A/N: This week is the start of my never ending schedule (I will think about posting it on my page) well until the story ends(I also might start another story... depends). So sorry for not updating its just that I didnt have time. Between cathing up on books and watching some movies. I couldn't really write a chapter. If you had to choose between writing or reading The Fault in Our Stars or watch Transformers 4 you tell me you will update? I know I promised every other day. It will start this week! PROMISE... just dont hold me accounted for that.
My votes for who to pair Tris with:
Four:1
Will:0
Uriah:0
Zeke:0
Dont fret you can still vote! Just review your answer. If I implie a pair it is not really the pair but I need something and people and the voting is taking forever... so yeah! If you had any other boys in mind feel free to review.
Disclaimer: I never will own Divergent... so stop asking!:-)
Chapter 3: Not so Bad after all... or so it seems
Tris PoV
Tris was walking down the hall to what she assumed was the administration office. Before she could marvel the beauty of the inside of the Erudite building, the fancy golden door opened. In the doorway stood a figure who looked her age that had navy blue eyes that would have bern pretty if the didn't look jerkish. Her eyes looked him up and down. He was wearing black clothing that almost complimented his nice muscles.
"Ugh newbies!" The boy mumbled under his breath although it was apparent he wanted her to hear what he said.
"Excuse me!" Tris said in a slightly squeaky voice. She really did have to get through that with her father she automatically knows when something terrible is about to happen. It is just a sixth sense. Behind the jerkish dude was about 7 people who were laughing there arse off. For what the world, or Tris will never know.
Tris turned into a ripe tomato as she studied everyone. By the way they carried themselves it was quite obvious that they were popular, or somewhere around that ranking. One of the boys had reddish blondish hair and celery green eyes. He wore pitch black clothes like everyone else but he didn't look natural in them. The girl that was linked on his arm already stating that they are a couple had tannish skin and dark brown hair that stopped right by her sholder blades. She had chocolatey eyes that made you feel all warm inside kind of like hot chocolate on a cokd day. Her personal appearance made Tris she could shop for hours at a time picking out the latest fashions.
The girl on the left to them had long sandy brown hair and brownish eyes. Her hair stopped around mid-back leaving her slightly stunning with her ebony clothes. The boy she was leaning on was slightly taller than her. He had Brown hair, brown eyes, and the brownish complexion like his brother, that was on the other side of him.
Before Tris could analyze some more people of The Gang as she will refer to them know huffed and stalked off. (Or so it seems. Tris is very dramatic in this story) Every person in this building cleared a path for them. Almost as if they were scared of them. She ponders this. *They are trouble stay away from them Tris*, she thought to herself as she entered the slightly dimmed room.
Uriah PoV
That girl gave me the creeps. She kept analyzing us like some crazed Erudite. I mean I know were hot but the way she looked at us was downright deadly. The girl looked pretty new, and she was pretty hot we could probaly set Four. I inwardly smiled as I pulled out my Samsung Galaxy Slll. Everyone but Four who was in the front leading us to the compund (also known as DAUNTLESS) pulled out there phones.
Christina: U guys see that girl?
Will:Uh yeah that look she gave us was a little creepy!
Shaunna: Should we set 4 up with her or naugh
Marlene: No for all we know we might start bullying her
Zeke: She got a point
Christina: But he is always down in the dumps
Me: True but what girl will want to date someone or hang around with people that bullies her?
Shaunna: TRUE! But I swear he is going to be the first guy with 37 cats
Will:That will be a sight
Everyone started cracking up at that. Leaving a very curious Four up in front. Has he every heard of the saying. Curiousity killed the cat!
Four PoV
Ugh that ugly little wench. What was wrong with her? Analyzing us like that. Because of that her life will be like the devil him self took a very special interest in her. Which is kind of true. People say I am the reincarnation of the devil.
My friends behind bursted out in laughter. Being me I started to wonder what was so funny. Then I thought of the line that made everyone wary what they were curious about. Curiousity killed the cat. I do like my life, so I let it go. My loose fitting darker blue than normal denim jeans started to suffocate me. My button down black colored shirt didnt help me at all as I struggled with breathing without being noticeable. *Are they laughing at me?* I thought...
After a few minutes of what it seemed like endless walking we stopped at our school in a school. (Get it? No?) When we got inside I inwardly groaned this was going to be a long day... let alone year.
Christina PoV
The freaky girl that analyzed us was right beside my locker. She wore very baggy grey clothes. She looked like she came from Abnegation. I wouldn't be suprised to be honest. She carried herself like a social outcast. Which is technically Abnegation
She opened up her very plain backpack and started sorting out her locker. Everyone was also staring at my locker that used to be a meeting space for almost everything. Like parties, homework, sleepovers, etc.
I walked up to her. Making sure to put alot of sass in my step. My golden hoops were swaying to the click clack my heels made as I headed over to the girl slowly but steadily. Everyone held there breath not even a small pin dropped, but the girl didn't notice.
"Excuse me! This is my little groups meeting place, so you kind of need to leave!" I say very slow like, in case she was an idiot.
"Oh! I am so sorry. My name is Tris by the way." She said.
"I don't care. Could you just please leave!" I say in exasperation. This girl clearly does not take a hint...
A/N Was this good? I sure do hope so it took 30 minutes to write and about another 30 to edit until there was little to no mistakes. Please review and don't forget to vote. It is kind of hard to make a story without a pairing. Just saying. If you have ideas you want to share feel free. I will give you all the credit. Thanks for taking the tine to read my story... I just realized my longest chapter EVER. Next chapter I will tell you some fanfics I find very good. Again thanks for reading.
~devilspawnINTHEHOUSE
