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Chapter 4-revise

Naruto sighed. He had a mind-splitting headache. Because he spent so much time in his minscape, he wasn't there for Tsunade to give the team an A-class mission, causing Sakura to chew him out and Kakashi to shake his head at him in disapproval.

'I expected better of you, naruto.' the words that Kakashi said hurt, only to be replace with anger. That anger was doubled when Tsunade punished him for not being there by making him escort a kid back to the hidden cloud village. Her name was Sekai Saionji. It wouldn't have been so bad if she would just stop talking and complaining. She kept on going on and on about this guy Makoto or something and how Kotonoha is a liar or something or other. It wasn't until she started insulting him and comparing him to Makoto that his anger came back.

'You know, you would be a lot better to be around if you acted more like Makoto. I mean look at you! You'll spend the rest of your life alone! and orange is such a hideous color. And what's with the marks on your cheeks, they look pretty stupid to me. Did you draw them on? You look like an animal, and by your smell, I guess I'm not far from the truth! You should smell like Matoko! He smells like...'

It took a lot of will power not to turn around and leave the girl in the woods to fend for herself. But, if he did that, they he would just get yelled at again. Rubbing the bridge of his nose, naruto closed his eyes.

This wasn't going to continue on.

Focusing, he thought of everything that made him mad and full of rage. He concentrated of the swirling, bubbling anger, allowing it to travel up his body and to his eyes. He heard the girl yell at him for stopping, naruto simply leaned down to her level and opened his eyes.

The girl didn't talk for the rest of the trip.

Making his way through the gates of Konoha, Naruto immediately turned to head for his apartment.

'Duck'

seeing the word in his mind, he complied and leaned back an inch, just to see an tomato whiz by his head and splatter on the wall next to him. Naruto stared at the tomato before turning his head to see an old man at a shop gather more into his arms. Naruto ducked as other tomatoes were thrown, he got up as sound met his ears. Looking around, he noted that a crowed started to appear and surround the two. One of the villagers asked the old man what was wrong.

'He was trying to steal from me.'

The words the old man spoke made everyone gathered to turn and glare at naruto. A sharp pain twisted in his chest. For a brief moment, a vision appeared before his eyes. It came like a flash. The ground they stood on was bloody as all the people glaring at naruto laid dead. Their bodies twisted and mangled, just like the tomatoes that was thrown at him. Guts were poured out and faces were twisted in agony. As soon as he blinked, the vision was gone. Naruto slowly brought his eyes up to meet the ones glaring at him. Anger circled inside him like a whirlpool as he heard the whispering and mummers of those around.

'Do it! Kill them all! Ah to see their blood run, hahahahaha!' utagi's laughter filled naruto's head. But he knew he wouldn't do anything, he couldn't do anything.

Another tomato splattering against the wall brought naruto out of his thoughts. Before anymore could have been flung at him, naruto jumped on the roof tops and ran away as fast as he could. Cursing himself and everything at having to run away like this. He could still hear the talks of the villagers calling him a coward. He saw his comrade's faces in his mind, full of disapproval and laughter. Telling him, asking him, why he was even a ninja, running away from civilians? How worthless. Their cries and taunts filled his head all the way to his apartment. Opening the door, he slammed it shut before gripping his hair and leaning on the wall. He was breathing heavy. He paced around, feeling as though if he stopped moving, his anger would build up more. He curled his hands in a fist as hard as he could, making droplets of blood fall on the floor from his nails. He felt trapped, cornered. Stupid, for acting like this over something so small, something that happened all the time. His mind was racing, he couldn't get the villagers face out of his mind. How easy it was for them to turn on him. How they hated him!

He attacked

Naruto threw the only chair he had, causing it to break into pieces against the wall. Things were tipped over, smashed, thrown. He clawed, clawed, CLAWED! The couch was torn in half, the fridge had its doors torn off. He scratched at the walls leaving behind marks fit for an animal. Because that was what he was! A damn animal! He clutched his head again, forcing in the scream that was treating to tear out of his mouth. Nobody could hear! They would laugh! He growled deeply and destroyed everything!

At the end of his destructing, naruto stood in the middle of the wreckage, painting. He gritted his teeth, he could still feel the UnbearableInadmissibleBurnin g hatred. Running his hand his hair, he leaned against the wall and closed his eyes. Listening to nothing but his breathing. He felt so stupid. Letting this happen, destroying what is his. He felt as though the villagers wanted him to do this. To have a torn down place that no human could live in. he opened his eyes and stared at the ground before pushing himself away from the wall and heading into the bathroom. Stripping himself, he filled the tub with hot water and immediately slid himself in. he didn't bother to turn on the lights, he only focused in the numbing pain that the hot water brought.

The only way to get rid of old pain is new pain.

When the tub was full naruto shut off the faucet. Listening to the sounds around him and absorbing the heat of the water. Feeling it consume his body in a suffocating manner. A flash vision appeared again as he pictured the water being blood. It soon vanished.

Naruto stared at the water almost hypnotized. Just watching it and not moving. In a second, he was gone. Submerged underwater.

Minuted past he was was still like that. He was losing air, but it felt so...right being under water like this. He opened his eyes and stared at the soft blur that was his ceiling.

Black spots were starting to appear.

He turned the hot faucet back on.

Darkness was starting to form.

Naruto pushed himself under deeper and closed his eyes. Feeling the water overwhelm his body.

He relaxed, only for his eyes to snap open as the feeling of water disappeared. And the feel of a cold marble floor appear beneath his hands and knees. Lifting his eyes, he noticed he was in the lounge of the minds. There were nine doors lined up against the wall. Each one leading to a different mind. The one behind him was his own, next to it was gaara's, then Yugito Nii's, Yagura's and so forth. In a circle, and in order, was the jinchuuriki's doors. Most of them were cracked, split and worn, signifying that they were no longer in use. Gaara's had little damage, the only noticeable thing on it was the giant crack in the middle.

Narrowing his eyes a little, naruto turned and started to head into his own door when a pulse surged through the room. He turned his head to the side to see gaara's door shake and roughly slam into the one next to it, disappearing behind it. This happened with the other doors until naruto's was the only one left. The pulse came again, shaking the room. Green smoke appeared on the wall straight across from naruto. The smoke came together and turn solid, creating a shiny green door.

It called out to him.

Naruto slowly walked up to the door, each step bringing the emotions of someone else. Extending a hand, he touched the cold, smooth, wood before laying his forehead on it. The moment his head touched the door, selective memories of the owner filled his mind. Naruto reached out to the owner, telling them of his presents. What he got in return was a vision of a smile and the door opening.

Looking in, all around him seemed like a back and white checkered board setting.

'come in.'

-pov naruto-

I stepped in, feeling my anger coming back to me. This mind, it wants me to be angry. When a glint caught my eye I turned my head to see a rock that showed my own reflection.

I changed.

I was now wearing black pants that hugged my body comfortably, while still allowing free movement. I also had on a long black trench coat with white strips running down my arms and a white star on the back. The coat was open allowing my pale, bare chest to be viewed. My eyes are what caught my attention the most. They were still blue but now it seemed there was a concentric circle pattern surrounding my pupil. I liked it.

My attention was drawn away when I felt the presence of the mind's owner. I set off in search of them, while each step I took brought new information, and new visions.

A girl

Black curly hair

Black dress

White bow

Black leggings

Green eyes

A smile

Skulls

Jealousy

Anger

Dead master.

Dead master, the name of whom I am standing in front of now. Sitting high in a chair with two floating skulls on each side of her, in a crumbling castle. The light of her scythe glinted off my katana.

I see

I was brought here because we both had pent up anger. Anger that we cannot express in reality. She must of sense my anger and guided me here, so we both can let off steam on each other.

I looked into her eyes before nodding my head.

I will do this.

-pov normal-

Dead Master smiled a wicked smile before her two skulls came rushing at naruto. Quickly, naruto drew his katana and slashed at the one closest to him, causing it to crash into the ground. He looked up to see the green eyes of the other skull, before he could do anything it smashed into him. Naruto gritted his teeth before flipping over the skull and allowing it to break through the wall it was aiming for. Naruto turned his head to see Dead Master still smiling and slowly walking toward him.

Feeling energy coursing through him, naruto closed his eyes . When he opened them again a blue flame appeared over his left eye.

Dead Master tilted her head at this before smirking and running towards him with her scythe drawn. The clashed into each other. The skulls came back to help their master as naruto dodge the sharp blade. Naruto ran and brought his sword down ready for a strike, just to have it blocked. Dead Master and naruto looked each other in the eyes before naruto was pushed forward into the air. Dead Master followed and they continued their onslaught.

They traded blows and cuts. Each having their untamed anger fueling their attacks. Making them stronger and deadlier. They danced around each other in graceful movements, breaking through the castle and outside, bounding on rocks that floated mid-air. With one final burst of energy and rage the two collided with each other, only to be thrown back by each others force. Naruto pushed away the rubble he was stuck under and waited for the smoke to clear. When it did he looked up to Dead Master perched on a cliff high above. The stared at each other before she disappeared with a smirk.

'Thank you.'

Naruto nodded his head and closed his eyes.

When he opened them he saw that he was still underwater. Breaking through he gasped quietly for air. Running his head through his hair his eyes flicked down to the floor, water was running out of the tub like a waterfall. With a sigh naruto turned off the faucet and got out. He hisses when a sting caught his attention, looking down at his body he noticed two scares, one on his waist and the other just below his belly button, the same spot Dead Master hit him.

A vision a Dead Master coming towards him filled his mind before vanishing.

Naruto smiled.

He would have to thank Dead Master, he feels really relaxed, now that all that hatred was burned out of his system, for now.

With a sigh he made his way into his room only to stop. There, on top of his bed, lay the same katana he used just seconds ago.

Naruto couldn't help but let out a chuckle.

He had a feeling that wasn't his last visit.

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-break-

this isn't finished, I just wanted to change the original chapter soon.

Ah, so I added some Black Rock Shooter in this. I won't be adding the exact abilities or be following the same story line. You are warned. Thank you for your time.

-Hallowwinds