Story explanation:
So, I can see that the concept of the story was not very well received. It was actually an attempt at misdirection, misconception and perception.
From the start of it you were led to believe that they were waking up together when in fact they weren't. Imagine watching this same brief scene but on split screen, both conversations and actions of an almost identical nature, just not with each other.
I get that it fell flat. Sorry for any inconvenience. I hope this won't put you off reading any more of my work.
Regards
Readbetweenthesigns
(BGM)