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Chapter 2

After choosing my job I look up again to see Tobias's eyes wide "I guess we'll be working together" he says in a shocked voice "why are you surprised by this of course I'd wanna with the guy with four fears." "I love you Tris." "I love too." "I love you three." "I love you Four." Right before we kiss Lynn looks at us and calls the next name. I grab my suitcase and walk out the door. I reach Tobias apartment and walk in it's bigger than I thought its has a large living room two bathrooms a kitchen a dining area and a guest room. I see where Tobias is room is because it's messier than the other room also it's bigger with a picture of him and Zeke on his bedside table. I start unpacking my things which isn't much i've got a dress and a couple shirts and pants. It doesn't take me to long to unpack so I go to the living room and play one of Tobias's shooting games on his television. I only seen a television once or twice, we didn't have them in abnegation homes because they were seen as impractical. Around an hour later Tobias walks in and I turn off the television and leans against the doorway and says "Peter got the leadership job." I snarl at the thought of him leading dauntless probably the same feeling Tobias got when Eric got the leadership job. "What did Cristina get?" I say eager to hear an answer "Tattoo artist."I can see Cristina being a tattoo artist she's a great artist. Tobias walk over to the couch and sits next to me. He starts stroking my cheek he carefully kisses the hawks on my collar bone one by one and he takes of his shirt. I kiss of if the faction symbols on his back and then kiss his lips and he kisses back. He pulls away and holds my hand tightly in his and puts the other hand on my waist. He kisses my again and I kiss him back we lay down on the couch still kissing and I whisper "I love you Tobias Eaton." and he whispers "I love you too Beatrice Prior." We continue kissing as he slides his hand under the hem of my shirt slowly making it's way upward. I pull back and put my head on his chest and I start to fall asleep. Tobias whispers to me "I love you Beatrice Prior, always have always will." and he carries me to the bed and tucks me in. I wake up the next morning with my head on Tobias's still sleeping body I stare at him for a second he's so perfect, so strong, so amazing. I stand up and get dressed in a black tank top, black shorts and black combat boots. I go to the kitchen and make the only things I know how to make scrambled eggs, plain oatmeal, and banana bread. I've never actually had banana bread before me and my mom would always bake it for the factionless. By the time i'm done cooking Tobias has woken up "I didn't know you could cook." Tobias says smirking "you learn something new everyday" I say handing him a piece of banana bread. We sit side by side eating breakfast I wonder how life will be with Tobias. With the man of my dreams. "Oh I say checking my watch, I promised Christina i'd go shopping with her." "Really, shopping?" "I know it's just Cristina loves shopping." I say "Fine do you want to meet up for lunch, it will be our first date." "Sorry, I can't I promised Cristina that i'd have lunch with her and Will." Tobias frowns and I kiss him on the forehead before he can say anything I leave.