The answer was Leopardstar! :D KatieK101, Leafshine, Willowsmoke of ShadowClan and Emily0130 all got it right. Next one! (I couldn't think of any more good ones at the time so an easy (?) one today!)

GUESS THE CAT:

Who was Thornclaw, Brackenfur and Cinderpelt's father?

STARKIT'S PROPHECY COMMENTARY:

Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star (they tran under that one, big star)

OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. (thank you, rainy days, but seriously, calling out people is never the answer) OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know. (oh no, we read it to see how bad it is)

Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars (another chapter 3? The last chapter was chapter 3. Anyways, you don't have to say it twice either)

Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . (cod? Like the fish?)

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!" (I thought she frickin' knew how to fight! Isn't that how she defeated Blackstar?!)

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. (sad or happy, choose one!) "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" (she can fight AND write. An educated warrior) "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."

"Ok." They went to the frost togather (ooh, the frost) and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. (wait, so the ShadowClan cats DIED? DIED?!) "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." (they're gonna learn to dog! Watch and learn, children)

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything!

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. (first, it's spelled bleeding. Second of all…WHAT?!) "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." (what the heck? An apprentice just made her leader bleed and now her leader's saying it's awesome?) "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? (a prophecy can't meow, buddy)

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.,"

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? (THE SCOURG!11!) She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? (no, not at all! Scourge is way better) "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. (kawaii? Oh, so now Firestar's learning Japanese?)

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired. (8 times?! She beat her leader 8 FREAKING TIMES?! At this rate, Starpaw should be the one training Firestar!)

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. (bad kitty, Firestar)

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. (hmm...I don't think I've heard of HoleClan. Have you?)

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there." (being up there means you're gonna be dead, you dingbat)

"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!"

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.

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(lol u like it Jazzy I mead you as kawai as I could(