Hi guys! This idea just randomly popped into my head, and I thought I could make it into a story! I know this first chapter is short and probably really sucky, but I wanted to try it out and see what you thought, so.. I hope you like...


I swore. I swore that this wouldn't happen. I swore I wouldn't hurt him. I swore.

I watched as he walked away. I had broken it. We all knew what happened next. I walked slowly out of the abandoned subway, wishing I could just die.

I walked down the street, my feet silent on the sidewalk. The darkness seemed oddly comforting. I kept walking, not really paying attention to where I was going, the dark houses all looked the same. I just kept walking.

Suddenly, a stabbing pain shot up my arm to my chest. I cried out and instantly grabbed my arm. The pain came and went in a flash. I rubbed my arm but kept walking. I had only walked a little farther when it happened again. This time more painful. I felt a single tear fall down my cheek. Maybe I was crying over Magnus, or maybe it was the pain. I didn't really care. I got up, not having noticed I had fallen, and continued, not wanting to, but I had no choice.

"Excuse me, sir?" A voice behind me asked. I turned around slowly, my arm sore. Behind me stood a young boy, probably about 10 or 11. He wore clothing you would probably wear in the 1800. Odd.

"Hello, what can I help you with?" I tried sounding normal, but pain laced my tone. I closed my eyes, taking a deep breath. When the boy didn't answer, I opened my eyes. He was gone.

Confused and slightly scared, I turned and started walking again, this time faster. I could see light up ahead, but there were no shadows or anything. I checked my phone, it was only 7:15, and it's usually really busy. But, what if it was a different place?

I walked towards the light when I heard the same voice behind me, "No. Don't go over there. There are bad people, people who won't accept someone like you." I froze. Turning slowly, I looked into the darkness. Nothing. Pain shot up my arm again. But this time it didn't fade as fast, this time the pain was worse.

It felt like someone was cutting open my arm, lighting it on fire and breaking my arm bones all at once. My vision started going fuzzy, the pain was blinding. I think I was screaming, I couldn't tell over the pounding of my heartbeat in my ears. I just wanted to die. Make it go away.

I guess I got my wish. I didn't feel pain anymore. I didn't feel anything.


Hi again! I want to know if you guys want me to continue this story or no, because it all depends on what you guys want. So, if you want me to continue just PM me or Review.

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