HOLY COW I LOVE ALL YOU REVIEWERS! You guys boost my self-esteem SOOO much it is crazy. I was checking my emails and Started screaming and grinning like crazy, my mom threatened to call animal control on me so I stopped, but then yelled into a pillow to get out the rest of my excess joy. OH My GoD. It made me jump right onto word document and write this chapter in like 1 hour. Now onto the reply for my awesome guest reviewer this time!
So, OMGOMG Wizbef. You are too kind my friend. Too kind. Both your reviews had gotten through; I just didn't know how to moderate it so sorry! .. I'm happy that this story is actually relating to a viewer actual life, its almost based on mine minus the Jack Frost and stuff. Oh well. Actually I had to look at so many Jack x reader fics before I got the confidence to do this, it was crazy. Lol Studying is what you could call it I guess. Hope that sunburn gets better! :/ (P.S. I will get all burgess kids to appear, especially Jamie! )
Kay enough happiness ranting, onto the chapter! Told from Dashiell's point of view. (P.S.S. Watch 'Hello' with lyrics(!) by SHINee before reading. I suggest the one by BillBoardKpopMnet. It fits my chapter pretty well I think. )
Chapter 4: Ask her Already!
Maybe it was her hair. She had the most amazing hair. Or her eyes. When I had first seen her, and talked to her, those beautiful (e/c) orbs had caught my attention and stole my breath.
Sora had asked me why I chose her for our outing. I couldn't give him a reply. I lied to him and just said cuz she's hot. He nodded and left with his girl-whore. I still don't understand why she looked and was so amazing. Her personality shone to be like one of the most unique in the world to me. I guess those are the kinds of compliments she might deserve.
I walked out my front door, yelling that I'll be back before 5 to my 12 year old little sister. Wearing a black and green plaid shirt and blue baggy jeans, I strode out to pick up the girl.
I knocked lightly at her door and 2 seconds later; she came to the still locked door and smiled at me. She was cute, wearing a blue skirt and hoodie, with a wet rose in her hair. She smiled and we walked out together. She kept fumbling with the rose, and I just had to ask.
" What's with the rose?"
She smiled a little. " It was on my art desk. Dunno how it got there, but it's so pretty."
We decided to see MIB 3 at the closest theater. The movie was good and I think that we both enjoyed it. We had lunch at (your favorite restaurant) and the day ended.
As we were walking home, I decided to ask her a question that Sora had told me to ask.
" Willyoubemygirlfriend?" I blurted out quickly. She looked surprised at first, but eventually gave a small nod. She still had that gaping look of bewilderment on her face, so I decided to replace it with a blushing face as you leaned in and pecked her check.
I'm telling you, the look she had on her face was totally worth the slap on the shoulder she just gave me. (LOL, Machoist…).
Ok guys, I am now OFFICIALLY done with filler shit. From the next chapter on is all story time! Eugh, you have no idea how happy this last, crappie chapter makes me. Dam all the stuff before now was all complete SHIT, and it made me happy that like; my worst writing had gotten past the bar set by you viewers. M'kay, Byez!