Ok, so to get things straight first, I don't own any of the Naruto characters. The only two that I have full rights to are the two I created: The Takahashi siblings.

This has two Naruto OC's that I have created and it revolves around them and Kakashi and Iruka.
Hope you enjoy it xx

'Lady Tsunade?' Shizune called to the closed door infront of her.
'Enter!' barked the fifth Hokage's voice from the other side. Shizune entered the office and closed the door behind her, leaving the other figure standing alone.
'What is it?' asked Tsunade, rubbing her index and middle fingers against her temples. It had been a long morning as it was, and she didn't want to have more bad news thrust onto her before she could go home for a cup of sake.
'Lady Tsunade, do you remember the rumour about a visitor supposedly coming to our village?' Shizune started, wrapping her arms over her chest as if a cold draught had suddenly engulfed her.
'Yes, I remember it clearly' Tsunade replied in a bored voice. She didn't believe that this was going to be of any importance.
'Well, it turns out that it's actually true' Shizune seemed unnerved by this fact, as if there was a sinister quality about the visitor.
'Alright, send them in' Tsunade said, giving a sigh and standing to look out of the window over Konoha. It was a splendid view from her office, and she loved the village, but it just seemed to be filled with a never ending stream of problems, not to mention missions from other villages asking for help. Footsteps could be heard opening the door, while Shizune fetched the visitor, but on the return, it seemed like it was only one person that was striding back across the floor. This sent a small shiver down Tsunade's back, and she began to wonder if inviting this stranger into her office was such a good idea.
A young lady, between her late teens and early twenties stood opposite the desk, poised in a fairly tense demeanour. She had a fringe which parted over her left eye, while the rest was cut in layers from the top and then fell into a graceful brunette veil which covered her shoulders and down half of her back. Her clothing was a simple white tunic and grey pants, but her left arm was heavily bandaged from her wrist, while it continued to snake up her arm until the bandages disappeared under the sleeve of her tunic. The left half of her face was also bandaged over, where it followed the shape of her cheekbones and down, to where they cupped gently over her chin and followed to the right-hand side of her face to where it was clasped at the back of her head. This left her mouth available for speech and a striking blue eye exposed. In the eye that remained exposed, it seemed to radiate colour and the three shades seemed to blend seamlessly, with a deep sapphire blue ringing the edge of the iris and then a whirlpool of royal and powder blue around the pupil. Indeed, she seemed like she could be a very beautiful person, but with the bandages over her face…
Tsunade could see out of the corner of her eye that this visitor seemed to make Shizune exceedingly on edge.
'Lady Hokage' the visitor said, bowing infront of Tsunade, almost making her back bend 100° at the pivot in her back, and then straightening up again slowly. 'I cannot thank you enough for allowing time in your day to see me'. The girl had a melodic voice, but with overtones of youth throughout it.
'She mustn't be any age over nineteen' Tsunade thought to herself as she looked over the girl a second time.
'You're very poised for a girl of your age' Tsunade said 'What brings you to the village?'
'In honesty, I seek to become a shinobi of the village hidden in the leaves' the girl replied. She looked to the floor, as if embarrassed at admitting this.
'Well' Tsunade huffed slightly 'Before I could even consider giving you admittance to the village, I need to know more about you. Obviously your name is an important key, and where have you come from too.'
'My name is Renita Takahashi, and I am from the sound village'
Tsunade's eyes seemed to form a steely resolve at the sound of this, and Shizune let out a barely audible gasp.
'Please Renita begged 'Before you begin to form any opinion of me, please let me explain this request.'
Tsunade sat back down in her chair, elbows propped up on the table with her two index fingers and thumbs touching, while her other fingers curled haphazardly into her palms. This was her thinking position when regarding matters of a great importance. She fixed her gaze upon Renita and without a word, indicated for her to continue.
'I've come to this village to join the community and to become a member of the leaf shinobi military' Renita started 'I want to relinquish all ties that I have with the sound village because of the waging tensions and wars that the village has to deal with. Since Orochimaru (Tsunade's eyes seemed to click into sharper focus at this extremely open voicing of his name, but she remained to keep her façade) began to corrupt the futile lord and the very community under him, it's been too much of a burden to sustain a lifestyle there. He is also the reason that my family has been ripped apart.
'You see, when the soldiers began conscripting to protect 'Lord' Orochimaru, my father was forced to partake. He fought a valiant struggle and refused to participate, which lead to his demise. Before he was killed, he told my brother and I to run as far as we could away from the village.
'As we were travelling, a few of the sound shinobi attacked us and made pursuit our trails. The only way to escape them was if we split up, and that was the last time I have seen him. As far as I know, he could be dead, but as this is the way of the shinobi, I mustn't let it affect me.'
'So, how long has it been since you last saw your brother, and why this village in particular? Tsunade asked, still keeping her gaze fixated upon Renita and the bandages which conceal half of her face.
'I was nine when I last saw him, so it has been a decade' Renita replied.'
I knew it' Tsunade thought 'Still, it is too young to lose someone. She certainly has suffered'
'The reason I chose this village' Renita continued 'is because whenever the shinobi of the leaf village are ever spoken of, the same qualities are regarded. Nobility, and the willingness to give their lives to protect the ones precious to them. These are the very things that I want to have in my life, instead of being considered as a continuous threat to society. It's a burden being shunned for my appearance as well…'
Renita finished and dropped her look to the floor. If a tear could form in her eye to add dramatic effect, now would have been the perfect time, yet her eyes stayed crystal clear and defined, as she continued to look at the floor.
'Your story certainly seems like a hard one' Tsunade said 'but considering the past experiences with the sound village, how do we know that we can trust you?' Her eyebrows rose up again in an inquisitive arc.
'I have nothing to hide from anyone in the village hidden in the leaves and if I must, prove myself to you if need be' Renita answered swiftly.
'Well, your residence in the village will certainly be considered, but since you have nothing to hide, why do conceal half of your face?'
Renita blushed a slight pink at this question, but remained to stand strong infront of the Hokage and her personal assistant.
'Well, then I seem to be obliged to show it all, then'
'If you please'
Renita raised her hands up to her face, and then let them travel to the back of her head, where she loosened the bandages from their firm clasping. The bandages fell swiftly away from her face and they hung loosely around her neck, and both Tsunade's and Shizune's eyes widened in a mixture of shock and awe at the sight before them. Both of them let out gasps of shock while Renita stood there, unmoved at the reaction.
'Well' Tsunade began , letting her eyebrows slowly return to their proper place on her face as she got up from her chair to face Renita at proper height. 'I can see why it's covered up. But, there is an easier way to do conceal it than covering it with bandages'
Renita gasped slightly, and wondered to herself however that may be possible.
'In any case, that is not the matter at hand, so keep them as you will. Very well, consider your place in the village at a beginning, but you are on a somewhat probation. You mustn't leave the village for any reason and report back to me in three days time, if I have confirmed your residence.'
Renita bowed low infront of the Hokage and thanked her incredibly. Without another word, she crossed the floor and exited the office. The strange thing about the way she moved made Tsunade have that same chilling feeling as before. She moved without making any sound.
Tsunade sighed and sat back down in her chair, with her eyes closed.
'Something hasn't completely been revealed about her' Tsunade thought 'But if she is as true to her word as she claims she will be, then surely she could be a valuable asset'

In the teashop on the corner, Gai, Kurenai and Asuma sat together at the table in the in the far end of the room.
'-and I heard she went straight to the Hokage' Kurenai stated, and she raised her cup of tea to her lips to take a sip.
'So, does anyone actually know who she is or why she is here in the first place?' Asuma asked, his brow furrowing slightly as he contemplated the news he had just heard in his head.
'Well apparantly' Gai began, talking in his usual manner of 'importance' and whimsy 'My sources tell me that she's seeking to become part of this village. But, that's not the juiciest detail.' Gai leaned in closer towards Kurenai and Asuma, a smile curving his mouth and a small sparkle of secrecy seemed to form in his eye. Both Kurenai and Asuma leaned in closer, their curiosity growing with each moment of suspense that Gai had them hanging on to.
'Well, the biggest thing that I heard was that this person, this so-called visitor is indeed in fact a shinobi of the sound village'.
Both Asuma's and Kurenai's mouth dropped open in shock, and their eyes then hardened into a serious gaze as they contemplates the authenticity of this fact. If indeed a sound shinobi had entered the village, then shouldn't there be more protection placed around its borders? Or even having this shinobi tailed by the Anbu Black Ops?
Kurenai swallowed. A deep gulp which seemed to resonate much more loudly than she would have likes. Below the table, Asuma placed his hand on her knee, to provide some sort of comfort for her. This all happened undetected by Gai, as he seemed too chuffed with himself to notice much of what his comrades were doing. What he did notice, however, was something large enough to snap him out of his reverie. On the other side of the store, a girl dressed in a basic white tunic and grey pants with an array of bandages. Kurenai began to talk, but in a swift, sudden movement, Gai had lunged forward across the table, narrowly missing the cups of tea, to place his hand over her mouth. Kurenai's eyes had widened, but as she looked upon the serious expression written across Gai's face, she then understood that they all needed to be quiet about the subject. Gai relaxed his hand from her mouth and ever so slightly pointed across the room towards the stranger at the counter. Asuma and Kurenai turned their heads just enough to look at what made Gai so jumpy all of a sudden.
Renita ordered her tea and left the shop, thanking the barman with a low bow and then walked out the door. Again, she did not make a sound as she walked, not even a soft 'doof' sound on the floorboards. No, there was nothing. Silence.
'That's her then?' Asuma asked, idly playing with his cup of tea. Gai nodded, and also dropped his gaze to look in his cup, though his was empty since he had finished his tea some time ago. The appearance of this visitor, this stranger, seems to put a cloak of silence over them, and each sensei seemed to shudder at the same time from a cold chill which ran down the length of their backs and penetrated every disc in their spine…
As Renita walked away from the teashop, she was getting stares from the other members of the community. It wasn't like she wasn't used to it, not at all, but still she couldn't help but feel like an outsider.
'I suppose I better start getting to know these people' she thought, clutching her tea tightly to her chest with both hands. 'The question is where to begin'. As she walked past a side street, she noticed a blonde haired kid arguing, no, pleading, with a girl in a pretty red dress.
'Come on Sakura!' the boy begged, almost grovelling. 'You've gotta believe me! I was training so hard and I didn't realise I had lost it!'
'This is the last time I ever trust you with anything!' Sakura raged, storming off with her hands balled into fists and her shoulders hunched.
The blonde haired kid hung his head and dropped his shoulders in a sign of defeat. Renita contemplated approaching him but thought that she'd probably just scare him off from just appearance alone. She considered trying tomorrow, when she had actually looked around the village properly and gained her bearings. So, Renita continued to walk on through the streets, getting furtive glances or blatant stares from others.
'This is going to be a long three days' she sighed to herself. 'It's probably best if I stick to the outskirts of the village then….

Right, so there is the first chapter. I would absoloutely love a review on this so feel free to write one :D xx
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I had someone point out to me that I had written that the hitai-ate as the kunai pouch *facepalm* so forgive me while I correct my errors aha.
I know that seems silly, but when I was first getting into Naruto a few months ago, someone said that it was the name for it.
Sorry guys! I'll fix this soon!

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