A/N:HI lol reveiwer thank you for telling me that and i will try my best to 'tone it down' sorry for any errors i don't normally edit me stories -Yoky
Madaline:"Here's how the story begins..."
Madaline's P.O.V.
*-*Flash Back*-*
My mother and father put me in an orphanag at the age of nine so i remember it well. Everyone called me names except for the guys they seemed to draw a liking towards me but, sadly they still thought i was weird. I mean really is a girl with white hair at the age of five really normal. Anyways like i was saying they treated me like i was a kisian,SOMETHING EVIL! I wasn't odd though to think that way i do have crimson eyes,sharp teeth,and weapon blood. The staff didn't even come in my you believe that that's only A FEW of the bad things that happened to me.
Since the staff didn't come in my room i could do whatever i wanted in there, without being yelled at. I spent most of my time in that room because i felt like no one was going to make fun of me or bother me. What did i do i that room you ask? I played guitar ya that was the only thing that my parents left,me with. I decorated my room because i knew i would be here for a long time AND I WAS RIGHT IT HAS BEEN FIVE YEARS since i got out of that nightmare their's my story from begining to end.
*-*End? of Flash Back*-*
Kid:"Why are you lying to me?"
Madaline:"Wha-What d-do y-you mean l-lying t-to you?"
Kid:"Your stuttering so that means your lying and that wasn't a very long story."
Madaline:"HEY,I NEVER SAID THAT IT WAS GOING TO BE A LONG STORY!"
Maka and Soul came back to the hotel a few minutes earlier.
Kid:"Maka can you take a look at Madaline's soul for a secondand tell me if she's lying."
Maka comes over to the balcony and tries to find Madaline's soul.
Maka:"That can't be right?"
Kid:"What is it?"
Maka:"She's right infront of me be i don't see her soul...it's almost as if she's invisible."
Apparently everyone hears this and goes to the balcony.
Kid:"Madaline is their something you want to tell me and everyone else."
Soul:"Come on Madaline we can help."
Madaline:"SOUL,YOU DON'T KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT ME!"
Everyone:"So will you tell us or not."
They all stare at her with intense eyes.
Madaline:"Stop staring at me! IT'S NON OF YOUR BUISNESS GET AWAY FROM ME!,VANISHING SOUL!"
Black*Star:"What does that mean?"
Madaline:"Later guys!"
She winks and then starts to blur and with in a blink of an eye she's gone.
Black*Star:"What just happened here?"
Kid:"Isn't it obvious we were putting to much pressure on her and naturally she's trying to get away from it."
Soul:"Come on let's find her."
A/N:WILL THEY FIND MADALINE Cliffhanger -Yoky