Authors Note:
Oh My God…! This is so bad…! XD Looking back at this… wow. I mean I know I'm not a great writer now, but wow… XD Compared to this… I could have sworn that I thought it was written better than this…
I am honestly wondering if I should consider trying to do something with this at all… I know I have personally read stories that are written far worse than this but this is still pretty bad. And I've only started re-reading the start of it! I think to try and fix this at all; I would honestly need a beta. This is something I've never done before, because I don't really know how it works to find a beta that is willing to help you.
In the mean time I'm going to slowly read this and also see if I possibly do have a better copy somewhere else… One can hope. XD And if I get a good enough response then we'll see what I do with this old story.
