HELLO!
peeps :)
Thank yo peeps (I like that word XD)
For reviewing! ill answer to the 2 reviews now! :P
SilverWarriorWolf
Thanks for reviewing on my story! :P The thing about the text being mushed together, usually i read fanfics on 3ds or ds and the text is not very jumbled on that, so i thought i did'nt need to push enter every couple of scentences :) Also, I suck at spelling, so... yeah.
It is my worst subject in school. Also, my computer won't have the red line under it, so i can correct it, wich is annoying :(
(Also I don't think i would word anything that way, you did a good job with explaining how you liked the story! ;D... and everything, for that matter XD )
CookieCutter1108 Thanks for reviewing! As i already said, I suck at spelling. I'll try to keep everthing spelled correctly :)
So, a new thing i just thought of, I will tell you some interesting events that happened in my life today! :P
At school, my brother got a certificate for being caring or something, and he got a Chik-fil-a coupon! I got a award for getting a 3.00 or 3.70 GPA And got a thing signed by someone in the goverment... But no Coupon! D: I LOOOOVVVEEEE Chic-fil-a
Not that it is interesting... but whatever
Anyway, to the story!
OH YEAH! Over the weekend im gonna work on a really long chapter and post it on Monday, so its...
SUPER LONG CHAPTER MONDAY!
(Not yet... its on monday!)
Starper's POV
I followed Punchy through the door, and I saw him waiting at the door. "What was that about?" I asked. He started to laugh. "Are you okay?" I asked, worried about his laughter.
"You should have seen the look on your face!" and he continued laughing. I did not know i made a face... what did it look like? Was it stupid? "Ummm... what were you staring at?" I asked. "Nothing. I just wanted you to get worried... Actualy, I don't know...Tee hee..." "So it was a prank sort of?" I answered for him. "Yes..." He answered. "Ok... Do you want to see the other shops... or just leave?" "Oh, I do!" He said, shaking his head franticly. "Then stop being a little prankster" I said, then playfully punched him in the arm.
We went to the Shop, with Reese and Cyrus. It looked like a Fancy woodshed, with half of it blue, and the other half Pink. Inside, we entered the pink part of the building. The walls were pink, as expected, and the celing was about 12 feet above us. There were blue tables with items on them. I noticed a watering can, a net, and a boloon was a blue door in the back.
"Well, welcome to Retail!" Reese exclamied as she noticed us."Hello Starper! Who's this?" She asked, examining Punchy. "Well," I said, "He is moving into town today!" She walked over to punchy, almost grazing him with her pink alpaca fur. "Well, you better get going! Or Nook's might close early! He did that once before..." She continued. "I guess she's right" Punchy said, going to the door, but then Kicks Came into the door, with 2 animal cubs coming through the door with him. "Are you don' awright, sir?" The polite Skunk said as he came through the door. "I-i'm doing alright." Answered Punchy.
"Why do you have children with you?" I asked, looking at said children. "Im babysittin' Miss Sable did'nt have enough time to take care of em' tonight" He said , then pointed at the child that was a brown deer, with a completly red shirt on. The fawn looked about 4 or so. "That's Ritzi,"
Then he pointed at the little yellow owl. It had yellow around its brown eyes. It wore a completly Green shirt. He looked about 4 and a half. "This onr is named Albert" Kicks contenuied. "Okay, it was nice to meet you!" I said to them. "It was a pleasure to meet you, tooooooo!" They said, together, and it was adorable.
"Let's go to the Nook's home place then!" Punchy exclamied. "Okay!" I said, and we headed out the door. It took us about 7 seconds to get to the door of Nooks homes. It was a white building, with a brown door. We went inside, and saw Tom himself greet us. "Welcome, I heard of the newcomer to the town, hm?" He said, saying Hmm as he always does.
" Yes," I said, and Tom Nook interuppted us, "I got a vacant house for you, Punchy, yes?" "Ok!" Punchy replied. Tom Nook lead us to a house- or what should be a house- because all there was there is Planks rotting. "Oh my, this is bad, yes?" He said in shock. "Well, we can rebuild it in no-time, hmmm. I just need 30,000 bells, yes?" He stated. "Okay..." Punchy replied, and took out the bells to hand to Tom Nook.
"Splendid, yes? We'll start right away!" said Nook, before going back to get some tools to build a house or something. While we were waiting, we took a walk for a hour or so. We decided to check on his place, and it was already done! After Punchy got over his shock of how fast his house was built, he ran off to get some furniture. I decided to give him my Wii U, since I already have one... yes, i'm rich.
He invited me inside, and we played mario kart double dash together for a while...
YAY! I Finnaly Typed it all!
I could have not done it without you guys commenting!
Don't forget, ANYONE to review! Or follow! or FAV!
I got a question:
DO you think that it was really just a joke, or Punchy was acctually worried/frighten by something?
BYE!
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