Continuation of the fluff from chapter 4... thanks to all my reviewers (who I love!) well on with it...
Crona had kissed Maka and they now were making out.
Crona had moved his hands to her waist and they were on the verge of going lower. Her lips felt like candy to him. He ran his tongue against her lips asking for entrance, which she almost immediately granted.
Maka's mind turned to mush. She was enjoying every taste of his tongue in her mouth.
He was certainly enjoying himself as well. To him, she tasted like peanut-butter. He finaly pulled out of her mouth to breathe, and to get a grip on himself.
"Whats wrong?" Maka asked when she saw him just staring at her, expressionless.
"Nothing... it's just... I dont know if we continue this, i wont be able to controll myself."
She was taken aback by this. She knew what he obiously meant by that. She had heard her friends talk about it in a hush manor. She bit her lip not knowing what to do about it. She didnt know what she wanted, she was compleatly torn.
At that exact moment, her papa came in to check on his precious daughter, as he did every day. He owned the town market and was a known womanizer. This made him despized by his daughter, and the hatered doubled when he drove her mother away. He chased every boy who ever tried to court Maka of the front porch with a shotgun. He wanted to protect her innocence, and he knew what guys where capable of doing and he did not want that for Maka, even though she was twenty three. He did however trust Ox, because he was a family friend's boy. Ox did like Maka, and was delighted when she started working at his saloon he inherited from his uncle.
The situation they were in was not the best to find. Crona had his hands around to the small of her back and hers was around his neck.
He immediatly ran over to her, tore the two apart and pulled out his revolver and shoved it in Crona's face.
"What are you doing with my Maka?!" He practicly screamed in his face.
Crona quickly backed up towords the corner and Spirit followed.
"I'll ask you again." Crona swallowed. "What were you doing?!" He screamed it even louder this time.
Maka was scared. She didnt know what to do, she saw a book on the table, left by a customer from earlyer, closing time had never been so crazy. (Crona had slept for a long time.) She grabbed it and she held it up and the spine came down on her fathers head.
He fell down on the floor with a 'crash' and a cartoonish guiser of blood came from his head.
"Are you all right?" Maka asked Crona.
"I'll be fine, I'm just shaken up, but i dont know about him." he said pointing to her father. "What was that techneque you used?"
"I dont know, but I'm going to call it, " A 'Maka Chop'"
Crona laughed, "Brilliant name, so is that your dad?"
"Yes but, I dont see him as that." she said looking at him, then turning to Crona to lift him off the floor.
They looked at Spirit, laying passed out on the floor.
Outside they heard the church bell ring, it was time for the fight!
On one side of the street there was the 'kids' and Crona on the other. After the effect of dust settled. They moved with their hips. There was an eerie silance and a staredown. All three of the 'kids' had their hands placed above their guns waiting for the right time.
Crona was scared. In fact, if he didnt have Maka, he thought he might actualy have taken Ragnoroks advice and split.
Just then from out of nowhere, a man in black came through the crowd and went right up to the 'kids'.
"Just where have you been?" the man said to them.
"Dad! Five more minuets!" Black Star wailed like a five year old.
'Dad?' Crona thought and held back a smile. The crowd had started murmur.
"No! We are leaving, Now!" He said and grabbed them by the ears and Soul was put over his fathers shoulder.
Soul looked back at Crona and screamed, "I'll be back!" Kid hit his face with his palm in embarasment.
Crona fell on the ground laughing his ass off as they slowly disapeared into the sun with Soul ranting. Never to be seen agian.
Maka came over and sat next to him on the ground.
Crona stopped laughing and said, " Wanna continue where we left off?"
Maka smiled and nodded.
They walked hand in hand to a nearby tavarn to continue their endevor.
The End
I did not think that kiss was overly done well, i have never had a first kiss... i thought it was horrible, pretty atrochious. Oh well i thought the part where the 'kids' were actualy kids was pretty funny. Thank you for reading