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"Excuse me?!" Apollo yelled back, I could see Annabeth looking at him with her mouth hanging open, so I hit her shoulder, "we are in love! And this is my daughter!" he said, pointing at Lucy.
"You don't deserve her, bulb-man!"
"I helped her grow up! And who do you think sent this Hades kid to save my daughter? Ha? You brick head!"
"Apollo, Ares," said Chiron calmly, "would please calm down and explain your situation to us?"
"Fine," they said in unison.
"I have a daughter," said Ares," you probably know her, Kristen Evans, " I saw Chiron nod at the name, "and somehow, pretty boy here," he pointed at Apollo, "seduced he-"
"I didn't seduce her!" interrupted Apollo, "I love her! And she loves me too!"
"Wait a second," I said, "you guys mean to tell me, that Lucy here, is your daughter," I looked a Apollo, "and your granddaughter?" I looked at Ares.
"Precisely."
"Indeed."
I looked and saw Annabeth nod in understanding, "So that's why she radiates so much power, she has the blood of two major gods, and three quarters of her blood is godly. Are you sure she even counts as a demigod? I mean she is more of a god then human."
"Do you mean if she is immortal?" asked Chiron, "because my theory is that she will have a longer life span, but I'm not sure about endless."
"Yes," she replied, "I agree."
"So what do we do with her?" I asked, "does she stay here in the Apollo cabin? Or does she go with them to Mount Olympus?"
"I think it is best that she will train here for now," replied Chiron, "Maybe later she could work at Olympus, or even turn into a minor goddess."
Will, who was now standing next to me said, "Don't worry, Dad," he told Apollo, "I will take care of Lucy, make sure she is safe and well trained."
"Thank you, Son," Apollo said, as a smile spread on both of their faces, "I'm sure I can trust you."
"I'm not!" interrupted Ares, "I want this kid to be trained by the finest warrior, not s little healer boy."
"Healing is a profession of the gods, you fool!" Apollo yelled back.
"How about," Annabeth offered, "that Will, and one person from the Ares cabin will be responsible for her?"
"I can agree to that." Said Apollo.
"I don't know, I want Lucy to be a killer beast, maybe we don't need the healer." But then Apollo glared at him so hard that it is a wonder Ares was turned to ash. "Fine ok, I agree. And I choose Clarisse to do it."
Clarisse La Rue, a current friend and an ex- archenemy, senior counselor of the Ares cabin. She was called down and was told what her responsibilities are.
"You are to make sure she is a great warrior, and not just a stupid healer. Understood?" Ares told her.
"Yes, Dad!" she said, beaming with joy and pride.
Will had then taken her to the Apollo cabin, and the bonfire broke off.
Annabeth and I walked toward our cabins. When we got to the place where each had to go to a different direction I kissed her on the cheek and told her goodnight.
"Goodnight, Percy," she said, this time kissing me on the lips, "sweet dreams."
I turned around and walked toward my lonely Poseidon cabin, getting ready for a lonely night.
Today was Saturday, which means I had a day off. I decided to have an early morning visit to my significant other; Annabeth obviously. She is usually up and about way earlier than me because those Athena kids never waste a second without solving some useless problems.
I took a short shower and pulled on a clean orange T and some ripped jeans. I combed my hair and headed out the door. The camp was quite, since it was still pretty early in the morning. I heard some noises down at the Hephaestus cabin; probably building something that will explode later. I passed the Aphrodite cabin and wasn't surprised the windows were dark; those kids were pretty serious about their beauty sleep.
Finally, I got to the Athena cabin. It was built like a modern Greek temple, with grey walls, white decorations, and a huge owl sculpture around the door; sometimes I swear his eyes follow me wherever I go, scowling. I knocked on the door, and a messy haired Malcolm opened the door after a few seconds.
"Hey, Percy," he said, "early today, ha?"
"Yes," I said, "just looking for Annabeth. Can you tell her I'm here?"
"Well, actually," he said, "she has already gone to the arena next to the targets with Will Solace. She said something about healing arrows?"
"Oh," I said, suddenly not so liking Will, "thanks. Have a nice day."
I turned around and ran to the arena, my anger building up. Why does that stupid healer guy from the stupid Apollo cabin, has to be with my girlfriend this early in the morning? I mean, doesn't he have a life? It's like he woke up just to be with her.
When I got to the arena I saw them sitting on one of the benches eating what seemed to be a waffle, or a toast or something. How is that related to healing arrows? I don't know. What I do know, is that they were sitting pretty close, so close that Will could just turn her face and kiss her. Unacceptable.
Once I got closer, I noticed Will was putting his hand on Annabeth's leg. My Annabeth. I sprinted toward them, and before they had the chance to see me, I had already raised my fist in the air and swung it like a rocket straight to Will's face. He fell backwards, almost falling off the bench, from the impact of my blow.
"You stay away from my girlfriend, you asshole!" I screamed at him, my anger rising, and suddenly the nearest water fountain blew up, wetting will and Annabeth who weren't immune to water. I started to raise my hand for another blow before Annabeth stopped me.
"Percy, Stop!" she yelled and jumped in between Will and me, "what the hell are you doing? Have you lost your mind?!"
Will was still so shocked and dazed from the hit he stayed silent. "I was protecting you!" I yelled back, "Can't you see he was trying to get you? To break us apart?"
"What are you talking about?" she said, obviously confused, "Will and I are just friends, and even if he does like me, you have no right to hit him or talk to him like that."
This time Will got up and talked, "Percy you are the bad guy here," he said, and smiled triumphantly when Annabeth wasn't looking, which made even more angry, "we were just taking a break from working on our arrows, "he pointed down at a stack of arrows that looked no special to me, "and we talked, is that so bad? What I can't talk to Annabeth because she is your girlfriend?"
I was so shocked that Annabeth didn't realize his intentions, "You are lying, Will."
"No he isn't, Percy!," Annabeth yelled at him, now with eyes watery, "Now leave, I don't want to see your right now."
I must say I was heartbroken. I had the one person who truly means the world to me.
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