Sorry this isnt a chapter. Im not focusing on this story right now but i want address a guest reviewer who keeps revieweing. Im sure its the same damn person who reviewed the first time because your repeating yourself and YES i deleted your first review! And imma delete your second one as well just because i can. Your the only negative review i have from this story amd like you said it was published months ago and i havent continued only because i focusing on my other stuff. Obviously your bored or something if your going to review on a story that only has two chapters.
And another thing, this story if you hadnt notice is an ALTERNATE UNIVERSE. Therefore i dont need to make Ana how she origianlly is. Why? Because its not original and has already been done in more stories than i care to count and personally i would like Ana with some backbone unlike in the book. She was weak and i didnt like it so i made her different.
And what the hell are you talking about with Christian cheating? That
isnt even relevant to my story.
As for my professors lets see! Oh wait im not a writer, my major is not english or creative writing. Im not publishing stories because its what i want to do with my life. This is for fun, i do this because i enjoy it. Its a small hobby thats it. So dont judge what i write or what i do based on my schooling or education. You dont know me and your just being extremely rude and judgemental. Its people like you who cause others to feel down about there stories and to quit writing. You probably go around doing this all the time, discouraging people because the story isnt to your liking.
Just because you dont have the balls to write a story doesnt mean you need to come on here and bash other peoples stories and ideas. This isnt a review or constructive critism. Your just being a bitch and lack respect for what people are trying to write, using their imagination. If you didnt like it than you should have just stopped reading all together. There was no need for you to review. It wont change anything. I wont be pushed around or discouraged by a rude reviewer who doesnt have the decency to create an account and try to write there own story. It isnt always easy and it takes time and practice for a story to turn out right and right here on this website is a good place to learn because there will be people to respond and actually give some valuable advice.
What you are doing isnt helping. Your not telling me i should fix grammar or that i should do something to make it formulate well. Your just reviewing cause you dont like Anas personality. Well tough nuts. Unlike you i dont like weak submissive girls all the damn time. I love the trilogy but Anas weakness always bothered me so i changed it.
Go find something else better to do with your time than sit here and review on a story that isnt even being written. Thank you!
Please write another review that i will be DELETING!