sorry.. I fell asleep after school yesterday and now its been awhile since i posted my last chapter. I know I said every day but I was really tired. I just passed out. please review my story. thanks to my current reviewers.


I had sat on the couch of Sweet's office. My boss sent me to see if I could still work this case. I sat in the office, twittering my fingers. I remember thinking; WHY WAS I IN HERE? I SHOULD BE OUT IN THE FEILD CATCHING THAT SON OF A BITCH AND KILLING HIM. WHERE'S SWEETS? HE SHOULD BE HERE, I NEED TO LEAVE. FINALLY, HE WALKED INTO THE ROOM.

"There you are Sweets. Listen, I've done a lot for you. Please just sign the papers or whatever you sign and all, and I'll go track down that son of a bitch and kill him so we can all be happy and the world will all be happy." I had begged, all though knowing that I probably hadn't used the right choice of words.

"Okay, I will." Sweets said,and he had leaned down, with his pen in his hand, and signed the papers.

"You will?" I asked, I had become sorta confused. Sweets wasn't one to do that sort of thing. He was usually one who always followed the rules and did his job, no matter how hard you begged him. I had thought; Did he feel sorry that he took my daughter? Was he scared that my wife and I had been threatened? Did he really want me to be able to work this case? or did he just have some more shrinky stuff inside all of this?

"I was asked to tell if you would be able to do your job properly, and efficiently. All your rage and worries make you extremely capable of doing your job, both properly and efficiently." He had said. of course it had been the shrinky stuff. "Plus I may just want you to be able to work this case so you can kill that bastard." finally an emotional, nonshrinky side of Sweets.

"Thanks Sweets." I said as I had stood up and walked out of the door, shocked that for once, Sweet's didn't exactly stick straight to the rules.


"Any evidence found at the crime scene?" I asked Angela. "Any prints or DNA that could tie this bastard to the crime scene?"

"No, not yet." Angela had said, with no thrill in her voice."Right now I'm checking all the guys you put away that have been released in the past year and deleting any that allready have alibis given to their parol officer that has been checked or I just checked and is completely lilable. She said, typing as fast as she could. She looked up as there was a beep and said, " there's four, Marcus Renyolds, Kara Cochrane, Juluis Daner, and Ron Farker."

"Okay, thanks Angela. I had said, my voice sincere, as I ran out of the room. I was going to catch this bastard. I thought to myself.


Thanks for reading will post more, soon so keep on reading. please review. What do you think should happen next? Will he find out who the killer is? Any ideas? if so, post them. love to listen/read new ideas, so keep reviewing. thanks to those that have