Y/N = Your Name

F/B/P = Favourite Background Pony

P/P/N = Pony Persona Name

F/F = Favourite Flower

F/S = Favourite Song

F/A = Favourite Animal (not pony or horse)

F/M/6/P = Favourite Main Six Pony (not Fluttershy)


At Tirek's cave, Tirek and Sunset Shimmer were asleep when Tirek suddenly got up. Causing Sunset to wake up too. She yawned, 'What's wrong Fireball?'

'How many times do I have to tell you, the name's Lord Tirek!' He growled, leaving Sunset Simmer to get up.

'Sorry, Lord Tirek, what's wrong?'

'Y/N escaped!'

'What? How?'

'I don't know, we don't even have a key to unlock it!'

'True. But, she escaped because she was a human. You see, like Discord, humans have slim bodies that allow them to slip though things. And since cages in Equestria have large gaps that ponies can't fit though, Y/N easily slipped though.'

Tirek rubbed his forehead as he left the cave. 'I'm off to find her, so, look after the cave. Mainly get the cage and poison ready!' He growled before leaving the cave.

Sunset Shimmer did as she was told, mainly because she loved Tirek. She never had the chance to say her feeling for him because he always thought about you, not her. But, what kept going was your death. Because, the thought of Discord being sad made Tirek smile, which made Sunset Shimmer smile. Plus, this could give her a chance for Tirek to love her.


Meanwhile, Discord, Fluttershy, Princess Candance and F/B/P were at a clearing by a cliff when snoring was heard behind Discord. 'Come on guys! We need to save Y/N!'

'But Discord...' Fluttershy spoke up. 'We're tired, maybe we should stop...'

'WHAT!? But then, Y/N will be in great danger.' Fluttershy's puppy eyes made Discord sigh. 'Fine, but you MUST help me ask Y/N to be girlfriend.'

Discord used his magic to make three tents, one for himself, one for Candance and the other one was for Fluttershy and F/B/P to share. Discord then made a fire by the cliff and logs to be used for seats appear. Candance woke up then Discord gently moved his riders off his back. F/B/P had just now woken up.

'Woah! How long has this been here?' She/He asked, getting up to the smell of roasted marshmallows. 'OH BOY! MARSHMALLOWS!' And she/he jumped straight into the magical, floating marshmallows before their tail got caught on fire. They jumped up and began to run about until Discord made a chocolate rain cloud appear to rain on F/B/P to stop the fire.

But by then, Fluttershy and Candance had began to laugh. Even F/B/P thought it was a bit funny as all three laughed. Discord sighed, a tear falling down his cheek. He remembered your sweet laughter, oh how he wished you could have seen that. Fluttershy managed to calm everyone down as they had their dinner.

At the end, F/B/P and Candance went into their tents, leaving Fluttershy and Discord alone. 'So, will you now help me?' Discord asked, his body shaking with fear.

'Yes, how would you like me to help?'

'Well, could you pretend to be Y/N as her pony persona?'

'Why don't you turn me into her pony persona?'

'Ok...' Discord used his magic to make a F/F appear in his paw as Fluttershy turned into your pony persona, P/P/N. 'Listen, P/P/N, I mean, Y/N. These past tea days we had together have been my most happy days of my life. I and I want to make them even more special. Y/N, will you be my special somepony with me?' Discord's neck became itchy. 'I mean, will you be my... OH FLUTTERSHY, I CAN'T DO IT!' Discord eyes filled with tears as he fell down, Fluttershy P/P/N helping him up.

'Look, if you are nervous, why don't you sing?' And Fluttershy left, Discord sadness causing Fluttershy to return back to normal.

So, with hope in his heart, he began to sing F/S to calm him down. And maybe, even help you find him.


Down below, you were walking though the woods, cold and hopeless. You thought that Discord try and scare you like how he always did when you were on your own. That's when you heard it, his voice; singing F/S. You gasped, putting your hands on your mouth. You began to sing along with him. You felt happy, for the first time in a while. But...

'Discord! It's late! Go to sleep!' F/B/P growled before Discord's voice stopped and he went back in his tent.

'DISCORD, NO! I AM RIGHT HERE!' Tars uncontrollably ran down your cheeks as you fell down to the ground. 'Discord, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no...'

'What's wrong? Are you ok?' A squeaky little voice asked, you opened your eyes to see a little blue pony with pink eyes, long eyelashes, a black coat with a white rim, pink short hair and large see though wings. You knew him.

'Seabreeze? How can you understand me?' You asked, cupping your hands to have him land on your palm.

'Well, I don't know how you can understand me?'

'I think that because we're not from Equestria, I'm from a human world and you're from a breeze world, so we must have a foreign language that we understand.'

'I guess, but why are you here? What's wrong with your world?'

'Well, I'm Discord's best friend. And, I was meant to be hanging out with him now. But that dumb Sunset Shimmer and Tirek had to come in and ruin everything!'

Just then, a blood curdling voice boomed though the woods. 'I...HEARD...THAT!' It was Tirek himself.

'Nuts!' You cry, running carefully to was a large bush where you hid in to try and hide from Tirek. 'This won't work, this won't work, this won't work, this won't work.' You whispered, you were then shocked to see Tirek just going straight past you. 'Wow, this guy's an idiot...'

Seabreeze stared in fright. 'He's the one who kidnapped you? He seems large.'

'Yeah, he seems larger than when I saw him. He must have stolen some magic.'

'HE CAN DO THAT!?'

'Yes, steal any kind of magic in Equestria. I'm not sure, but I think he can steal Breezie magic...'

'WHAT!?'

'I know! He's evil and dangerous!'

Suddenly, Seabreeze floated over to your knee where he fell asleep. 'I'll help you get back to Discord...'

'Really? Thanks Seabreeze.'

'No problem...' And you finally fell asleep when you felt as if a soft lion paw petted our cheek.

'Night Discord, sleep well.'

But Discord didn't sleep well...


He had nightmares all though the night. Most of them having Tirek either killing you or Discord. He didn't wake up until F/B/P poured water on his head. His sudden shock wrage upset rage caused him to shoot a spell at F/B/P turning her/him into a F/A.

Just then, Princess Candance walked in with Fluttershy and a plate of pancakes for Discord. 'Good morning Discord, did you sleep...WHAT THE HAY!?' Candance exclaimed when she saw F/B/P. 'DISCORD, TURN F/B/P BACK!' Discord woke up much better as he returned F/B/P to normal.

'Sorry, F/B/P.' He sighed, bowing his head down.

F/B/P frowned. 'First you interrupt me in the middle of the night, then you drench me in chocolate rain and now you've just turned me into a F/A!'

'I SAID I WAS SORRY CELESTIA!'

Fluttershy sighed, floating over to her friend. 'You dreamt about Y/N, didn't you?'

'Yeah...'

F/B/P was puzzled. 'Who's Y/N?' She/He asked Candance. 'I thought that we were saving P/P/N.'

'Well, Y/N and P/P/N are the same pony, or in this case, same person.' Candance answered.

'Oh, that explains nothing.'

'I'll tell you later...' Candance sighed, pushing F/B/P outside.

Fluttershy looked at her wings for a bit. 'I know, why don't you give Y/N wings fossil she can fly to us or any of the other groups?'

Discord ears went up with happiness. 'Flutters, that's a great idea!' He cheered, hugging Fluttershy as he then clicked the hair on his tail to give you wings.

'Will it work?'

'Of course! What's the worst that can happen?' Discord chuckled, nervously. 'I hope she's safe...' He whispered.


By the time the sun was up, Sunset Shimmer had finished the cleaning when Tirek came in with a sleeping pony in his arms. 'Hello Sunset Shimmer.'

'Hi Fire... Lord Tirek.' Sunset corrected before bowing down to Tirek. 'So, have you got her?'

'No, but I have something better.' He chuckled, revealing the pony to be F/M/6/P. 'Y/N's best friend...' Just then, F/M/6/P woke up.

She groaned before looking around. 'What happened?' She gasped when she saw the area. 'Where am I?' Then she saw Sunset Shimmer and Tirek. 'You...'

'Ah, F/M/6/P, how nice it is to have a guest here... My last one ran off.'

'Of course she did, no one will like a monster like you!'

'Ok, you may complain a bout the decor, my looks or my dumb helper.' Sunset Shimmer's heart crushed. 'But, say I'm a monster and I'll do what I did again...'

'You wouldn't dare...'

'I will...' And Tirek began using his magic to suck F/M/6/P's magic. Sunset Shimmer running away, crying. Her crush called her "dumb". Even the people from Canterlot High or even Celestia called her that after what she did. She quickly grabbed a piece of paper from her pillow and covered herself up, still crying. The paper had an image of herself and Tirek hugging, with love hearts around them.

'Oh Tirek, why don't you love me like I do for you...' And her eyes closed as for the first time in her life, she felt destroyed.


Sorry for the whole third chapter thing, I was dumb and didn't save it! But, here it is.

First, I made another reference of something I love. Get it and COOKIES FOR EVERYPONY!

Second, yes two sad things in the last bit. Your favourite from the main six loses their magic and Sunset Shimmer goes though a depression.

Finally, Discord's spell on you doesn't work as well. Why? How? You must find out... :3