Hey I just want to say thank you for the comments I hope I get more if people like it I will keep writing I promise . I work two jobs so if I take long on putting up another one don't think I forgot it's just I don't have the time. What I pal on doing is a long story not a few chapters that's why I'm introducing the characters with such detail they'll all be involved and at some points they will be the focus points it just won't be a few characters. There will be lots of things that are unanswered but they will be answered through out the story. We're at the very very very beginning and just a heads up there will be more adult language used and descriptive scenes not in a pervy way but to actually get a real feel from it like if it were really happening. If I take long I'm sorry just bear with me sometimes I don't have time at all because of my two jobs Nd then seeing and being with my girlfriend. Please
Comment anything and everything I welcome all criticism. I do hope you guys really like the way i write and hope it's not boring.