This one is Kiyotaka and Ayumu. Please tell me what you think.
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Ayumu Narumi always felt inferior to his brother. Why? Because Kiyotaka was perfect. Anything he did was great, and everyone told Ayumu so. They compared him to his older brother in every way possible, and Ayumu hated it. Even their mother made it clear Ayumu could never be better than Kiyotaka, for Kiyotaka was perfect. At first, he wanted to be Kiyotaka, but after a while of failing to compare, Ayumu began to loathe his brother, to despise him.
Kiyotaka was always better, and it became even more clear when Kiyotaka married the first person Ayumu loved. Ayumu never hated Kiyotaka more than the day he abandoned, left, and disappeared from his new sister-in-law. It was there Kiyotaka crossed the line.
Kiyotaka Narumi was the best at everything he ever did. He was a piano prodigy at age ten and an amazing detective at age twenty. There wasn't a thing he couldn't do. One day, when he was twenty, Kiyotaka received an oracle, instructing him to kill a very powerful man, and he did that perfectly as well.
But guilt over came him and set up a plan to get his little brother to kill him. And it started with the first person Ayumu ever loved, but Kiyotaka fell in love with her too. But in order to complete his plan of his death, he left, leaving a short message. Then two years later, he sent a girl, giving her the name of "Hiyono Yuizaki" to Ayumu. With her, the "blade children" and the little brother of Yaiba Mitsoshiro, Ayumu started to believe in himself.
But then… Kiyotaka jerked them all away.
But Ayumu didn't kill his brother. Not as long as his sister-in-law still loved Kiyotaka. He wouldn't kill Kiyotaka as long as Madoka needed him, wanted him, loved him. No matter how much it hurt Ayumu's heart.
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