The doctor and Amy pond stumbled into the shop, as they entered a bell rang somewhere in the distance, before either of them could express any opinions about the shop someone came out from the back, their face completely obscured by the many boxes they were carrying in their arms "be with you in a moment" said a muffled, cheery voice from behind the boxes, Amy looked at the doctor but he wasn't beside her, she looked around and saw him studying a bright purple box with concentration, Amy rolled her eyes and walked upto the counter where a young, lanky red haired wizard had appeared "Hello, Welcome to Weasleys wizard wheezes, can I help you?"
Amy grinned, "yeah, have you got any magic?" the man gave her a puzzled look but before he could ask what on earth she was talking about the doctor pushed Amy aside "Sorry about her, she's new. Now, down to business we need somewhere to put our box! I'm the doctor, This is Amy, Ginger and Scottish. What can we call y-" but The Doctor didn't finish his question, He appeared to have noticed something outside and had gone to look himself, circling the same spot, groping the air with his hands searching for something not there "Sorry, he does this" explained Amy to the man behind the counter "it's alright, ginger and Scottish."He replied with a grin "Oi! Shut up! You're ginger too!" she laughed.
"Doctor where's the TARDIS?" asked Amy in a slow voice, she had also come outside, after the Doctor didn't return for several minutes, Amy had learned the shopkeeper was called Fred. Fred Didn't know what to make of the doctor and Amy, odd he decided described them the best. "That's impossible... But how. It was here! Right here" exclaimed the doctor in disbelief, to nobody in particular. The pair searched the street for about 10 minutes while Fred stood, watching them with a bemused look on his face, not offering to help simply because he didn't have a clue what to look for. The Doctor and Amy returned to the shop with a defeated look on their faces. "Nothing! It's all very peculiar, the only thing we found out of the ordinary was this" The Doctor held up a small metal object, it glinted in the sunlight, a small, emerald green badge with a long snake engraved on the front, on the bottom in tiny print read 'SLYTHERIN'
AUTHORS NOTE; it was bad wasn't it? I didn't know how to write it! Sorry ugh ok please review i like reviews!
ps: I'm abit addicted to commas apologies.