Author Note:
Hey all, I decided that I'm going to take the story down and rewrite the whole thing. It was never suppose to climax that fast so I think I know exactly how to change it. It would really help if my readers gave me ideas PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM or COMMENT! Then I can't just say its my story but everybody's. So please PM me! Maybe… I'm not a good writer at all. I'm surprised I pass college English with an A-. I'm not really good with details and I try to learn from these other authors but I don't think it's working well. There is also a possibility that I may not finish it… as long as people keep giving me ideas it will continue. In my head it works out fine but on paper its like blah. So yeah…