Itachi's planning, Sasuke's pain, Kisses

"You can't... Deidara's voice failed him when Orochimaru looked at him again. He felt his knee's go weak and they collapsed under him, he fell over. Itachi was next to him in seconds, Kisame behind Itachi, Sasuke just watched the smirk play on Orochimaru's face.

"Do we have a deal." Sasuke said. He leaned against the wall in the medium spaced hallway, he watched at Itachi helped Deidara into Kisame's arms, Orochimaru watched the scene for moments, the jealousy was obvious in his eyes. He turned back to Sasuke sharply and gave a wicked smile. "Fine." Itachi looked up quickly and gazed sharply at Sasuke, but the worry floated into the obsedian pools.

"Sasu-

"Orochimaru-sama!" They all stopped and looked down the hallway and their Naruto stood, he wasn't looking at Sasuke, but at the floor as he fiddled with the jacket Deidara had given him. Sasuke's eyes got wide, he felt himself move, but he stopped then a frown planted itself on his face. Naruto wasn't his anymore, Deidara jumped up and ran by grabbing Naruto and dragging him down the hallway to his room. There was silence then...

"Alright, come Sasuke-kun." Orochimaru said, Sasuke walked towards his room Orochimaru just behind him, as he opened the door just down the hall, he gazed sadly at his brother as the obsidian eyes turned back forward and he disappeared in his room with Orochimaru behind him. The hallway was silent and Itachi leaned into Kisame as the lock clicked on Sasuke's door.

"Kisame." Itachi suddenly felt vulnerable, he didn't like it, he have to get rid of him, that disgusting poisonous snake. Kisame's arms were comforting as they snaked around his waist and spun him around. The shark grinned, his teeth gleaming and kissed Itachi on the forehead. "Kisame, I need Information."

"As you wish." Kisame chuckled as they both slipped back into Itachi's room.

OMG, I have to do OroSasu, Orochimaru/Sasuke, If you don't want to read then skip this part, I hate this pairing, but I thought the story needed sex

Sasuke stood still as Orochimaru slid into the room, he wrapped his hands around the raven's neck, both of them still clothed, he lapped at the ravens ear. Sasuke suppressed the need to push away. They walked over to Sasuke's bed, it was neat and made perfectly, Orochimaru sat on the end of the bed and looked up at Sasuke, the raven wasn't really glaring, but he wasn't exactly putting on a happy face for the snake.

"I hope you enjoy yourself, Sasuke-kun." Orochimaru whispered, Sasuke shivered at those words and if Orochimaru felt it he ignored it. "Hands and knees." Sasuke nodded and sucked in air and he went on his hands and knees. Orochimaru slid his hand onto Sasuke's cheek,he murmured, but Sasuke didn't pick it up he was watching as Orohimaru slid his pale member from the zipper on his pants.

"Ready Sasuke-kun." Ths snake hisses, he didn't wait for an answer he lifted Sasuke's head up opening the ravens mouth and shoved his limp member down the ravens throat, to the hilt. Sasuke gagged, but took it as Orochimaru forcefully moved his head up and down. Sasuke couldn't hear Orochimaru, but the snake was talking as he slid his cock in and out of Sasuke's hot cavern. Orochimaru pulled away from Sasuke's mouth, his dick now hard as a rock, he smiled at the smaller raven and touched his cheek.

"Your quiet beautiful." Orochimaru said, Sasuke said nothing, he gripped the dick tightly and started moving his hands as his lapped at the tip, the precum leaking onto his tongue and filling his senses. Orochimaru arched his back as Sasuke worked, he hated every moment of it, but if it would keep Naruto safe then he would do anything. He took in Orochimaru's length again noticing that the snake was at his limit.

It was silky, he'd been doing it a lot, Sasuke flinched as Naruto's image flashed into his mind. He forcefully swallowed all the cum and looked up at Orochimaru, but the snake wasn't moving, his head was leaning back, but he wasn't moving at all. "Sasuke-kun, that was amazing." Sasuke jumped back, but Orochimaru's arms were longer and he gripped the raven's wrist and pulled, the raven fell over onto the bed.

"You said...Orochimaru silenced him with a kiss not a lovers kiss, but a masters kiss. Sasuke pushed at the snake successfully pushing him off, he snake stumbled backwards his back hitting the wall in front of the bed. Orochimaru licked his purple lips and smirked, Sasuke visibly shivered. He backed up away from the edge and pushed back until he was against the headboard. He kept his emotions from his face, but he was scared no one had ever penetrated him before.

"Sasuke-kun no need to be scared of me." Orochimaru hissed. The raven twitched as Orochimaru walked to the side of the bed and sat down. "You said, nothing about sex, only head." Orochimaru chuckled and broke into a full blown laugh then he looked at Sasuke. The raven visibly flinched a look in his eye saying 'what the fuck is wrong with this bitch' (I wonder that myself ;P) Orochimaru slid over to Sasuke and grabbed the ravens wrist as he tried to get away.

Sasuke fell backwards on the bed, Orochimaru slammed his mouth down the onto thin pink lips. Sasuke struggled, but Orochimaru had him in an awkwards position, his feet dangling from the bed side, his whole upper body on the bed and Orochimaru leaning over his head kissing him. He couldn't propell himself upward to break the kiss, but he twisted his body trying to move his head.

"Now Sasuke-kun you shouldn't move so much." Orochimaru hissed as he broke the kiss, he went straight for Sasuke's neck, Sasuke held back moans as the snake worked wonders on the pale neck. Sasuke moaned unable to hold back a moan as Orochimaru bit into his pulse, he regretted it as soon as Orochimaru started whispering and nibbled on his ear as he rubbed pert stubs.

"Sasuke-kun, you sound like such a whore." Orochimaru said as he pinched a nipple earning a grumbled moan, but a moan all the same, "You would make such a good slave." Sasuke opened his mouth to protest, but Orochimaru quickly lifted up the raven's shirt and took a nub in between his teeth and began sucking, licking, and biting it, his hands traveled down to the soft inner thigh stroaking it slightly. Sasuke arched his back and moaned as Orochimaru kept licking and twisting.

"S-stop." Sasuke gasped. Orochimaru growled as the raven didn't give in, he grabbed the hem of Sasuke's pants and yanked them down reviling a very hard member, the raven squeaked in surprise and quickly tried to cover himself up, but Orochimaru was fast, he quickly pulled the raven's shirt over his head he tied the ravens hands together. Sasuke growled deep in his throat, but the growl turned into a cry as Orochimaru took in Sasuke's memeber, licking the tip and messaging the balls.

"Ah..S-stop...don't... Sasuke arched his back and screamed as Orochimaru bit the lip, tears started rolling down his cheeks. It felt so good, but disgusting at the same time (That's what you get with an anal virgin) Orochimaru loved the moans he earned from Sasuke as his worked his magic, it was better than Deidara's and so much sexier than Naruto. He smiled and sucked hard on the dick. Sasuke thrashed as his cock was abused, he was moaning like crazy and he hated every moment of it.

"Orochimaru-sama." They both froze at Naruto's voice, Sasuke was trembling badly he was so close, Orochimaru smirked as gripped Sasuke's cock and moved quickly up and down while licking the tip sucking in all the sweet nectar that dripped from it.

"No...S...Stop!" Sasuke threw his head back and cried out as he came, he was like that for a few moments then he dropped back on his sheets wet with sweat, his sweat. He panted, his bare chest rising and falling, he was sure Naruto heard, hell the whole fucking house heard.

"Alright Sasuke-kun, until next time." Orochimaru stood up and zipped his pants, he smirked and ran a long finger up the legnth, Sasuke moaned lightly and glared at the snake as he walked towards the door chuckling. "I really enjoyed it." He said as he was halfway out the door, Sasuke could see Naruto's surprised look as he caught a glimpse of Sasuke and the raven smirked, but put no energy into it.

Sasuke didn't try to move, he was scared, he was scared out of his mind for the next time.

Deidara crouched by his bed, Naruto had left to check on Sasuke, but he heard the scream come from down the hall, it defiantly was Sasuke. Orochimaru always found ways to get under people's skin to make you feel that lower hate you felt for yourself.

"Deidara." The blond flinched and turned his head sideways, Sasori leaned against the door frame a first aid kit in his hand. "Let me put the bandages on your wounds." Deidara, still shaking, stood up and sat on the bed as Sasori walked into the room. Sasori was glowering, but as he wrapped the bandages around Deidara's eye he was gentle. "Did you know that I paid full for you?"

"Hm." Deidara looked at the red-head, "What do you mean, un?" He rubbed the white liner on his eye and noticed that Sasori was waiting on him to show him any other wounds. Deidara slowly stripped showing the craving Orochimaru did in his leg. Sasori's eyebrows pushed closer together as he glared at the carving, he slowly touched it; Deidara noticed that Sasori's hands were cold, but not that scary cold that warm sorta cold that makes you feel happy and makes your heart race (That made no fucking since, but I thought someone might get it.)

"The other day, I noticed... I noticed that I like having you around the house." Sasori growled. Deidara looked at him, his azure gaze meeting the muddy brown and the blonde opened his mouth to say something and he...

"Achoo!" Sasori growled as Deidara spit in his face, the blonde covered his mouth in surprise but couldn't stop the laughter from bubbling over. "Very funny." Sasori hissed. Deidara laughed even harder until he was laying on his back, head against the pillow, tears welling up and his stomach hurting he let out little chuckled between gasp.

"You should have seen your face, yeah." Deidara said, thinking about it again made his start laughing. "It was...so funny... that expression was so....unlike you." Sasori growled and finished the wrapping, he slapped the seal on hard. Deidara yelped and sat up, rubbing his leg and glaring at Sasori.

"You should stop opening the windows at night." Sasori hissed, he glared at Deidara but the blonde felt unaffected he actually thought he saw affection in his muddy glare. "The maids complain all the time."

"You know you watch me when I sleep, un." Deidara said taunting.

"Che, please I have better things to do."

"Yeah, right, un." Deidara grinned, "Danna, what do you do in the workshop?"

Sasori didn't look up from his place, as he shoved medicine and wraps back into the kit, "I make puppets."

"Puppets,ew."

"Yeah right, what do you like?"

Deidara was silent, no ever asked him that he stared at the floor for a few moments then turned back to Sasori. "Fireworks, I guess, yeah."

"Why fireworks?" Sasori grinned.

"They're like artwork, quick and fleeting, un."

"Che, that's not artwork, that's just load noises and colors." Sasori growled, "Artwork is something at it eternal and last forever."

"Quick and fleeting."

"Eternal."

"Quick and fleeting."

"Eternal."

Sasori and Deidara glared at each other, then they began hitting and eventually Sasori and Deidara ended up rolling on the floor Sasori pinning Deidara. The blood scoffed and glared at his master.

"I let you win."

"Please, you couldn't beat me." Sasori hissed rolling off the blond, he sat the his side, the blond still lying back. "Danna how come we've never had sex?" Sasori was silent fro awhile, Deidara turned his head to look at him and Sasori was staring at him with emotionless eyes.

"I don't force and I want to make love, not have a quick fuck every night." Sasori growled. Deidara flinched, those words his a raw nerve, Deidara turned his head away but nodded. "I get nothing from forcing you, but pain filled moans ans I want the ones that are all love for me and me only." Deidara felt Sasori's breath on his ear he turned his head quickly not expecting for his lips to come in contact with his masters.

Deidara stared in surprise as he gazed into muddy brown, before he could even think Sasori slipped his tongue into Deidara's mouth and began exploring the hot cavern. Deidara jerked, but his lids slowly began to close before his fell into the kiss. He never felt such a passionate kiss, it made his out and yearn for someone to touch him. He moaned into Sasori mouth as the red-head explored deeper. Sasori pulled away as he felt his breath shorten, he stared into Deidara's azure eyes and a thin trail of saliva connecting his and Deidara's lips.

"Get to bed." Sasori said, "I want you to come to the workshop tomarrow, then help Haku cook breakfast." Sasori laid a kiss on Deidara forehead and stood up not looking back as he felt the room, closing the glass door. Deidara stared as he laid on the floor, lost in thought he slowly rose to his feet and crawled into bed. That night his dreams were filled with Sasori.

I know you liked that, also if you want to talk to me about grammer errors please send me a message instead of posting that as a review it annoyes that hell out of me. Tell me if the lemon scene needs work and I really don't like OroSasu I really thought the story needed this and in the next chapter, I hope for you to learn a little of Deidara's past.

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