Hello again! Last time: they found Connors and are ready to move in. I just remembered that JJ's not part of this group, so I'm putting her down like this: she stayed at the SRU. Sorry about that. Review!


Everyone got into position as Sam reminded them that it was going to be a stealth entry. At the doors, they saw that they were ajar. They quietly walked in, with their weapons raised and searched the first floor of the house: clear. They didn't have to search the top floor because they heard voices from the basement. They found the door and walked through. The voices stopped when they (the voices) heard the footsteps of the SRU's boots and BAU's shoes coming down the squeaky stairs.

"Toby Tucker, this is the FBI," Hotch said with his dominating voice. Everyone made it downstairs and saw Tucker holding a 9mm gun to Connors' head

"Don't come any closer!" Toby yelled at the officers. This was Sarge's move.

"Toby?" He gently asked to started negotiating. "This is Sergeant Greg Parker of the Police Strategic Response Unit. Let's talk."

Toby tightened the grip on his gun and his arm around Connors' neck. From what the others could see, Toby had already cut part of Connors' right leg and he was bleeding so Greg had to work fast.

"Look, I know what your dad did to you when you were little and it's not right. This man doesn't have to pay for what you father did to you."

"Everything fell apart in my life and no one cared!" Toby yelled. "Why should you?"

"Because it's my responsibility to care. I care about what happened to you and I care about what you do to that man, his name is Mr. Connors and he has a wife who cares about him a lot. Do you think you could let him go so he can go see the person he most cares about?"

Toby looked at Sarge and said, "okay. I'm going to be okay." Greg knew what that tone of voice meant.

"Toby don't do it!" But it was too late.

Toby drew his gun away from Connors and raised it at Greg. Greg's breath stood still when Toby raised that gun, everything seemed like it was going in slow motion. Spike was at the ready, his right index finger gently on the trigger, his breathing constant the entire time during the negotiation and a steady hand aiming at the subject. For a split second, he couldn't do it; Spike couldn't do the deed of killing the man. Everything in Spike's mind froze up when Toby started to put his hostage down and raise his gun towards Greg. Spike knew he had to do it but he felt like he didn't have the guts to actually do it.

But before Spike could actually consciously think, he was brought out of his thoughts when a gun went off. Toby's body went limp, his head banging up and down when it hit the floor. Spike smelled gun powder but he looked at his gun and it didn't have any smoke coming out of it. He looked around and saw the BAU's team leader standing there: stone-cold face, holding the gun ready to shoot and smoke coming from his gun. Aaron Hotchner had taken the kill shot. Every from the SRU looked at Hotch in amazement at how his shooting skills were that good; Hotch had made a head shot, what they call a "killpoint," and stood there like he was ready to shoot again.

PARKER: 1:56 PM SUBJECT NEUTRALIZED BY UNIT CHIEF AARON HOTCHNER HOSTAGE SECURED SITUATION RESOLVED

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Here's another chapter. If anyone has any requests on what they would like me to write, PLEASE let me know. I love this writing and I would like to know what everyone who reads my stories likes. Usual TV shows I watch are Flashpoint and Criminal Minds but I do enjoy cartoons so if there's anything you like me to write, let me know. I was thinking of writing scenes from my first story "This is MY Team" that were taken out because some of them weren't T rated (ex. bedroom scene, torture scene, the one year gap without Cass, etc.). Let me know if anyone would like that; I'd even write it for ONE person. Thank you everyone again. P.S. one more chapter then it's a wrap for "Up in Canada Again."