Cause of Death- Facebook Edition
AN: If you guys get confused while reading the story because there aren't any break lines, please forgive me. It's frustrating how you make break ins in one thing, save it on here and this website doesn't put the breaks for you….scumbag Fanfiction smh…. AAANYWAYYY, I hope you guys have as much fun reading as I did writing this! :D
Disclaimer: I do not own Cause of Death at all.
Chapter 4: The Hunters
Molly Dearborne: Getting a good run at GGP! : D
The Hunter poked you
Molly Dearborne: Who's this?
Molly Dearborne pokes back
The Hunter pokes you
Molly Dearborne: Ok, I'm running here, why are you poking me?
The Hunter: Cause I wanna see you…
Molly Dearborne: Do I know you..?
The Hunter pokes you
Molly Dearborne: Ok, ass-clown, who the hell are you?!
The Hunter: Your worst nightmare… ::holds a knife::
Molly Dearborne: Haha, very funny, I can out run you, you know.
The Hunter: Heh, let's see about that. You're just a poor defenseless girl who's running from the fat girl you used to be. I'd be surprised if you can out run me…
Molly Dearborne: ::runs away::
The Hunter: Let the games begin…
5 minutes later…
Molly Dearborne: Ahhhh! No, let me GO!
The Hunter: That's too bad, you weren't fast enough…
SHANK!
Mal Fallon: Damn, that kid can run fast!
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Ken Greene: Whatever, man, it's your fault he got away anyway!
Mal Fallon: My fault? I'm not the one who was driving and got us here late!
Ken Greene: … Just stay on the kid, and I'll go around and trap him!
Mal Fallon: Alright, just don't get lost on the way like last time! xD
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Ken Greene: Screw you, Fallon!
Kevin Jackson: Running away from da popo!
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Mal Fallon: You won't run for long, kid!
Kevin Jackson: No way, sucka! Heh, watch this! ::runs off parker style::
Mal Fallon: Oh, you wanna play? Let's play!
7 minutes later…
Mal Fallon: Hey, kid!
Kevin Jackson: Huh? W-who? I thought I lost yo ass! here you common' from?!
Mal Fallon: ::jumps off the nearest car and pummels him on the ground:: Don't mess with the S.F.P.D!
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Kevin Jackson: Aww lawd, my momma goon' be mad as hell!
Natara Williams checks in Genevieve's House of Horrors- with Shawn Mallory
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Natara Williams: What kind of messed up house is this? Reminds me of a gruesome scene in that movie Saw…
Shawn Mallory: Oh yeah…creepy isn't it?
Natara Williams: Pshh, you can say that again…
Shawn Mallory: Oh yeah… creepy isn't it?
Natara Williams: -.- Shut up, Shawn…
Shawn Mallory: I want to help you on this case.
Natara Williams: Yeaanope.
Shawn Mallory: But why not? I thought you loved meee!
Natara Wiliiams: Look, I got more important thighs to worry about, ok.
Shawn Mallory: That doesn't mean that we're done talking about this, missy! , my apartment, tonight? : )
Natara Williams: Yeah, whatever…
Messages- Maria Yeong
Maria Yeong: Ok, Malibu, here's the deal: this young female, still not identified, was found dead this morning by a runner. Thing is, she's not the typical 'dead' we expect…
Mal Fallon: What do you mean she's not the typical 'dead'?
Maria Yeong: She was huh…she was cut open with a knife..and umm laid out on the grass, detective.
Mal Fallon: O.O AWW SICK! ::makes gagging sounds::
Maria Yeong: You know, Kai said the same exact thing…only he looked like he enjoyed the scene.. that kid needs help.
Mal Fallon: Bad…
Mal Fallon checks in Golden Gate Park- with Natara Wiliams
Mal Fallon: Bison paddock.
Natara Williams: Bison paddock? San Fran has a bison paddock?
Mal Fallon: Yep! In the 1880's, bison were put together to procreate so that they wouldn't go instinct. Third grade report, got an "E" for excellent thank you very much!
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Natara Williams: Oh wow. Good to know you're not as dumb as you look, Fallon :D
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Mal Fallon: I can shoot you, you know. : /
Tasha King: Detective Mal Fallon!
Mal Fallon: No comment!
Tasha King: You don't even know what I was gonna say…
Mal Fallon: I know you well enough to know you want to know what happened out here..
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Tasha King: Oh, I'll get the story out of you one way or another. Just you wait…
Mal Fallon: You'll try : /
Tasha King logs out
Natara Williams: You know her?
Mal Fallon: Yeah, why? You jealous ; )
Natara Williams: Why would I be jealous of her? I have my own boyfriend…
Mal Fallon: Have you looked at me?
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Natara Wiliams: Oh, you are so full of yourself, Mal… xD
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Mal Fallon: :-*
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Mal Fallon checks in Paring Dermatology- with Natara Williams
Mal Fallon: Can you believe the nerve of that receptionist? "Go wait in the lobby, you'll scare our patients!"
Natara Williams: Right? The only thing that'll scare the patients is that God-awful hairstyle! It looks like she fought her hair dryer and the hair dryer won!
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Mal Fallon: xD Oh god, I can't breathe! ::doubles over laughing::
Natara Williams: And the color! It doesn't even match her skin tone! xD
Mal Fallon: BAHAHAHAHAHA! XD
Klaus Paring: You two ok? If not, you'll have to take your raucous outside.
Natara Williams: ::laughter subsides:: I-I'm s-sorry! I'm Special Agent N-Natara Williams… and this is Detective Mal Fallon of the S.F.P.D.
Klaus Paring: … Have you two considered modeling? Seriously, you two have impeccable skin : D
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Mal Fallon: Really?!
Klaus Paring: Oh yes! I can definitely use you both for a poster in my office!
Mal Fallon: Oh stop it, I'm blushing! :D
Natara Williams: MAL! FOCUS! DETECTIVE MODE NOW!
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Mal Fallon: Right! Dr. Paring, we have reason to believe these murders might be connected to your practice.
Klaus Paring: What are you implying? Are you implying that I was the one who did it? : /
Natara Williams: No, not at all, Dr. Paring! Unless you were the one to do it!
Mal Fallon: I mean, you might as well. The only connection, and I do mean only, is that these women were once patients in this clinic…
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Klaus Paring: No… that's impossible…
Mal Fallon: You bet your ass it's possible! It's gotta be someone here who has access to these files… Have anyone one mind?
Max Paring: H-how'd you k-know it was me?!
Mal Fallon: Dear ol' daddy Klaus told us. You're under arrest, kid.
Max Paring: Damn you, father! Ahhhhh!
Many violent actions later…
Mal Fallon: O.o
Natara Williams: Woah… did…did that just happen?
Mal Fallon: …Yes. ::makes gagging sounds::Not again…
AN: I just realized that "The Connoisseur" chapter wasn't completed. Wahhhh I didn't get into full detail with Nat's kidnapping! I'm such a bad person! :,(
No biggie, I'll make sure to complete the whole volume for the next one!
I also couldn't complete the whole volume on this chapter because I came down with a serious case of WRITER'S BLOCK, dun dun dun!