Well…. (Waiting for mobs to come.) Sorry for not updating in like… SINCE JANUARY? Anyways, sorry about that guys. I'll try to post updates for my fanfiction but I'm just that lazy. Can you believe it? So yeah…. Let's continue I guess. I need to catch up on my fanfiction, dammit. By the way, SUCK IT HIGH FEVER AND DAMN SURGERY! Both of you guys can kiss my ass and also I have decided to start writing more original in this story due to it pissing some people off. Also can you guys decide if I should add other tailed beasts or whatever. Ok, on with the story crap!
''Yes, sir.'' Said Kyuubi.
So as they were starting their foursome, they realized something. Kyuubi's tail could be useful in their sexual activity.. Kyuubi quickly realized this and used 3/9 of her tails in the sex. Two of Kyuubi's tail was used to stroke Sasuke's and Master Naruto's manhood. The two Masters moan in pleasure that was being performed by Naruto's bitch. Kyuubi, as she doesn't want Anko to feel left out , used one of her tails and rubbed her pussy. She moaned as well with the two other Masters.
After reaching their orgasm, Sasuke and Naruto got ready to fuck Kyuubi and Anko. After positioning their dicks, they got ready and BOOM! They went straight inside of their wet walls. They keep thrusting and thrusting and thrusting until both pussies got sore from so much pain. After 5 minutes of thrusting , they were close to orgasm and continued just harder and faster. They spilled all their seed into the pussy. Sasuke and Naruto were panting loudly while Anko and Kyuubi were unsatisfied. Even so the two masters didn't give a fuck if they were satisfied or not and left them to be.
Anko and Kyuubi were devastated as they didn't get to reach their climax and was left to fend for themselves. The two girls just continued to rub their pussy until they reached their climax while Naruto and Sasuke were changing. As the masters were changing, they were having a quick chat.
''Hey, Sasuke! Are you planning on getting more slaves?'' said Naruto.
''No, dobe. Why?'' said the emo kid.
''No apparent reason. I was just planning on getting a new slave.'' Said the blonde kid.
''Ok. Cool story,bro.'' said Sasuke.
''Hmmphh.'' Said Naruto.
''Hey,Hey,Hey! Don't get all pissy with me. Just remember, you will forever be weaker than me.'' Said Sasuke.
''Sure, Sas-Gay!'' Said Naruto.
''Hmmph… Fishcake…'' said Sasuke and gave Naruto a light punch.
''Hey! That hurt.'' Said Naruto and he too gave Sasuke a light punch.
''Anyways. I gotta go.'' Said Sasuke.
''Ok. See ya later, Sas-Gay. Come on, Kyuubi. You had your fun. Now is your turn to rest.'' Ordered Naruto.
Sasuke left the apartment with Anko on a leash. Naruto dispelled his Bijuu Clone and wondered.. 'I wonder if I can make Kyuubi into an actual person. Not a clone but an actual living person… Hmm… That might take some research.''
Naruto too left his apartment due to the fact that he needed to do some research. He went to the 5th Hokage (Which is Tsunade) and asked her ''Hey, Baa-Chan! Did you see Ero-Sennin?''
Tsunade said'' No, brat. Why do you need Jiraiya?''
''I need him to teach me a specific jutsu.'' Said Naruto.
''Ok. Lemme just take out the crystal ball and try to find him.'' Said Tsunade as she taken out the crystal ball. '' Ok. I found him. Looks like he's at….. ''
BOOM! Lol. Sorry about the cliffhanger. Don't worry. I will tell you guys where Jiraiya was in the next chapter. Anyway I am gonna answer some review in the section below. This shall be done when there are enough reviews. Let's begin shall we? ( By the way, I choose the best reviews and not crap written by 5 year olds.)
(Review Answering )
''Well... your prose needs work, you might want to practice your character development a bit, I can't say I really agree with the idea that Anko is Sasuke's slave... I think you might wish to try fleshing out this particular alternate universe to explain WHY Konoha has a slave market in the first place... Plus, it might be best if you refrained from using such terms as "Sas-gay" unless a character in the fic is specifically saying it, because (and I mean no offence by this) it reads like it's been written by a twelve-year-old.
Plus I looked for the fic you said you were inspired by... no Breaking of Kyuubi fic exists; the closest match I could find on Google was my own fic Breaking the Kitsune.
Overall... not bad, not good. I'll keep an eye out.'' – Leonineus
Well, Leonineus. Yeah, I do know I need to practice my character development. I am trying to work on that. I don't really know how to explain why Konoha has a slave market….. I guess you can say '' My Story, My Rules'' (Yes. It is a real rule!) Oh and sorry for putting Breaking Of Kyuubi. I changed that cause I screwed it up a little. Sorry! (BTW I hold Leonineus as my idol for this story!)
ah well, thanks for the warning, hope you feel better soon – Lord Xantos A. Fowl
Thanks, Xantos!
Interesting story might i suggest in a future chapter naruto gets 3 slaves from the market and sasUKE wants the pink haired slave and says he will trade anko for the pink haired girl while naruto can keep the blonde and black-haired girls. Just a suggestion – ardad55
Hm…. Good idea…. I might just do that!
Anyway, that's about all I can write by now. I hope you liked that chapter. I hope you guys can help me by reviewing and tell me if you guys want anything or need to fix anything in this FanFic. Also tell me, has my writing improved yet? Well… I guess it's time to end this FanFic.
See Ya, Guys!