Chapter 1
A/N: Thank you to everyone who reviewed! I decided it was time to "fix" all of the chapters because they were pretty bad. So here is Chapter 1: mark two!
Thanks go to:
Jaysong (Guest) thank you for being the first to review and thanks for the encouraging words!
Willowdream of Forestclan: Thank you for everything!
A warm New-leaf breeze blew though Lakeclan; small rays of morning sun broke thought the walls of the warrior's den. It was prefect; every cat was looking forward to waking up to the warm sun and lots of prey. The morning patrol was getting called, every other cat was either sleeping or missing out on some much needed sleep.
There had been three dogs let out and every clan was worried. They attacked Mountainclan and nearly destroyed their camp. Lakeclan and the other clans were still on edge and they hoped they had gone. Twolegs lived dangerously close to Forestclan and in Greenleaf some even come into Lakeclan, bringing dogs with them. Mistheart had been killed because of a dog; she was protecting the nursery when it just killed her in one swipe.
Stormfeather was sleeping soundly next to Oakfur her best friend until…
"Ooff". She woke up and saw Silverpaw her apprentice laying on her.
" What have I told you about waking me up"
"I just wanted to train early," said her apprentice,
"Alright" said Stormfeather. She got up and left the den, closely followed by Silverpaw.
The two cats padded into the training hollow. It was an open clearing next to one of the rivers that connected to the main lake. It was covered in sandy grass, which in some parts made for a soft landing. Being so close to a river was easy for learning water combat and hunting.
"Now you're almost ready to take your final test but your battle moves could do with a bit of work"
"Ok what do your want me to do"
"How about a quiz?" asked Stormfeather
"Ok".
"Now pretend I'm a large opponent, what move would you use?" she asked.
"Leap and Hold," she answered.
" Good job but what about if you want to give a final blow to a weakened opponent?"
"Killing bite?"
"No try again" the apprentices tail drooped a little.
"Umm… an Upright lock?"
" Yes, follow up question, what does it make you vulnerable to?"
"I know this…belly rake," she answered.
"Yes" the apprentice's face lit up.
Stormfeather continued to ask questions until she though Silverpaw was done.
" Hey Silverpaw do you want to do some practice?"
"Yes please!" she yelled.
" This brings me back to your first day of being my apprentice".
….Flashback….
"Stormfeather will be Silverpaw's mentor" called Rainstar.
"I got up and went up to Silverpaw I still can't believe I got an apprentice so quickly!"
" Stormfeather please pass all your knowledge down to Silverpaw"
"I will Rainstar."
We awkwardly touched noses and I could fell how nervous Silverpaw was she was almost shaking!
Silverpaw ran to her family with Pumapaw: her brother. Oakfur walked over to me and we said how cool it was having a brother and sister as our apprentices.
After the ceremony was over Silverpaw ran over to me and we talked a bit. " So would you like me to take you on the tour of our territory now?"
"Of course!" We went around the territory showing all of the places she needs to know, like the training hollow.
"So here is Lakeclan's territory in the south-west, on our right is Forestclan, they are tough fighters fiercely protective of their border. North of us is Meadowclan, they are extremely fast, you would never catch them. Finally northeast of us is Mountainclan they are skilled at fighting on cliffs and wouldn't hesitate to push you off.
We got back a couple of hours later and we were exhausted, I told Silverpaw to take anything of the fresh kill pile, she left to eat with Pumapaw so I ate with Oakfur and my siblings.
…. End of Flashback….
"We should be heading back now I have some things to do"
"Ok" she said sounding a little disappointed. So they headed back and Silverpaw went to see her brother and Stormfeather went to eat with some elders. She gathered round and was listening to their stories but she saw the medicine cat was staring her. She went over and asked what was wrong. " Nothing…why?" replied Ivytail.
" You were staring at me"
"Ok, Stormfeather, why do you think your siblings were named Pinekit and Silverkit".
"Silverkit because of her fur and Pinekit because of a pine tree that almost fell on camp" she answered with a hint of annoyance.
"And you?"
"Because of the storm I was born in" she shot back. "Why are you asking me this?"
"I was testing you, no need to worry" she smiled
"I've herd of this test" she smiled back secretly lying.
"Bye Stormfeather"
"Bye Ivytail" and the she-cats left to get on with their lives. "Now where is Oakfur?" Stormfeather wondered.
A/N: What was the test about? Was Ivytail really telling the truth? Where is Oakfur? Was this version better than the last? Please like/favourite and review. At the end of each chapter there will be random fact about this story or me, so here it is:
Pumapaw and Silverpaw are from a Minecraft warrior cats server, I got full permission to use them, their creator is ninja_creeper57. Bye!