The correct answer was Crookedjaw/star! Remember how his name was Stormkit in the beginning, but was later changed to Crookedkit because of his jaw? Stormfur's prefix was in honor of him, and his suffix was in honor of Stonefur, his mentor.

Next one! :D


GUESS THE CAT:

This cat was originally born a "drypaw" (one who hates water) and died from diabetes.

Who is it?


STARKIT'S PROPHECY COMMENTARY:

Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln (caln? I thought of a cauldron...Weird)

thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 (yes, that is TOTALLY the reason)

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) (no one really cares, my friend) waz slepping on the mos. (mos...es? She was sleeping on Moses?!)

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. (so she wakes her best friend up from that comfortable slumber just for her personal needs? Geez)

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp. (I didn't even understand that line)

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 (OMSC, Blackstar!11!)

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" (okay, so here's the current story: they saw Blackstar come through the entrance and apparently the entire ShadowClan was attacking. Then Starpaw, who's five times smaller than Blackstar or something and way younger, just pounces on him and defeats him, and the other cats all retreat. Totally possible)

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. (you're a real smart cat, Starpaw)

thnkx and ples no more flams (you know, once you realize that there's a REASON people flame you, you can stop saying that)