The writing quality is fine, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken if you use any review to guide this story so far:Entries not allowed:

5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.Here are four solutions to make this a rule-complaint story:
1. Please make sure you accept requests via PM only.
2. You can create a forum where you place the requests and people can submit and continue to interact as the story evolves.
3. Please delete and repost while utilizing either Solutions #1 or #2. This is to remove the 'evidence' of your story being interactive to the admins. However, the more reviews you already have, the more reluctant you will be to do this. So do not push this one.
4. Take it to a forum where the characters can interact and pretty much role play to their hearts content.
Extra note: Just be aware that some reviewers are unaware, so chances are a bunch will still review with requests despite the way you get submissions. You might need to be advised of it.Try to write one-shots around the letters that are bent sent to you via PM.From: catspats31, Member of Eliminator (a group somewhat similar to Critics United)

Dear catspats31 (do I have to add the stuff at the back? No, right?),

Well, Carrot did say we'd get something like this eventually. We never thought it would be this soon though.

Wait, isn't this the same group that guy from the AtLA Awards came from? You know, that Mr. Perfectionist guy?

Yeah, I think it is. Well then, since we all know each other more or less that makes things easier. We did state in the last column that PMed letters will be answered first, as demonstrated above with the first three letters, although we left yours for last since yours was kind of a last-minute addition to today's column. However, people without accounts on this site can't PM or submit forum entries, which is why we still left the review option open.

Unfortunately, your group does have a certain degree of effectiveness, otherwise the AtLA Awards wouldn't have been deleted. By the way, you're definitely more polite than that Mr. Perfectionist. Thanks for the compliment on our writing, I was worried Sokka's replies would affect the quality of the column.

Hey! Anyway folks, you've all seen the letter above, so if you don't want to see this column deleted as well then you'll just have to take the time to log into your account and PM your letters. Or get your own account, for those of you who don't have one. Won't be too much trouble.

We hope this thing won't stop you from writing in though, because frankly I've never had so much fun since the time my metalbending school was almost set on fire.

Don't ask about it, please. And about the whole 'no Q&A' rule, well, we're just fictional characters helping other people who may or may not be fictional as well solve their problems and answer their questions. So, no problem, eh?

Love, Sokka and Toph