The Other Version of CCS

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Chapter 6: Far, far Away

Naoko's POV

Aw shoot! I'm going to be late for piano class! I'll take the shortcut by Penguin Park.

A bright light! It had suddenly flashed in front of me. What is that? I followed the path, leading to a cliff with broken off, rusting handrails.

Oh my God! The light exploded, and eyeballs rained down on the ground. They surrounded me, and I could hear their squishy insides. The eyeballs rolled towards me, even as I backed away. My mind blanked, and instantly remembered the time my brother showed me a fish eyeball. I was so scared, and I ran away, screaming.

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Rosa's POV

"The eyeballs, they just kept coming, coming, and coming!" Naoko shook. I think that's the first time I've seen her so scared. I mean, she's the one who tells the ghost stories.

"LALALALALALALALALAA! NOT LISTENING! BLAHAHAHAHAHAA! RAINBOWS AND PONIES AND SUNSHINE AND LOLLIPOPS!" Sakura screamed, somewhere in the corner of the basketball court. Sakura hates ghost stories, so she's trying to distract herself.

I looked around and noticed something that would taint my memories forever.

"Ohh yeah! We have a class together, right, Bob?" Sue twirled a piece of her hair around her finger.

"I'm Richard. No one in school is called Bob. We have science together. I'm not interested in you. Please leave me alone," my green-haired friend replied monotonely.

Richard was an exchange student from America. He came last year and ended up staying since his parents ended up working in Japan. He's well-liked because he's cheerful and easygoing. His hair is blond, but because he's on the swim team, his hair became green.

Seems like Sue's a little late on flirting with him. I swear, I think most girls had crushed on him at some point (even me), but he seemed more interested in hanging out with his friends and playing sports.

Sue appeared to be taken a little aback by Richard's instant rejection. I thought she was flirting with Mike, but I guess she's trying to play with Richard too?

Eriol has been trying to talk me about something ever since that day I lent Mike my English notes. I'm not sure why it's so important…he's always trying to say something but either of us busy or I forget to ask him. I should ask him soon.

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Somebody else's POV

Again, we were in the meeting room. Mother set two cameras on those girls. We watched the camera recording for the brown-haired girl, and now, the black-haired girl.

We found out, the girl with the short brown hair was named Kinomoto Sakura.

The other girl was called Chan Rosa.

They were pretty different, but they were good friends. They were also friends with another girl called Daidouji Tomoyo, who knew of their cardcaptor identities.

We are good stalkers. That's how the Li clan takes down rivals.

"We need to study the subjects of these two cameras. Their personalities are very important. What do you observe?" Mother pressed us.

"I don't see what's so important about their personalities," Shaoran whispered to me.

Mother heard him.

"It is important because we can see the way they do things. See Kinomoto? She likes using Windy a lot. She likes to run away from the card before she does anything, which buys her time. However, the methods she uses are creative and unpredictable," Mother observed. "Chan is interesting. She uses her logic more than anything in capturing cards and mostly stays calm unlike Kinomoto. She runs away, but cuts to the chase a bit faster. She's not as creative as Kinomoto is."

Shaoran snorted as my mother called Kinomoto "creative."

"Kinomoto isn't to be underestimated. She's smart and cute at the same time!" my sisters chorused. And here comes their screaming again.

Mother is correct. I might be lazy and mostly uninterested and not concerned about this, but these strangely powerful girls should be watched.

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Rosa's POV

"Here's the path I took in the park." Naoko motioned us to the scene. Sakura shivered like it was -50 degrees!

Suddenly, a bright light exploded in front of the cliff. I saw the shiny bike I saw in the mall window! It was so cool and it was there for me to ride it.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" everyone screamed. Was the bike really that bad?

"And the eyeballs, the eyeballs, the eyeballs!" Naoko cried.

"A vampire!" Chiraru clung onto Rika. "And, he wasn't like Edward Cullen! He wasn't handsome…he…he was ugly and wanted to drink all my blood…"

"With long pointy ears!" Rika exclaimed.

"A hamburger!" Tomoyo screamed hungrily. I don't how a person can scream hungrily, but that's what Moyo did.

"A woman with long hair…"Sakura said bowing her head… "It was sooo scary!" She whimpered, leaning against Tomoyo and me.

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"I don't know why I could see a bike and everyone saw different things!" I groaned to Cairo when Luke and Dad were out.

I sighed.

"We should go tomorrow. Same time and place…I'll see what it is! And I'll talk to Kero," Cairo advised thoughtfully. "I hope Tomoyo makes a cool outfit for me!"

"Why are you, Kero, and Tomoyo the only ones who are excited for the outfits?" I asked her.

"Obviously because Kero and I look great in the outfits," Cairo laughed.

I giggled. "So you mean, Sakura and I look ugly in them?!"

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Location: The cliff

Okay! No frilly, itchy costumes! I was in a tinkerbell-sort of outfit today. I swished the purple dress; good, it allowed me to move. The bright light exploded again! That bike…what if I tried it out? What would happen?

"Be careful!" Tomoyo held up her camera.

Hmmm…I cautiously approached the bike and touched it. It was the real thing. I started to pedal it and the bike rolled on smoothly. Nothing happened, and I felt the ground. I kept riding, and paid no attention to what anybody else were doing…just me and the bike.

Wait, I remember what happened before I hopped onto the bike. There was a cliff here… No way, this is just an illusion!

"Ahhhhhhhhhhh!" The ground vanished before my eyes and I dropped like a brick. "Fly!"

I landed on my staff before I could plummet to my death.

A weird jigsaw-puzzle-shaped presence floated in front of me, when I finally looked up.

I flew back to the edge of the cliff and landed on the ground. "Clow card! Return to your power confined!" I yelled.

So it is a card! Illusion…that's why everybody saw different things!

I suddenly felt a bound around my mouth. I could still breathe, so I walked towards Cairo.

"It was…" I couldn't say "Illusion!" What's wrong with me? Why can't I say the word "Illusion"?

Screams and shouts echoed between the trees before the sounds were close to the edge of cliff.

"Sakura!" She fell in almost slow motion off the cliff. I rushed to get her, but the guardians and I were shoved back by this barrier.

The barrier was so strong, sturdy as steel. But still, it actually pushed us onto the ground with a force that no steel would ever have.

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Sakura's POV

Mother? Is that really you? Oh! I missed you so much! So have Dad and Touya!

"Come," the beautiful woman motioned. Her long flowing locks of gray flowed in the wind.

I followed without a doubt.

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Rosa's POV

Owww…..that really hurt. Ouch. I sat up and looked around at the surroundings. They were not familiar to me. It appeared to be someone's living room, decorated in traditional Japanese style. Sakura lay beside me. I wonder…have we been kidnapped? And why was there something preventing me from saying "Illusion"?

"Oh…you woke up," Yukito walked into the room, relieved. "I don't know what happened back at the cliff, but both of you passed out!"

He continued: "Tomoyo went home. She's fine, but she's really worried."

"Oh…Okay then…I'm mostly worried about Sakura…About the cliff, well, we were making a mass ice cream float and it slid out of my house all the way to the cliff. Sakura almost fell over, but I reached for a tree and…the branch kinda whacked me in the head…by that time the float should've stopped," I nervously rambled. That was the lamest lie I ever told.

No ice cream on our clothes even for fake evidence. Luke would be ashamed.

"Ohhhh…my head hurts…" Sakura woke up and felt the bump on her head. "Y-Yukito?"

"Sakura, how are you feeling?" Yukito asked gently.

Her eyes widened and she said almost inaudibly, "I saw my mother."

Yukito frowned and silently thought for a moment. "If it was your mother, I don't think she wouldn't let you get hurt," he said finally.

Sakura looked into his eyes for a bit, while I twiddled my fingers nervously.

"Your brothers are coming to pick both of you guys up," he said after a short silence.

The doorbell rang and Yukito left the room to open the door.

"YOU BAD KIDS! I KNEW IT! IT WAS THE ICE CREAM FLOAT! YOU SHOULD HAVE LET ME COME TOO! THEN, WE COULD'VE PUT ON DIAPERS AND RUN AROUND THE FRIGGIN PARK!" Luke yelled oh-so-angrily.

I'm quite sure Luke knows that I want to tell a lie with my current facial expression. We've both agreed a long time ago that if either of us need to tell an alibi but can't come up with a suitable one, it'd be the ice cream float prank. He's probably going to ask me what's really going on at home.

"Monster! What were you doing! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE DOING THE LAUNDRY!" Touya yelled.

"WE HAVE PIE!" Yukito skipped into the room. It seems that while we were all yelling he came in and out of the room.

Everyone looked at him like he was crazy.

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Luke and I were back at home.

"I am so going beat you on this! Argh!" I huffed, gripping on, trying to win the arm wrestle.

"No, too bad, sis. That's for not letting me come along and wear diapers. I miss the feeling," he said with no trace of struggle on his face. "By the way, what really happened back in the park? And why were you resorting to the ice cream float prank lie?"

I'm never going to tell him about the cards. I reached over the table and under his armpits, tickling him.

"AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

That should probably distract him long enough…heh.

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Next day

"Okay, we're gonna go again?" Kero asked anxiously.

"Rosa, didn't you catch the card?" Cairo turned.

I nodded. BUT I HAVE A FRIGGIN PROBLEM WITH THAT!

"Why can't you show us?" Sakura asked.

"Ohh…It's the no-telling-spell-or-else-you-are-a-snitchy-bitch spell that Clow put on most of his cards!" Kero exclaimed.

You have got to be kidding me. This is the spell? Why couldn't he have used a better name? Apparently Clow has the mind of a 4 year old playing in the park and screaming about how tattlers are bad.

"Okay…Well, Yukito said that if I really saw my mom, she wouldn't let me get hurt," Sakura said thoughtfully.

I recoiled slightly from Sakura. It was just really creeped out from how she recited Yukito's exact words.

"That's true, Sakura. You better be more careful next time," Cairo sighed.

"Alright then, tonight," Kero pounded his fist. He so closed the case.

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The bright light exploded in front of us again when we reached the cliff. The light was so bright that I might've gone blind. But then I'm always blinded by disgusting things because I live with Luke.

The light exploded and…

HER MOTHER!

Sakura went towards the glowing woman that I only saw in pictures in the picture frames and hung up on the walls at her home.

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Sakura's POV

Mother? Is that you? Oh! You didn't tell me how you were doing last time. Or what you were going to show me. What is it?

"Come," She said, her voice, so gentle…I wanted to listen to it forever. I wanted to be in her arms and tell her about my fears, joys, everything! Mother! I ran towards her.

You're the only person I'd tell everything to. Clow cards, my crush on Yukito…

Yukito…No…

I kept running towards Mother, my arms outstretched. This is what I wished for every Christmas, to see my Mother again…

"If she was really your mother…she wouldn't let you get hurt". And I got hurt last time. Mother was smiling at me sweetly. I've always wanted to see her smile in person, not just in pictures…NO! THIS ISN'T HER!

Suddenly, she disappeared. Something that looked like puzzle piece appeared in the air, and I commanded it to come back to its original form.

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Rosa's POV

Kero flew towards Sakura again, and he bounced back into my hands from the barrier!

"Ouch!" Kero exclaimed.

This time, Tomoyo had actually brought the first-aid kit.

Sakura was struggling. She had fallen to her knees, whispering, before getting up again to walk towards the cliff. She suddenly stopped in her tracks.

"I command you to your power confined! Clow card!" Sakura chanted.

She stood at the edge of the cliff for a moment and then skipped and ran towards us, enveloping us in a big group hug.

"It's Illusion! I wish I had seen my mother, but it's not…" She whispered, tears streaming down her face.

"It's alright, Sakura. We all know she's watching us above and she's never really gone. Your happiness from seeing her is what created such a strong barrier," Kero patted Sakura's shoulder.

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Time: Next Day

Location: Sakura's House

Yawn…The sun shone brightly through window as I stretched. I shook Sakura awake…I told her not to stay up late if she couldn't stay awake during our awesome sleepover. Tomoyo was already in the bathroom getting ready.

"Noooo…5 more minutes…" she sighed.

I tapped her more. "Yeah, you'll get 5 minutes until Yukito comes," I said oh-so-off-handedly.

She immediately sat up.

"Just kidding," I laughed.

Sakura groaned and tried to get under the covers again.

10 minutes later…

Touya and I were awake first and we started to eat breakfast.

"Hi, Mom! This is a present for your birthday," Sakura said to the picture of her beautiful mom, placing a small box in front of the picture.

Tomoyo was still in the bathroom doing her hair.

"I'm glad she's ok, right?" A gentle, nurturing, calm female voice said behind me.

I couldn't believe it! Her mother…was hovering above Sakura with the wings of an angel.

I dropped my toast on the ground…and well, Touya...spat all the food out of his mouth!

We glanced at each other, wide-eyed.

"She never visited me, and I saw her up to grade 9…" he murmured to me as well as to himself. "Don't say anything about it to Sakura."

I wordlessly nodded, still in absolute shock.

Sakura giggled, as if she didn't notice her mom behind her… She took up the picture and hugged it to her chest.

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Location: Art Museum

The night moon rose high above the clouds. The security guard patrolled the hallways, inspecting the paintings. He wasn't even sure why he'd gotten this job. All the paintings were kinda creepy anyway. Next week, art gallery was having a nudist painting exhibition. Artsies are just weirdos.

He passed by one with a mysterious young lady, finger to her lips, as if signaling silence. Suddenly, he saw something move.

But alas, there was nothing.

He whirled around and continued on.

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I sat on the windowsill, watching Sakura drawing Kero. "Are you done yet?" He clenched his teeth, and his pose was pretty cool.

"Okay! It's done! See!" she pointed to the sketchbook. Hey, that's pretty good!

"NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I DO NOT LOOK LIKE THAT!" The guardian whined, "Bring that beast I am to the table! You made me look like a loser!"

"Yeah, that INNER BEAST ON THE INSIDE…I feel for you," I said sarcastically.

Something's been bugging me. Eriol said there was something he had to tell me, but we still hasn't been able to talk because of his soccer practices and my own forgetfulness.

"No…I think it looks like you," Sakura said, after studying Kero more intensely.

"My legs are more slender, and my eyes are bigger," Kero 'pointed' out.

"DINNER!" Sakura's dad called her.

"Ok, I'll finish this later," Sakura hurried out the door.

"NOOOO! YOU ARE FINISHING THIS, YOU HEAR ME! NOW, HUSTLE, HUSTLE!"

Sakura rolled her eyes as she skipped out of the room.

I crawled out of Sakura's window onto the roof and leaped to my room, hopping into my room's window.

Tomorrow's the art exhibit field trip…I'll see Mike and ask him what's going on with him these days. He's been avoiding me lately…he only talks to me whenever he wants to—as in, if I approach him first, sometimes he avoids me or ignores me. We only speak when he comes to me first.

Guys. People say that you can never understand girls, but I'd say the opposite is true.

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Location: School

"Hey, Eriol," I walked to Eriol's desk.

"Listen, Rosa. I've been trying to talk to you about this for days, but there's something seriously wrong with Mi—

"YO!" Yamazaki said loudly, swinging his arm around Eriol's head.

"You-you get off me!" Eriol said.

Yamazaki laughed. "You are going to sit next to me on the bus!" he dragged Eriol away.

Terada swaggered in, yes, swaggered…ewww…and called the class to come outside to the bus.

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Location: Art Museum

"Ohhhh! These are BEAUTIFUL! GORGEOUS!" Sakura and Eriol screamed and jumped up and down. "OHHOHOHOHOOHHOHO!"

"Yah, they are. Just express your exclamations of the art's beauty not so loudly, with your not-so beautiful voices," the stupid museum guide lady whispered not-so-beautifully-and-not-so-quietly.

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We saw this painting of an extremely bright room, contrasting with a young lady in blue, with her eyes closed. This painting was called "The Smile". That's strange.

The strangest thing was an imprint of the exact same painting on the blank wall next to it.

"Oh!" Sakura gasped. Immediately, a little boy came with a knife, charging at the painting. A security guard caught him and flung the knife away.

"But that's my dad's painting! The woman isn't supposed to be there!" He pounded the man's back as the security guard carried him away.

Suddenly, the hallway became quiet, and it wasn't that everyone stopped talking. It was the kind of silence like someone pushed the mute button on the remote control of a TV. People kept talking and walking, but I couldn't hear anything. Everything became blue for about 10 minutes.

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We were at my house.

"Hmmm… maybe it's a déjà-vu sort of thangy," Kero chewed on his chicken drumstick.

"No, déjà-whatever, we're going there tonight," Cairo slapped him. "It sounds like the card is the Silent card by your descriptions."

Tomoyo, Sakura and I nodded, quickly finishing our dinner.

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"Okay, according to my calculations, the guard is going to pass by the painting in question in an hour," Tomoyo whispered as we crept down the stairs.

We lay on the floor behind a large statue.

"What does the Silent card do?" Sakura whispered.

"I don't know exactly…" Kero scratched his head, embarrassed.

"But you're one of the Guardians of the Seal!" I hissed.

"Silent doesn't talk too much. We just know what she looks like," Cairo retorted.

"Okay, shut the fuck up!" Tomoyo whispered, pointing through the stairs.

We saw a figure crawling among the statues suspiciously. We all tensed up. It could be a criminal! But then again, we're pretty suspicious ourselves.

"What are we gonna do?" I shivered, bringing my jacket closer around me. It was cold in the museum.

"Let's scare him away," Tomoyo whispered back.

We peered through the staircase bars to plan our act.

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"Who dares enter the museum at this time?" A booming voice thundered through all the vases and tiki heads.

"No-no-bo-bo-dy..." A little voice this time, returned back.

"How are you nobody if you are speaking? You will suffer the consequences. I am the ghost of the museum," Kero said.

We crouched beneath the biggest statue and watched, amused…well, except Sakura, who was chewing her fingernails.

Bad habit, kids. Very unsanitary. I passed a bottle of hand sanitizer to her.

Little footsteps crept towards the statue. "Oh, it's the little boy who tried to damage the painting this afternoon!" Sakura gasped. And she dropped my bottle of hand sanitizer!

SHE'S UNSANITIZING MY CLEAN BOTTLE ON CLEANINESS!

"What are you doing here? And who are you?" the child asked us, terrified.

"We're just tourists. We came here because our flight was delayed," Tomoyo answered.

"Why are both of them in costume?" The child answered, looking relieved.

"We collect stuff…" Sakura scratched her head.

"Then what was the ghost of the museum?" He asked impatiently, as if saying we were in the way.

Oh boy…even me, it might take a while to think of a good lie.

"Oh! It was her stuffed toy. It's a puppet," I giggled.

"Oh! I love pies," Kero said in the same booming voice.

We asked the kid why he was here. "My dad's painting was painted over. That was the last painting he did before he died. There's a weird blue lady on it, and that ruins all of the cherished memories of him!" he said unhappily.

"Look, we'll help you," Tomoyo took him by the shoulders.

"Do what you want, just don't bother me," he huffed.

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The painting hung on its usual place. We tiptoed close.

"Okay, that is definitely the Silent Card," Kero pointed out.

"But how are we gonna do magic? We can't when he's watching!" Sakura prodded me.

"I'll talk to him. Then, you guys can capture it," Tomoyo winked.

"It still looks fresh. I think I only need to use a light scrape," the boy said to himself.

Wow, he seems to know lots about painting. Impressive.

"My father taught me how to paint, and so I hope to become like him someday," the child turned to us.

"Hey, what's your name? We never thought to ask," Tomoyo questioned, leading the conversation. She winked at us.

"Yuuki," the boy said, before opening the suitcase he was carrying.

Sakura and I raised our staffs, but WHOOSH…It was all quiet. Silent's finger went to its lips again.

BOOM! We stood outside, astounded.

"What just happened?" I asked.

"I don't know, but every time I get close, I end up outside again," the boy, Yuuki said.

Tomoyo beckoned us to follow her back in. So, we'll play it mute. Bring it.

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Click! Yuuki dropped his knife on the ground.

We were sent outside again.

"Only that much noise could make us end up outside?" Tomoyo sighed.

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We crept back in.

Quietly! Sakura wrote on her piece of cardboard we found in the trash outside.

Okay, let's let him do it. Tomoyo wrote.

Achoo! Kero sneezed.

"Ah ah…" Sakura tried to keep it down.

"Achoo!" Sakura sneezed finally.

Finger to lips. I think Clow made this card to piss people off on purpose.

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"Okay, you know what? I'm doing it myself," Yuuki ran away.

"We don't have much time," Tomoyo whispered.

"You! What are you doing here?" A guard grabbed Yuuki by the hand.

"You bitch!" Yuuki retorted.

I'm wondering what kind of words little kids learn these days.

"There's gotta be a way to fix this!" I hissed. We peaked out from behind a huge pole.

"I know!" Sakura exclaimed. "Shadow, project my shadow through the glass!"

GENIUS! And I followed. Swiping the shadow of my staff across the floor, I knocked both the guard and Yuuki to the ground. The child ran away quickly, while the guard was hot on his trail.

Tomoyo turned on her flashlight, while we raised our staffs once again. A card-like outline appeared from the painting, and the woman opened her eyes before being absorbed into card form.

The painting was of a cute girl with long hair smiling blissfully.

"So, you're a girl? Well, you make a very adorable one," Sakura knelt beside Yuuki as SHE came out.

As the child hurried to look through the window, her hair came flowing out of her hat. She turned back, and nodded, obviously embarrassed.

She thanked us, and hurried away.

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Two boys wearing matching Chinese robes, one in green, and one in blue stood on top of one of the towers above the museum.

"I sense the cards," the one in the green said.

"Yes, in order to get them, we need to sense them," the other replied.

"THAT'S WHAT I JUST DID!" the boy in green spat at the boy in the blue. They started to slap each other.

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Sakura's POV

It was a calm Saturday night in Rosa's house as Tomoyo was measuring us again for new outfits.

"You might have caught lots of cards now, but you still have many more to catch! That means you still have many more outfits to wear!" Tomoyo exclaimed.

I laughed. "You're so weird. Just like Eriol. He told me the other day that he—

Rosa sat up. "ERIOL! That's right, I need to call him…"

Rosa's phone rang and she picked it up.

"Hello? Eriol. I was just thinking of calling you…wait…okay…what? What? No way…"

Then Rosa rushed off down the stairs.

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Rosa's POV

"That's right, don't even think of hanging out with Mike! He's a horrible guy and he's done it in all of the towns that he's lived in!" Eriol said over the phone.

I stopped running, eventually standing in the middle of my kitchen.

"Okay, Eriol, I'm going to go over this and make sure I'm not hearing this wrong. Mike arranges girls that he knows to go to his father's business parties, and eventually the girls are taken advantage of…?" I asked.

"The business men touch them in places that they shouldn't and do things they shouldn't, to put it briefly. They drug the girls' drinks. Think about it. Lots of young, possibly attractive girls who are intoxicated? The perfect thing to have at a party for busy, stressed out business men that need to be entertained for Mike's dad's company to make deals with them. I know it's hard for you to believe me, but I heard this in the locker room between Mike and one other guy. I think that guy was a grade above us. I also heard that one other person was invited to one of those parties, and it happens that the party is today. I don't know when it starts though," Eriol said quickly, like he was running.

I sighed. "Eriol…"

"Rosa, believe me. I heard all of this in the locker room and I recognize one of the voices in the conversation as Mike's. I've thought about what to do and ended up calling the police and I'm going to go over to his mansion soon. The address is 469 Oshimoto street. I know it from doing a group project over there for Japanese class," Eriol said frantically.

"Why are you telling me this?" I asked him, rubbing the base of my palm against my forehead.

"I know you like Mike and because you're my friend, I want you to see with your own two eyes who he actually is. Also, I want to be able to help the other person from our school who was invited if the police don't get there yet," Eriol replied. The sound of car door shutting could be heard from his end.

I gulped. "Eriol, who was invited?"

Eriol sighed. "Sue. And she has no idea what she's getting herself into."

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AN: Yes, I have finally put up another chapter. Sorry for not doing anything for so long. Review button is below...you know you want to click it...and write something constructive :)