Author's note!
Okay, I have been very busy lately and I have sort of hit a wall with my writing.
For a few days now, I have realized how crap my writing is. I mean, it's grammatically correct and such, but so tremendously out of character that it makes me a bit ill.
So that is why, I call on YOU, faithful readers, to help me "make it work".
If you would be so kind, perhaps you could drop me a line on which parts need fixing and maybe give suggestions on how to fix it? I want to make this a polished piece, not just some drabble like "Civilizing Kartik".
So I have been pretty busy with school. I'm raising a yearling (baby horsie) 3 days a week and it's a lot of fun. His name is Zidane (yes, after the head-butting soccer player), and he's 10 months old, 950 pounds, and a very light golden dun. And he loves me. And I LURVE him. If I were to have a child, and for some reason it was a horse, that would be him. He's even blonde like me. But I am sad, because he hurt his leg and he is limping.
But that has nothing to do with my fanfiction, it is just me gushing about my BABY!!!
So because you all totally rock, I thought I'd give you a little list of mood music for the fic. This is what I listen to when I write, some of them for the music, some for the lyrics:
Coldplay – Green EyesColdplay – Trouble
The Fray – How to
Save a Life
Gwen Stefani – The
Real Thing
Jamiroquai – Seven
Days in Sunny June (gee I wonder why)
Jamiroquai – Everyday
Jamiroquai –
Starchild
Jamiroquai –
Butterfly
Justin Timberlake –
Future Sex/Love Sound
Justin Timberlake –
Love Stoned
Justin Timberlake –
What Goes Around/Comes Around
Madonna – Crazy for
You
Madonna – Cherish
Madonna – Take a Bow
Madonna – Get
Together
Madonna – Future
Lovers
Madonna – Secret
Nelly Furtado – Say
it Right
Radiohead – High and
Dry
Radiohead – Street
Spirit (Fade Out)
Snow Patrol – Chasing
Cars (honestly, the lyrics are PERFECT for Kartik and Gemma)
Dirty Dancing
Soundtrack – Hungry Eyes
Berlin – Take My
Breath Away
So, in closing, HELP ME! Please?
And the next chapter should be up in the next week. Once I try to put the insane Ooc-ness in check.
Love and diet coke,
LunaEquus