Chapter 6
The life within
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Hiei set me down on the couch. "What happened?" Kuwabara asked.
"What the hell does it look like?! She was attacked!" Hiei said, back to his pissy mood.
Kurama came over to me to make sure Hiei had fixed my wounds right.
"Some how the demon world has found out that I've taken a mate. And the fact that she's human makes them think it would be fun to kill her or whatever else they could do." Hiei said, crossing his arms.
"If they find out she's pregnant..." Hiei stopped. I looked over at him.
"They would take my baby, wouldn't they?" I whispered. Hiei nodded.
"Half demons seem to gain their powers faster than normal demons. Spirit and demon energy mixed together can be powerful," Hiei said.
'Great, as if things couldn't get worse!' I thought. I've only been pregnant for the last couple of days, I had yet to tell my parents. Yet demons that you've never even met want me dead and want my baby as their own. I knew Hiei wouldn't let anything happen to me, but he couldn't be there all the time. And after the baby was born, what then?
"We should show you how to use my spirit powers, but that may not be good for the baby," Yusuke mumbled, rubbin the back of his neck.
"She's not going to be left alone." Hiei grumbled. I looked at him slightly. "I don't want I breathing down my neck all the time. I mean, these demons only seem to show up when I'm outside alone. If I'm at my house with my family they shouldn't bug us." I said.
"Baka onna. I will listen whether you like it or not." Hiei grumbled, getting me to glare at him.
"Listen here Oh Mighty God, I don't have to listen to you. I can't lock me up, and it's my fault I'm like this! Why don't you carry the baby so I can go kick ass or something?!" I growled. Hiei blinked.
I wished I could walk on my foot to get away at the moment. "Hiei, the normal demons shouldn't be our worry. It's Mukuro that should be the hardest to protect (Y/N) from." Yusuke said.
Mukuro was once one of the demon lords. A very powerful female demon who had fallen in love with Hiei. At one time, Hiei had some kind of feelings for her, but it changed when he returned to the Ningenkai. And his feelings really changed when he found me. Mukuro would kill me on sight when she found out about me. And if she found out about my baby, she would want it as her own child, because Hiei would never have a child with her. Mostly after she killed me.
Hiei grunted. It had been half a year since he last saw Mukuro. He was surprised that she hadn't attacked him as he left. Unless she thought Hiei was coming back. At first, Hiei thought there was something with Mukuro, not that he marked her or anything. Hiei knew it would be trouble in the future if he did get a mate. But he never thought his mate would be a human.
I looked around, getting a bit scared. This Mukuro seemed to be pretty strong. Hiei's eyes went to me. "Don't worry, she doesn't know yet." He said.
I bit my lip slightly. Who knew if Mukuro knew about you already? I rested a hand on my stomach. This was my baby, not some upset demon's. Hiei quietly wrapped his arms around me from behind, resting his face in my neck.
"I are my mate, and this is our child. I will not let someone take you and our child." Hiei whispered so only I could hear. I slowly nodded. "Uh...huh." I mumble as I slightly leant back into Hiei.
Mukuro crossed her leg as one of her demons walked in. "Well?" she grumbled.
"It's true. Hiei has taken a human as his mate." he said in a small voice. Mukuro was one to blow things up if something didn't go her way. Mukuro's good eye narrowed as she stood up.
"How dare that week human touch my Hiei?!" she growled.
"What the hell was he thinking by marking that human?!" Mukuro hissed as her fists tightened. "Hiei will become my mate once I spill this human girl's blood." Mukuro said as she slightly grinned.
I took a deep breath as I walked up to my house. My parents were home, and I had a feeling they were worried about me. Hiei quietly followed behind me.
Hiei didn't understand why I was so nervous about this. Demon parents were always happy to have their kids move out with a mate. "What are you doing?" Hiei asked as he raised an eyebrow. I were kind of frozen with my hand above the doorknob. I looked back slightly.
"I'm working up to opening the door." I grumbled. Hiei rolled his eyes as I finally opened the door and stepped in.
"Mom, dad," I called out as I took off my shoes. Hiei shut the door behind me. I wondered if Keno had told my parents anything.
My mom came into the hallway with a worried look on her face. "(Y/N), oh where have you been? Oh god! What happened to my leg?" she said quickly.
I stared at her before moving to hug her. " Oh momma," I whispered. She wrapped her arms around me. I pulled back a little and looked at her. "Mom, I need to talk to you and dad at the same time. I don't know if Keno said anything?" I whispered.
"No, he said you would tell us. What's going on (Y/N), and who is he?" she asked.
I looked back at Hiei slightly before back to my mom. I then pulled my mom into the living room where my father and brother were at. My mom sat down as I stood there, Hiei stood in the doorway.
"Mom, dad, this is Hiei. I guess you could call him my husband." I said quietly. My mom and dad's eyes went wide.
"Hiei is a demon, and I'm his mate now. And we're having a baby," I said quietly. I told my story of what happened. In the beginning my parents didn't like Hiei very much. But the fact that Hiei was still with me, and had protected me, changed something.
Once in my room I sat down on my bed, I was so tired. Hiei moved to sit on my window edge.
"My parents will change in time." I said quietly. I turned off the light and laid back on my bed. I were half asleep when I felt the bed move some as Hiei joined me on the bed, he laid down near me quietly. I smiled some, maybe this was really going to work out. But my mind thought back to Greg. The guy I had thought I'd be with for some time, the boy that first really kissed me. And the one I thought was going to be my first time.
I shifted as I thought about Hiei. Here he had seen me nude, and slept with me, while I haven't even seen him without a shirt on. I kind of wished I remembered what Hiei looked like. I turned red as I daydream about it. 'Ok, he's short, but that doesn't mean god skipped on him below, right?' I thought before turning a deeper red.
I heard a small laugh from the side. 'Shoot! Forgot he can read minds!' " Hey! Stay outta my head." I grumbled. Hiei grunted.
"If you wanted to find out, you could of just asked, I am my mate." He said, making me blush.
"Uhhh...no...that's okay..." I whispered. Hiei laughed again. "Stop it! It's not funny!" I mumbled.
"Onna humans." Hiei mumbled, but wrapped an arm around me as he nuzzled his face into my neck. "Rest now." Hiei added.
"Okay, goodnight Hiei." I whispered. "Night." Hiei grunted.
4 months later
I made a face at Yusuke." Call me a beach ball again and I'll break my nose." I growled. I had started to show at two months. And now, at four, I had to wear different clothes and Yusuke seemed to call me a beach ball lately.
Yusuke smiled. "Oh come on Jackie, you know I'm joking. I look very pretty." Yusuke said, grinning. I rolled my eyes. I had been staying at the temple. The girls of the gang couldn't wait for the baby, the guys couldn't wait either, not that they showed it. I guessed the fact that Hiei was having a baby really changed everyone. Hiei was watching me everywhere I went, but he did give me my alone time in the bathroom.
I sat down on the ground outside, near Keiko and Yukina. Botan was on the other side of Keiko. " I would think that they would grow up." Botan mumbled. The other girls giggled slightly.
"So, any names yet?" Keiko asked me. I looked at her slightly. "Mmmm, well, a couple. But I haven't told Hiei. He may have his own names." I said quietly. The boys were training, something they hadn't done in a while. A couple other demons had attacked, but this time the boys were there to stop them.
"Boys names I was thinking, Tai, Jason, or Seth. And girls names I was thinking Lorna, Niko, or Katie." I said quietly. "Awww! Those are all so cute!" Botan said, smiling.
"I should find out what it is." Keiko said. I shook my head.
"I like a surprise. Besides, Hiei wouldn't know what to do with himself if he knew." I said smiling. I stop slightly and rested a hand on my stomach, before looking up . "Hiei, quick, come here!" I called.
Hiei stopped in mid attack and quickly appeared near my side. "What?" he said, slightly worried. I took his hand and rested it on my stomach, smiling. Hiei blinked as he felt a small kick. Hiei looked at me, then my stomach. "That's the first time it kicked." I said smiling. Hiei smiled at me slightly, but it faded when the others came over.
"Oooo, I want to feel!" Kuwabara said." Baka," Hiei grumbled. Kuwabara rolled his eyes and rested a hand on my stomach. "Wow, already a fighter." he said, laughing slightly.
"Hello little baby." Kuwabara cooed at my stomach, getting the others to laugh. "Hey, don't laugh! Babies can hear in the womb." Kuwabara mumbled.
"Yeah, it's already going to be annoyed of you before it's born." Yusuke laughed. "Is not," Kuwabara grumbled, once more causing a fight between the two. I stood up slightly as the gang became quiet. Something with a lot of power was near. Hiei turned, pulling his sword out.
"Now Hiei, is that any way to say hello to me?" Mukuro asked, crossing her arms. Hiei narrowed his eyes.
"What are you doing here Mukuro?" Hiei grumbled. "What do you think Hiei?" Mukuro grumbled back." I've come for you, and to kill that human girl." Mukuro said lightly. I bit my lip slightly, so this is Mukuro. The demon who was in love with Hiei, and it sounded like she still was.
Hiei growled slightly as he backed up near me, so Mukuro couldn't get an open shot at me. "Do you really think I would let you kill her?" Hiei growled. Mukuro snorted.
"Once that thing is gone, you will come back to me. I are my mate." Mukuro grumbled as she stepped forward.
"Mukuro, get over myself." Yusuke grumbled. "Like we're really going to let you near Jackie." Kuwabara growled. The girls had moved behind the guys. Mukuro raised a hand and snapped her fingers, as about 10 demons appeared. Demons out of Mukuro's top ranks.
"Jackie, stay near me." Hiei whispered. I nodded quietly. But before I knew it, one of the demons had grabbed me and pulled me to the ground, where I was pinned. Mukuro had Hiei blocked off.
The demon went to hit me, but stopped. He moved down. I turned red at where his head was. The demon pulled back, from the smell of my scent, he could tell I was pregnant.
"Master Mukuro, the human, she is with child." The demon called. Mukuro froze. 'What?' she thought. 'Well, maybe she'll come in handy after all. If Hiei doesn't come, I will at least have his child.'
But Mukuro didn't get a chance to get to me. Hiei had killed the demon that pinned me and picked me up to protect me. Mukuro grunted something, she had to change her plans now.
"This won't be the end." she grumbled and disappeared. I looked at Hiei, worried. She knew about my baby now.
