hey guys sorry about the wait but im in the middle of my exams so i have more important thing on my mind at the moment

anyway please review saying how you feel about this story


last time

"Nick you might not want to see this" Grissom said to Nick

when grissom finished saying this nick's face drained to a pale white while he was walking to the van

then he saw something "GREG!" nick studdenley said while running to the side of the van

all the CSI looked up at Nick


"GREG!" Nick shouted

all the CSI's looked up and ran heading for the van

"he's not breathing" one firefighter said

"she's waking up" the other said

"greg?, where is he?!" May said worried for her son


one month later in Greg's hostipal room

"hello nick, may if he doesn't wake up soon we are going to have to pull the plug, im sorry"

"nick can you sign some forms please?" the doctor said

"sure" nick said as he and the doctor walked out of the room

2 mins later

"hello May, missed me?" Papa Olaf said evily as he locked the room while watching May sleep

May studdenley woke up saying "nick what's up?" when she relized that only herself and Greg was in the room when studdenley a gas bomb was thown in the the room


sorry that this is short guys but i have my english exam tomorrow so im trying to revise and i have to write a story about being a nurse in the war so im worried about that

so hopefuly if i dont write the next chapter before christmas then...

MERRY CHRISTMAS!