Authors note
Dear readers,
As you know I had 15 written chapters up for I run to you but as of recently I have decided I'm not happy with it I will re-write it in 3rd person more detail and with my original plan for it for Edward to confess later in the story but maybe chapter 6 or 7 but longer chapters this time over 500 words at all times I just want to make this story full filling to you guys and satisfying I will also be re doing the first chapter and reposting it possibly today as I know what I want to write and can put more into it but ill try not to overdo it and overly word it so I will let you guys in on my plan.
first off as you guys know it starts off with Bella working as before then Bella reading Edwards message at the end but I will put more into their first meeting/date it seemed lacking in emotion and detail the first time I wrote it and seemed over to quickly they need a real conversation then they would make up for it but Edward being scared he would leave well not leave hide out in his house a while at least a whole chapter ect just like before they would fight but make up later in the same chapter the following chapter more problems and such till I feel it's a good time for Edward to confess himself then there would be some making up and I would do that trip for Edwards birthday it's a little more romantic and I'd go from there with one more bit of a drama a chapter that draws everything together and brings a little closure even tho Edward may be hurt for a little bit and there would be some support from family and Bella to Edward but mainly alone time for them to really talk.
whos on board with me?
love,
Edwardsluckylover
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