[Part 1 - Rebirth of a Fox] === I will update this page with anything pertinent.
{[Author's Note]} === {Close Character Images On My Profile Page}
I apologize if I published Part 1 a little too fast
It's just that I wrote so much, and it was nearly complete
So I don't get why I couldn't share, hehe, especially since it will continue
Part 2 is where I really wanted to write, and I wanted to get Part 1 completely
Sorry for the double, quadruple, and sextuple updates, maybe I should stop?
Actually, I think people skipped chapters when I did a multi-update….
Or was the naming the cause? I have no real way of knowing :(
But so long as you enjoy them, there are no qualms in my mind
And if you don't, well… I'm sorry, but I like writing what I want to. :)
And Yes Gaara's little collar gets removed soon… It is a major plot device.
If you have any ideas for scenes to be added into the story, you are more than welcome to pm me anything. If it doesn't fit into the story itself, I will probably add them in a side story. Little one-shots or something.
Thank you for reading!
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[Uzumaki Naruna Full-Grown Description]
Kurama's Essence Reshaped her Body with her Best Inherent Traits
16 Years old - 155cm Height - 105cm Tail Length - C-Cup Breasts
Skinny Waist, Thin Sleek Arms and Legs
Nimble Hands and Feet, Thin Fingers, Great Dexterity
Little fat except where it counts, providing an amazing figure
Sensitive Soft Skin, Very Flexible Smooth Body.
Only fur on her body is on Head, Ears, and Tail
Her Hair itself had thinned to about the same thickness as actual fur, and increased in fullness
Her Fur, Uzumaki Red with Highlights of various Oranges ranging between her natural Red and Kurama's Orange, tipped in her original Golden-Blonde. Only the longest strands of her fur-hair turn golden, mimicking her tails and ears.
Fuzzy Red Fox Sizes as Adults- (Small to Large)
45-90cm(18-35in) Body length
30-55.5cm(12-22in) Tail length = 2/3rd
75-146cm(30-57in) Full body length
Naruna Tails - Based on Age - First Time Fox Forms
One Tail - 30cm - Palm Size
Two Tail - 60cm - Small Fox
Naruna Tails - Based on Age - 12yo
One Tail - Hand / Shoulder sized 40cm
Two Tail - Adolescent Fox 75cm
Three Tail - Wolf Sized
Naruna Tails - Based on Age - 16yo Full Grown
One Tail - Hand / Shoulder Sized 50cm
Two - Adult Fox Sized - 90cm
Three - Alpha Wolf
Four - Large Tiger
Five - 2x Tiger
Six - 4x Tiger
Seven - Salamander Summon
Eight - Half Kurama Size - Akane
Nine - Three Quarters of Kurama's Size - Boss Size - Asatsuyu - Gamabunta - Katsuyu - Manda
Yuki - 7 Tailed Elder - pure white - snow white eyes - Alpha wolf sized - female
Asatsuyu - 6 tailed boss - ¾ large as gamabunta - black with white tips - male
Akane - 5 tailed red with black orange tips - Half Kurama's Size - female
Shiro - 4 tailed white with black tips - Alpha wolf sized - male
Kyouta - twin-tailed fox, blood-red with black tips - fox sized - male
{[Explanations]} = I kind of ramble here about my own thought process.
Creating her into a fox itself does not make this a Mary Sue in my opinion.
It is a change of existence itself. And she has to learn to keep hold of it.
Absorbing the chakra itself, and gaining the Yang half limits does not either.
Chakra does not equate to strength, power, or ability - Think of it as a magic meter.
Having the magic does not make you powerful. Learning how to use it does.
True, her chakra could potentially obliterate everything around her.
That doesn't make her invincible, or even better than those around her though.
And her estimations of herself, rather her words themselves are not law.
This is in first person, but that does not make her word law.
She makes mistakes, she doesn't always get things right, and she overlooks issues.
Kakashi was chuunin at age 6, Itachi was ANBU at 11, and Captain at 13. They were both actually more skilled than her at her age either ages. If only by a little. They were true geniuses. Having speed or techniques does not make one truly skilled.
She has regeneration of the highest accord. She could literally tear her muscles apart, only to heal seconds later, and gain speed and power at enormous speeds if she wanted to. I limited that by her body, size, mass, and gender. Females are naturally weaker, so even if she thinks she can keep up with Lee in speed, she can't. He is stronger, and older. This also helps her with the Kage-Bunshin - no matter how many clones she has doing difficult work, her mind won't crash upon memory absorption.
Her own opinions does not equate to fact or truth. Sometimes she will think something that might prove to be false. Even if I give her jounin level speeds, Kakashi is still easily faster. What I have put in there are estimations of herself in her own opinion based on what she sees. Yuugao is jounin by all rights, yet she isn't half as fast as Kakashi or Gai.
Along with all of this, her unique Kimono is specially crafted for protection and weight. She uses this slightly as training, but mostly for defensive tactics, and non-lethal attacks. But the weight is definitely heavy, and slows her down by extreme levels. Her entire outfit may weigh as much as one of Lee's leg weights. Of course, since it's covering her whole body, she doesn't quite feel the effects the same way, but it is definitely a felt effect. So while she may be just below Lee's true speed if she wore something light, she is only just enough above in speed to beat Neji without much damage.
She mostly uses centrifugal force in her attacks, spinning her weighted clothes to keep her sleeves extended, add extra force into attacks, keep them off balance with the odd flowing motions that dance from foot to hand, flipping sideways, up and down, twisting around. Truly it is a beautiful dancing of attacks.
I mentioned that pretty much all her clones were working on the finer control, so she doesn't KILL her opponents. She is against death if at all possible. If she doesn't fine tune her skills, she would put so much into a technique it wouldn't just kill everyone around her, but herself as well. Having a full bijuudama blow up in your face would hurt… So she limits herself to what wont kill, and it makes her much weaker. As such she works HARD on her skills. ALL skills. She practically spends every day experimenting with the tiniest bits of her skills to make them perfect, and even then she has trouble
Lee and Neji train hours upon hours daily. Lee far more so than Neji. But neji works on his style more than physical skills. Naruna has the ability to do both. Kage-Bunshin take care of the details while she works on the physical aspects among other things. So while she couldn't actually match Lee in speed, or Neji in style, if she combines both, she could probably take either one on.
And they are only genin to chuunin level skills, though they are either Clan Children or work exceptionally hard. Clan children practically have a cheat. Imagine if Shikamaru had
trained as hard as Lee. He could Kagemane anyone with a purely simple punch and release, then keep his distance. They have so much potential, yet they limit themselves by only working in their clan jutsu. Naruna has the capability to do it all.
The only thing I really give her is sealing, something she actually puts years into with a dozen clones at a time. I had added the Uzumaki Sealing Method in there for her skill set. Basically she could use seals like both of her parents, and make them appear with simple hand-seals. For all of this, I have given her Uzumaki Mito's archives along with what Uzumaki Kushina brought with her, and what they both designed themselves. Then there is what was recovered from Uzu - though there was a lot, it wasn't much considering it was a village. The Kage-Bunshin technique was added to the scroll once Hiruzen learned of her merger with Kurama. He knew she would have the chakra for it, and possibly find a use.
Also Naruto actually got his wind chakra fine-tuned in a week or two. I had her working with a dozen or so clones on each one for months or years. And in the latest chapters, I still don't give her the control to work them as necessary. She had to learn from Jiraiya why. Despite working with the Rasengan, it wasn't actually a control practice. It was more of a concentration practice. Building up to two Rasengans, one in each hand, was preparation for being able to add nature into a single one. She had worked on this for years as well...
And even then, she develops her own style in the end. A medium ranged technique based on weaponized seals. And I have barely even scratched the surface of that.
I only intended Rasengan itself as a control technique, something that wasn't actually what she thought it was, and she will practically never use it. Even the next step up is another control technique to learn my true purpose for her - sub-elemental manipulations - despite her failure to realize the truth about it. This was something that I have made exceptionally hard for her, which is why the Rasenshuriken was so important to learn to her, and she focused on that. She will probably use variations of the Rasengan, but they are her own altered versions.
In my story, with finer control of two or more elements, you can create sub-elements. Something I actually suspect possible in the original as well... Too few people could actually manipulate the elements with just a slap of their hands like Hashirama. They all used hand seals. So if you expand on the talent enough, then combining might just be possible. I explain her theories in the story a bit.
Honestly, the only thing I have given her was an extreme talent in sealing. This was caused by both the ability to use clones, and her reincarnation - which altered her childlike brain to be able to handle her memories, giving her extreme memorization skills.
She actually worked hard for each of her skills.. That scroll the Hokage gave her was meant to be given as a Jounin when he told her of her parentage... He knew she had the chakra for what was inside now though, which is why he gave her the scroll anyways, including . He is the 'professor' after all. Even if he makes false assumptions sometimes hehe.
For shifting, her body instantly metabolizes anything in her that wouldn't fit a shift in sizes. So her stomach would instantly metabolize a full stomach if she shifts into her one-tailed form.
As for her tails - Kurama was born with nine tails. Yet he wasn't born with his full power, at least I don't believe so. He had a full fox body though, and was several times larger than a human.
Naruna doesn't have the size to compensate, so her tails act as the limiters, rather than that they define power. So basically, she is growing power-wise at a normal rate - for a Bijuu that is... and she will gain her full power when her body fully matures, or matures to full height anyways. She will forever be 16 years in the looks department sadly.
Then there is the fact that a Bijuu literally has thousands of times more Chakra than a normal human. Kurama himself has so much that he can contend with five of his brothers combined, and that was only half his power. He truly has a reason to be able to boast of being the greatest Bijuu. And she pretty much eats that power.
So her reserves of chakra are going to be extremely large, no matter her age. Her 'gaining power' is negligible in such a circumstance.
I will reiterate something concerning this. Power does not equate to could be the strongest man alive, yet a simple stab would could kill Chakra does not mean she is strong. It does not give her skill. The Kyuubi was sealed into a child - truly the greatest representation of this saying.
The only two things that are Mary Sue are her sealing and her immortality - the latter of which could be considered a curse as well. And the former was worked for, even if she was given the material to learn from. Her mother had to learn from somewhere, she learned it in Konoha after all.
The only thing I may have done overly was her capturing Zabuza. She was much slower than him, but her agility, flexibility, and strange motions threw the man off, along with her numbers to try and keep him off of each other. He had a little trouble at first, only because of that. Then he started understanding her motions, and taking her clones out became easy after that.
Her capture was successful because of her distraction, setup, distance away from him forming the barrier, and his exhaustion from Kakashi and her clones causing slight carelessness about non-threatening motions. Her clones could have been putting attacking with an element, or really anything. It was safer not to approach a clone, and it got him caught. Honestly, sealing was the reason Uzumaki were so feared, and it just shows.
She has a natural submissive nature for multiple reasons.
Kurama has an evil dominant personality. He is represented by hate and malevolence.
Naruna has a loving, kind, personality. She is represented by life itself. The opposite.
She absorbed the purified version of Kurama's chakra, his personality no longer tainting it, and is naturally releasing her Yang as an aura, giving her an imbalance of extra Yin, in essence causing a feminine personality, of which instinctual submissiveness is prominent.
Eventually, Naruna will gain strength. She has become an immortal kitsune, giving her a naturally stronger body, massive and potent chakras, among other things. The only beings stronger than her are the true Bijuu, and even then, that's only the density of their chakras. She probably has chakra on par to the 6 or 7 tails considering Yang Kurama's chakra amount in the manga. But could you really imagine a Bijuu strength female as a dominant partner? Once she gets to full strength, she could very well crush any untrained mate...
As such a strong being, her body had reacting towards this issue forcibly relaxing and weakening her body. Considering her strength, the possibility of her accidentally harming her mating partner is high. So as a another protection her body will naturally submit to any male when she goes into heat. Her body will also naturally shift towards the easiest form for her potential mate, if it becomes a distinct possibility. With everything added together, she becomes a natural submissive, though she can resist if she really wants to, as seen with the fox attempt, even with her body working against her. And so long as she doesn't let herself get enraptured by a mates scent and stuff, her body is able to resist completely, full strength. Basically, she wont get raped like that...
But her submissiveness to Gaara is majorly instinctual. A collar around the neck has various meanings to humans, greatest of which is ownership. Especially since her mind is from our world, where we enforce that feature on dogs constantly. And he is practically choking her, or threatening it at the very least, every time she shows even a small defiance.
Probably the worst, but well-seen example is an abused dog being beaten. If the dog see's a raised hand, no matter what it's going to do, the dog will naturally shy away scared. She is in a much less abusive, yet similar relationship. She gets her collar tightened if she shows defiance, and choked if she continues until she gives in or face passing out. And with her new body, she is a very instinctual being, something I was trying to stress. She will naturally gravitate towards those who are kind and give off a good aura - Yuugao in this story for instance.
Besides, she has to have weaknesses… And this is one of only her three or so.
Also, to Shukaku she smelled like a female Kurama, and he HATES kurama because of the tail he knew he couldn't kill her, so he decided to humiliate her for her connection to Kurama. Shukaku used advanced earth manipulation to form the metal out of his chakra, then magnet release to form the collar, with his personal seal branded onto it - what was used against madara by naruto.
Also, there were several reasons why she couldn't remove it. Her chakra is less dense than any pure Bujuu. Sure hers is almost on par, but it's not. probably 2.5x denser than a human? Kurama's was 3x. So even when she put her claws up to it, she couldn't cut it. Then factor in it's elemental release. Lightning is strong against earth, but weak against wind, and it's magnetized anyways... But a combination release is stronger than normal releases. So she couldn't cut it, or force it off with lesser elements. She might be able to melt it with painful lava or something… Then there's the fact her chakra flows over anything attached to her like clothing.
Her heat cycle is a mixture of the human period and a foxes natural cycle, with slight changes. She has about a week of heat, about two weeks of possibility. basically her hormones start to rise, she ovulates and quickly starts releasing a scent, a couple days later she heats up during the day as her hormones start to spike, and a week later it has died down enough and a day or so after it's gone and she is safe
[Something Funny]
She is the daughter of four different males, and three different females.
Her original parents in her first life. Her second parents in her second life. Her third set of parents as an Asura reincarnation. And her rebirth into a Pseudo-Bijuu, with Kurama as her fourth father. Four mothers if you count her adoptive mother. XD
Confusing? Confounding? Hilarious? hehe…
{[Q&A]} === I'll try and update this when there is something to answer
{Why didn't you remove Anko's seal?}
I mentioned the reason with Sasuke's seal. It's unstable, and she couldn't pull it apart without repercussions directly. Nor did she have the seal design to work with. Sure she could see part of the seal, but most of it is compressed into itself, leaving her without the capability to help without potentially killing Anko.
{Shippuuden abilities pre-shippuuden?}
She has the tools available. Having a training instructor available to actually point out her flaws as they show. She has knowledge Naruto never had. She studied the important aspects while Naruto ran off to prank. Then her shadow clones practiced while she trained in styles Naruto never received. If Naruto had an inheritance, he most likely would have received it when he learned of his parents. And if Pein hadn't blown away Konoha, it is likely he would have actually received it. Among other reasons.
{Why have her just learning and learning, where or when will even half of it be used?}
The first twelve years of her life are quite boring. But they are the perfect time to learn, and plenty of time to do it. No matter what, she would have somehow found Kage-Bunshin, even if Hiruzen hadn't added it to the scroll after she absorbed the foxes essence and gained his chakra. Probably from Kakashi. So for at least six years, she was practicing with a couple dozen bunshin doing various things. Compare this to Naruto's running around having fun, and you have a steady skill increase, even more so than prominent clan children.
Some of it is for advancing her own skills in preparation for other areas. Others are for the sake of knowledge itself. The rest may or may not be used, but she would like to at least have a range in her skillsets. Focusing on one type of technique puts a girl at a disadvantage. Ino and her mind switch for example. But really, she just wanted to figure out her own style, and work towards that goal. An adaptable style that she can use in a variety of circumstances.
{Her clothing was made from sage abilities, yet it was torn?}
She was pushed through ground and multiple buildings over kilometers of distance through Konoha all the way up to the walls with unrecorded force. There would be enough pressure to tear apart or through nearly anything. She was crushed, munched, chewed, flattened, and any manner of conceivable injuries. An arm was torn off with a leg, the other was practically bone, and her other arm was shredded just as much. Multiple punctures through her body, and a pipe through her spine. - Water can splash off soft skin, yet at speed can cut steel.
{Why is she so overpowered?}
I changed her very existence. That will naturally give her chakras and the abilities of the fox. Basically she became a purified form of Kurama. That does not equate to power though. The only real thing that grants her is the Bijuudama, which is slow to form, and easy to stop in creation.
The only other thing I truly gave her were seals. She was given everything that was recovered from the Uzumaki, and worked with a dozen clones on it daily for years. As for Kage-Bunshin, she would have found a way to get the skill no matter what, even if it wasn't handed to her, she would have just pestered Kakashi or something. She put most of her work into maintaining control of her being, so she could actually use skills without them blowing up in her face. Something she learned when forming her rasengans, and blowing a holes in the wall with her rasengans.
The rest was on elemental manipulation, which with Kage-Bunshin Naruto learned super quick. And I still haven't given her the control to use them properly in the way I wish to in the future.
There are many other things, and yes, I probably made it so she could easily kill people by accident, though not the strong ones. Basically, I designed her backwards, she is trying not to kill people, and because of that, she was made weak, attempting to create styles that don't use her massive chakra reserves to just blow everything up around her.
So really, the potential to be overpowered is there, but she does not tap into it. It's more like she has the ability to destroy what's around her, basically mass scale destruction. With little actual ability to do it on small scale without killing - which is her true goal and put every effort into.
There is just too much to this to fully explain myself properly .;