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(Kaito's words in italic)
I got up to a knock on my door and got off of my bed and dragged myself toward the doorway I didn't answer the door without asking whom it was. Turns out was Meiko, I didn't want a drunken Meiko in my room because all she does is lays on my bed and mumbles herself to sleep. When that happens I have to sleep in the living room, because her room smells like beer. I asked her if she was drunk and she responded,"Why does it matter?" I told her to leave but I don't think she did. I heard a voice tell her there was a big bottle of Sake at the nearest street corner, and she'd better hurry before it was gone. Then I heard running and a door open and slam.
"Rin can I come in please?," asked the mysterious what I think to be gentlemen. I told the voice to come back in about an hour then I heard him walking away. I sat down on my bed and thought. Then I grabbed a thick chisel black permanent marker and started to color my hair. It took me about and hour or so to finish my hair. As soon as I was finished, that knocking started again. I opened the door and saw Kaito with a smile that changed into a frown.
I let him in and closed the door behind him. He sat down on my bed and gently pulled me down next to him. We need to talk about what happened in my room, less than two hours ago. Why'd you leave the room after saying you liked me? I said I didn't know I guess I felt embarrassed? Why'd you feel embarrassed? That's when I responded because you don't feel the same about me and I hate rejection. I didn't get to respond because you left the room within three seconds of you telling me that you like me.I like you too Rinny. I said, "So you really do like m-"that all I could say before I felt the cold press of his lips on mine you could tell he likes ice cream. He broke the kiss and asked was that enough proof because if you need mo-. I silenced him and told him it was plenty. Do you wanna go out? Right now I asked puzzled. It's a better time than any I guess, wait here I need to go get something out of my room. He left and returned in about three minutes time. We left toward the doorway and Kaito opened the door for me but, before I could step out of the doorway Len and Gakupo came to us to ask where we were going. I told Len thank you, and then I told them we were going out to eat. They asked if they could tag along. I looked at Kaito and he nodded. We all stepped out side and got so we no of use knew it was raining so we ran and got into Kaito's vanilla mustang and buckled our seat belts. It was about a nine or ten minutes before we got to the restaurant. Kaito opened the door for me and I stepped out.
Kaito grabbed my hand as we walked toward the restaurant. And I heard Len loudly whispered, "When did they become so official?" I sternly responded two hours and thirty minutes about you told Kaito I liked him and then teased me. Len rolled his eyes as we entered the restaurant and got a table for four. We sat at the table and looked over the menu and I ordered the Orange Chicken. Kaito ordered Orange Chicken and he demanded melted ice cream as a side dish. Len ordered a Grilled Banana and Gakupo ordered fried eggplant.
And everyone ordered water because that was something we all had in common water as a favorite drink. We had normal table conversation until our food arrived. We ate our food and waited until the waitress came back with the bill, and before Gakupo could pull out his wallet. Kaito had already paid and tipped generously. We left the establishment and got back into Kaito's mustang. We went back home and walked in the door. And the whole subject changed to me and Kaito and I don't know why or how they found out. Luka came over to me and looked at Kaito and said congratulations. I asked her where she out and she said Len tweeted it. I looked over at Len and asked Lola for her frying pan. And with that and a flash of lightning and a clap of thunder. Len started to run, and I chased him around the house for about four hours until it was our bedtime. I got into bed and I guess everyone else did the same. I kept thundering but it had gotten even worse so I went into Kaito's and got into bed with him. I guess Len was scared too because he was already there. We laid down and got under the blanket and fell slowly asleep
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