My challenge fic chapter 2, here is something i did so people would look at it.

"Talk"

"Saber talking"

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Shirou nodded in shocked silence at Saber who then looked to Lancer who stood their also shocked at how Shirou just summoned a servant. But he then brought his spear up as he remembered why he was here. Saber turned his head at Lancer and said "You wish to harm my master".

Lacer thought about what he should do next. On one hand he could fight Saber but he didn't have a lot of mana and Saber was running full steam and as much as he wanted to cross blades with Saber his master ordered him to observe so he really had no choice but to retreat.

But before he could do that Saber came and kicked him in the chest. Lancer stopped himself and looked to Saber. Saber stood in front of Shirou and took a step toward the spear wielder, who took a defensive stance while watching warily. Saber then grabbed the steel bar that Shirou had used earlier to fend off the spear wielder earlier. Then the steel bar turned black and gained red veins. Lancer then thought 'what? is that his noble phantasm?' Lancer then came back to himself as the black knight charged like a tornado.

"Whoa!" The spearman stepped back outside of the shed yet found himself inexplicably pushed back by the sheer pressure on his lance, A low upward slash that would have taken his head from his body if he hadn't blocked just in time, "how the hel-?" Lancer said as he was forced to block again from the strange black and red colored weapon that the black knight wielded like he had used it his whole life.

Shirou just watched as his black armored servant used the bar he was using on Lancer a while ago. He had saw that the aura around his servant moved to cover the steel bar and seemed to gain red vein like marks. He looked at his left hand and saw the marks that now adorned his skin. He remembered feeling pain on his hand at the same time that Saber appeared. He then shook his head and looked back at Saber's fight

His black attacker growled as he saw that his attack had failed, Saber then started to spin. "Raaaahhh!" Roaring the black knight became a blur as he spun from right to left, the speed and power preventing the spearman from going on the attack even as the black knight finished his movement with a downward diagonal strike. With inhuman reflexes the spearman used the end part of his red lance to block the attack.

With the pressure from the black and red weapon on his lance Lancer found himself completely unable to counter, "Damn!" Giving up on blocking he rolled away from his opponent and began to stand up but the black knight was on him. Holding the bar like an expert ready to smash Lancer's head in.

Despite being in an unstable stance Lancer thrust-ed his lance and forced Saber to dodge. Using the brief respite he regained his stance and started exchanging a fury of blows with Saber. The black servant empowered his strikes and increased the speed of his swings even more, each of his blows denting the blue spearman's armor. The man cursed under his breath as he took yet another blow, it wasn't that the damage of the weapon was huge; rather the problem was that he couldn't block it effectively and the damage would accumulate to a dangerous point eventually. Taking it on the face once was already painful enough, bruising his skin despite the supernatural defenses of a servant. Seeing he wasn't going to win this way the blue haired lance wielder started to move back in the courtyard with his black opponent who kept furiously close to him.

"That is a rather frightening technique." muttered Lancer as he regained his stance as Saber held the bar out in front of his body ready to engage the spearman again at a moment's notice and then with inhuman speed they clashed again. They looked like two blur dancing around each other with a clear intent to kill each other.

Shirou sighed and decided to stop thinking how impossible the skills and physicals abilities of the two fighters were, the situation was just too bizarre to care anymore.

Saber was impressed and annoyed that this spearman who he knew had to be of the Lancer class was holding off his attacks. He then thought of the situation he found himself in. He was surprised that he was not summoned as a berserker but as a Saber. This set him back as he did not have the extra power and speed that the mad enchantment gave him. But as a Saber he had his skills and logic. He knew however that if he was berserker that this fight would already be over.

Saber was pulled out of his thoughts as Lancer's spear started to glow then he charged and jumped into the air. "Let's see you dodge this!" The then thrust his spear at Saber and cried out "Gáe Bolg!" The spear turned into a stream of red light. Saber moved to doge but the light bend towards him. Under his armor Saber's eyes widened and brought up his improvised Noble Phantasm and packed it with prana making it glow in his hand. He then threw it and moved away as his improvised phantasm exploded. Saber moved back to his master's side and grabbed another bar and it too changed as the one before had.

Saber's helmet eye piece glowed as he saw Lancer on one knee and had some blood flowing down his mouth. He brought his hand up and wiped it away and said "that was unexpected of you, Saber." Saber took a step in front of Shirou and said "Leave Lancer or I will kill you." Lancer sighed and said "as much as I would like to my master is a coward and said to return if someone blocked my spear." He turned as his spear vanished into smoke and jumped away transforming into spirit form in the middle of the jump.

Saber brought his weapon down and turned his head towards his master but then snapped his head to the right and once again stood in front of Shirou his weapon out in front of him. A couple then entered the area. One was man with white hair and red coat and black armor that hardly looked like civilian clothes and behind him a girl with black hair, a short black skirt and a red sweater with a cross on it. The man had two swords and Shirou recognized the man who was fighting with the spearman earlier, he had stopped by the entry and was now seemingly speaking with the person behind him. The redhead thought the man had a surprised expression but he couldn't be sure in the dim light of the moon.

Archer couldn't believe what was in front of him now. The being in front of his past self wasn't the blond sword wielding king that he should have had. No he had a black knight servant, no matter what war he was in Archer knew that there was one thing that was the same and that was that Shirou would summon Arturia. But the Servant here was not her. So looking to his master he spoke.

"Master, I'd suggest to retreat for now." Archer suggested his master Tohsaka Rin, his voice tense as he observed the situation before him. "We're outmatched." he said "I can't believe that Emiya-kun became a master." the girl muttered in a disbelieving tone as she took in the sight of the black knight with the strange black aura around it.

Rin observed the servant clad in black armor and then glanced at his supposed master. The gears of her mind clicking quickly she came to a decision. "Very well Archer, let's leave." Her servant sighed in what she could only interpret as relief before stepping back while keeping his sight on the black servant, then grabbed his master by the waist as he jumped backward carefully keeping his guard up with one swords.

Shirou watched the two newcomers leave with a relieved sigh, finally things were settling down. Or at least he thought until he saw the black knight turned to him. "Master what are your orders, should I peruse them?" Shirou blinked then shook his head and said "No, just what is going on!" Shirou said as he waved his arms in the air. "You do not know master?" Saber asked, who then sighed as Shirou shock his head. "We should go back inside, we have much to talk about." Saber said

that's it for now. the reason i added this second chapter was so i may get people to look at it. sorry if they seemed out ooc. so if you want to use this idea just tell me in a review or in a PM. If I feel like it i may turn it into a full story but don't count on it. so thank you for reading this and see you later