Please tell me what you think. I haven't gotten a lot of feedback on the last couple chapters and I would like to know how I'm doing so far. Thanks. -Sport
Carter POV
The Big House wasn't all that big and I know that this entire structure without the use of magic could fit inside Brooklyn House. Never mind that Chiron ushered us into seats around a ping pong table and started to explain. "Look. I don't know what you are or why you are here but you obviously humans. I will allow to stay as campers. And you are allowed to go on quests but if any trouble arises in camp you shall be deported." I replied, "fair enough." Before Sadie could give away all our secrets. And yes, she probably would have too. Magicians, Rosetta Stone, Apophis, EVERYTHING. Now I would give her Some credit. She did do a pretty amazing portal into camp. But now it was time for the big bro to talk. Chiron also told us we could keep our belongings and receive new ones also. parter that we were sent to Apollo cabin kudu jingling where Sadie and I would be staying with. Sadie stayed in Demeter cabin and I stayed in Ares cabin. I guess Isis mother of all was also Demeter and Horus was well DUH a war god. So I guess it made sense. The Ares kids were rowdy and impulsive. Nothing like me. Mostly. Sadie and I stored our stuff in the Duat when we got some time alone. We didn't want anybody suspecting or stealing anything. Most campers thought of us as Boyfriend and Girlfriend. Yuck. Can you imagine? Once we got the word out that we were brother and sister nobody really believed us. So we gave up.
Sadie POV
The Demeter kids were nice enough. Flowers everywhere though *gag* not really my thing. I studied my combat boots. Checking for any signs of remaining Portal Sand. Of course. There wasn't any. It all dissolved quickly. Now I heard things about me and Carter. I did not need to hear that. Boyfriend, Girlfriend? *double gag* Can you imagine? Never in my lifetime would I date my older brother. So what we didn't look alike. We Tried to clear things up. They failed. Oh well. That way we are harder to track. Sweet. One of the only people to believe us was this blond girl with gray eyes bright with intelligence. Later she told me her name was Annabeth. She was beautiful in her own way. And I respected her. A daughter of Athena I was told later by a Demeter kid. I also respected Athena because she was the goddess of war strategies and intelligence. That is a good combo. I don't want to bore you with the details but camp was like any other one I went to with Liz and Emma over the years. With added sword fighting. Carter caught on quickly he used his khopesh during practice and was almost undefeated. Huh.