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Disclaimer: If I had rights to Divergent, Tris wouldn't be dead.
Tris' POV
"Listen up! This is the Pit!" Four announces. "W-" another candor boy starts. I look at him, raising my eyebrows. "You got something to say candor?" I question. "I, um," he stammers. "No." He finishes quietly. I smirk. "Good. Four, continue." He clears his throat. "You will learn to love the Pit. All leisure activities will happen here, such as eating-" I zone out, surveying the initiates. The Abnegation is a boy named Tim, who I vaguely recognize. One of the erudites is still wearing those stupid glasses. I want to yell at her to take them off. And, the Amity, Ari, reminds me of myself. Small, but she has a tough look in her eyes. "-And this, is the Chasm." Four says. It's my turn. "It reminds us that there is a fine line between bravery and idiocy. A jump of of this ledge will end your life." I hope I sound strong. Even though I told Tobias to let me say this part, my heart broke. Al. "My fault. My fault." echoes in my head. Four, sensing this, takes over. "It has happened before, and it will happen again! You have been warned!" He shouts.
Ari's POV
The Pit. It was massive. The Dauntless were so loud, so rowdy,but you could hear the absolute freedom in their voices. And the Chasm. 'It has happened before, and it will happen again.' What was it that would make the Dauntless suicide? Four is talking again. "There are two stages to Dauntless initiation. The first, purely physical. The second, mental. At the end of both, people will get cut. "Cut? What do you mean by cut?" This candor boy, I think his name is Carter, asks. Six levels her hawk-like gaze on him. "It means, candor, that if you aren't Dauntless enough, your factionless." She smirks. Dang! That is harsh! "You will all have rankings, and if you aren't in the top ten at the end of initiation, you're out." Four says, smirking too. "Are they, enjoying this?" The erudite girl I met met on the train murmured to me. I study the faces of my two instructors. "Definitely." I whisper back. "What did you rank, Four?" An erudite girl asks flirtatiously. He pointedly ignored her. "Ooooo, rejected!" I say to my erudite friend. I think her name was Carla, no Cana.(winks at Fairy Tail fans). She laughs softly. "Yeah, that'll take Meredith down a few pegs. The flirty erudite, I assume her name is Meredith, looks slightly shocked. She had probably never been rejected by any guy before. We walked into the dorm. It had many beds scattered around it. The Abnegation boy, Tim, asked," Are these the boys or the girls dorms?" Ever so quiet and politely. "Yeech!" Abnegation make me sick." Cana breathed. "Well, he's Dauntless now. Cut him some slack!" I say back. "Fine. I guess the kid can't help not ever showing emotion." She concedes. A small smile cracks across my face. I might have just found my dauntless best friend.
Six answers Tim's question with a smirk on her face."Both." "What! We have co-ed dorms?" Meredith, except she didn't say co-ed, she used some long erudite word that I only understood after Cana explained it. Six looks bemusedly at her. She says,"Sorry, I don't speak erudite." O.K. That was funny. "If you like this, you'll love the bathrooms." Four murmurs, sharing a sort of smile with Six. I don't know if it can be counted as a smile. As far as I can see, our trainers seen unable to full on smile.
"I suggest you get settled in. We expect you to be at the training room at 8:00 am sharp." Four says, and with that, the two of them turned and left the room.