Hola hola ! Proud to present the last chapter of this short story, people asked more but I think that this conclueds pretty much well the whole thing. Of course, I will think about about what could happen next - and certainly if you ask me with all your powerfull desire ^^
By the way, I'm sorry for the wait. I know you're waiting for this chapter and can only answer with this: obligations from work :D but I hope you'll enjoy the end of the drive, there is a salty lemon here so if you want to skip it, feel free but you'd mess seomthing !
I guess that's all, my answer to your great reviews are right after the end of this chapter :P Enjoy reading !
EXCITER
Chapter 4 : Before eventually messing around
They were oddly looking up in the blue sky. Night had fallen and the sun was now hidden far far away. No more of its rays could be seen. The two guys didn't know how to proceed, specially Sanji, divided between two solutions: fly away as fast as he could, or… maybe… maybe he could try to... let it go and...
But that was not possible!
"So… you're not gay. But that excites you, am I right?"
"The hell I'm gay! And about you, moss-head? I thought you were damn straight!" The blond replied with anger.
"Never told you that. I don't know myself, it happened, that's all…"
"That's weird."
Zoro let out a strange whisper:
"I suppose you turned me gay…"
"Is that even possible?" Sanji moved his head away, slightly flushed with the blood.
"It must be then." Zorro ended while closing his door. "And now I'm completely fine with it." He touched the right cheek of Sanji. "It's… it's kind of natural with you."
Sanji, red like a tomato sauce, managed to escape from the grip:
"Well um… Not for me. Not at all. Oh my gosh…I'm so boned..."
Zoro was putting his left hand on the blond's crotch now.
"Just shut up and enjoy being my guy. Maybe you'll never experience that later." He paused. "And after all... I know you need some help down here."
Sanji grimaced and dried his forehead.
"No thank you." He was going back to the car, but stopped after some thinking. "I… I can't do that."
"Why?" Zoro took Sanji by his hand.
The blond turned to him and suddenly lost all his patience, shouting at him:
"I'm a woman's man, just stop being so brutal about my ass and get over it! If you want me, well I'm sorry! Maybe its full moon and you've got some kind of pheromones acting weird or something, maybe the exams made you over-excited and you just want to butt-rape the first guy that comes across you but I'm not into this! Or maybe you usually fuck the people you travel with. But then you chose the wrong person tonight! Alright?"
Zoro's body melted. He calmly let go Sanji's hand, then slowly got back to the car, leading the way.
"Hey… you can talk to me. I was angry about you being so damn insistent, you can understand that."
"Hum…" Zoro simply mumbled.
"Come on… you know I was uptset."
Zoro closed his eyes:
"Have some sleep and stop bothering me with you pity."
Sanji felt something strange in the voice of his comrade. He felt a kind of sadness he was not used to.
"I'm sorry…"
"No you're not…"
"It was a bad idea to drive me. No one can be happy to drive me…" Sanji sighed. "No one can enjoy my presence after all… You were too nice to me, since the very first second."
Zoro opened his eyes and carefully look at him:
"You're wrong. All the way wrong."
Sanji tensed.
"I never drive people to their places. That's not my type. In fact, it was the first time I was doing this. And also the first one… I was talking to someone else from the college other than… Nami."
Sanji opened his eyes wide.
"You mentioned I wanted to rape all the people who entered in my car but that's not true. If Nami proposed us this drive, it was because… because she told me about you."
"Wait… How?"
"She told me that you were someone interesting. That you were someone with merit. She told me how much you were lonely for several years, with a kind of bad cloud over your head. Focused on his work, about to be one of the best students of the college. You're smart. That's for sure. Now I understand what she said about you. I… I just wanted to meet you." Zoro gulped down. "But… maybe I'm not worth it after all. That's maybe cynical but I thought that I could find some company with you. I thought… weird people as us could have a talk… just for one night."
Sanji stopped everything.
He even stop breathing.
And then…
"Wow! This is Amazing! We found that the alien spaceship on the main street was in fact a special car that was made for the gay pride next week! People are totally eased now and the traffic will soon turn normal again. What a strange event!"
"In fact the gay pride char was a bit odd according to our specialists, people could imagine that it was a starship, the night helped those wrong thoughts. Anyway Carl, don't forget that 'soon' means at least 4 hours, so don't be too happy about the news if you're still in a shitty car, waiting the end of the mess."
"Christine, I think we should say good night to the people and get some sleep, after all we have great places to do so. Nice beds covered with tender sheets and cotton."
"That's a great idea Carl, let's go sleeping while those people lose their time and mind. Good night everyone."
"And don't forget to drink orange juice!" The man said.
"Fuck!" Sanji said, while turning off the radio. "It broke all the mood."
Sanji seemed to regret what he had just said… or maybe… maybe he was just shy about it. The future cook somewhat blushed and thought Zoro had noticed because he blushed too.
"What mood?" While he was saying this, Zoro was inching closer to him.
"Well…"
Before Sanji knew it, Zoro tackled him, safely, onto the seat and he pushed it all the way backward. Now the car seemed like a huge bed, there was some space, not a lot of course, but enough to be on the blond and kissing him deep. They had their hands all over, caressing their bodies, discovering the intimacy of each other. Zoro eventually took off Sanji's pants (not without some protesting groans) and lowered his brief boxers. The green head instantly laid eyes on his dick.
"No… you can't be doing this…"
"I want it…"
Without stopping his caresses, Zoro got on his knees and put Sanji's cock into his mouth. Once his lips were around the dick, the erection was full at ever stroke he made. Sanji let out a quiet moan, like if all was kind of natural now, that the breach of friendship was broken… Or maybe that there was no bridge… Maybe they were made for that. Zoro was progressing louder and louder as Sanji got closer to orgasm. He put his hands on Zoro's head and trying to make him stop:
"Just… no. I'm gonna…"
Zoro immediately stopped. They kissed for a minute, it was salty and quite exciting, for both of them… It went really esay for Zoro to conduce the sensual dance with Sanji, he knew what he was doing. The cook was so scared he could feel his heart pounding and his mouth drying.
"I… I wanted to do this for a long time with somebody." Sanji let out in a sigh of relief. "But... It's too much right now. Just... slow down ok ? It's new for me. All that gay stuff."
"There's no more gay stuff... A body is body. A mouth is a mouth... We know what to do and right now I want you, and you want me. That's all."
"Gh..." Sanji let out a soft shout under the powerfull hands of the green-head.
Then Zoro smirked:
"I knew it. You can't lie to me blond cook… I felt your hand on my skin, and your eyes too. You wanted me, badly."
"It's because…" Sanji started playing with Zoro's nipples through his white jacket. "You have such a strange skin… and smooth."
beware [SHORT LEMON] beware
Sanji's POV
As he went down he bit on my stomach. It gave me chills. He put back my cock in his mouth and I just closed my eyes and tried to hold on. I knew I wouldn't last, and it was to this day the best blow job I've ever had (it was the first after all).
It couldn't have been more than a couple of minutes before I exploded in his mouth. I remember hearing him take a deep breath through his nose while he sucked every last bit of me dry.
I was so turned on and also afraid of what was going on I didn't want to stop. I pulled him up and immediately fell to my knees.
I pulled out his cock and stared at it. It was uncut and so much bigger than mine. I didn't know what to think. I stroked it in my hand, shyly, feeling how right and wrong all this was. Smelling this strange thing that was intoxicating my nose and spirit. It didn't have any name, or definition, it was simply a bliss in my mind. The events of the day didn't have any importance right now. I forgot the traffic problems, the tests, the results, my family, Nami and her silly plans, I was just grabbing Zoro's thing, and it was so thrilling suddenly, nothing else mattered.
The meaty shafts was unlike anything I had felt before. And I could see the juices as I pulled back the foreskin. I looked up at him and then leaned. It was so strange to me but it felt so sexy. At first I didn't know what to do with my hands.
"You do it really well blond-head..."
I held his shafts while I sucked the head, then plays with his balls, before gripping hard on both his ass cheeks and forcing his cock into my mouth.
"Gh... you're over-skilled for me." Zoro said, victim of a few spasms.
It felt so good, and I could feel his body tense up as a new bitter taste came into my mouth. It took me a moment to realize what it was, I swallowed a little but I couldn't take it all. Zoro's cum fell out of my mouth all over his dick and onto the car's floor. I shot up and we kissed for a moment.
He fell asleep in my arms and I hugged him during all the night.
I had his beautiful pale skin all over mine, his heart decelerating as the minutes passed away. I was felling something better that all the heavens could never give me. A coat of mystery sill enveloped us, specially the green-haired guy. I didn't understand a lot of things and… all the questions (plus our sexy games) eventually lead me to a world of hot dreams.
OOOO
8 am came pretty fast. He woke me up with a comment about my hair:
"You've got some jizz on it."
Then we began searching frantically for something to clean the mess we made. We used a shirt we found in a basket in his car. We were both so nervous after that, but also really tired. I needed my coffee so bad, just to clear my mouth and fix the ideas in my tiny hazed mind.
"I… That was… strange."
Zoro stopped here for a moment, staring at me.
"But great…"
It seemed like a question somehow. He wanted me to answer. But the only thing I could say was:
"Yeah."
Everything went really fast and awkward after that. We didn't talk much. I just remember telling him that during the drive:
"Listen Zoro… I don't know what to say about last night… but I just wanted to tell you… that you're really cute."
He laughed so hard at that.
No one had ever told him he was cute, like NO ONE.
"I've just achieved the American dream… I guess I converted a straight man!" He casually said while laughing.
Zoro pulled up to my block, we got out of the steamy car, he gave me a hug and began to say his goodbyes. Then, I suggested he could stay the night if he needed to. He declined but asked me that:
"What about giving me your phone number?"
"Hm… Well I've got a pen but nothing to write on…" I was searching in my school things until Zoro tapped on my shoulder.
He revealed his belly and casually said:
"I've got the paper you're looking for."
LA FIN
OOOO
Epilogue of the story
It is told that if you mess up with a person you just met, some events of the future will reconnect you.
It is also told that those events can also be things… persons like Nami… or even…
Skin.
Scientists agree that the pheromones that the skin relies in the air could explain a lot of live stories and sexual attractions and that perfumes could be a substitute.
If you feel attracted to someone, think twice… and ask yourself if you could be attracted because of his or her skin.
Because the skin is the perfect EXCITER.
First of all, thanks a lot to :
Fhia, HappyMe-O,Lawli-chan, Mishikuni Mayu, MonkeyDLexie, Mr.O-San, Nuelisca, Shizuka Taiyou, moonlightclock, nadabs9510, tdllap1
and then I answer to
HappyMe-O :
Yes, I had some problems with the internet and the 3rd chapter was not complete and some parts were not good. I also put some signs that time is going on here and there, thanks for the remark ;) Hope you enjoyed this 4th chapter !
Nuelisca :
Don't blame yourself for not posting any review, I understand that. There's nothing to be afraid of though, I really appreciated yours even if its simple ;)Yeah, Zoro is quite OCC sometimes, but I wondered how he would be if he had been living now, in 2015... I assume he would be like that but that's just an hypothesis. Si tu es française, alors je continue juste dans notre langue pour la dernière partie ^^ : en anglais, on aime beaucoup mettre LA FIN au lieu de FIN, c'est une sorte de croisement entre les langues, on voit beaucoup cette façon d'écrire dans les petits films ou les séries américaine, ça fait classe ;) Anyway, bye bye au revoir (tu noteras que je suis français aussi ^^)
I'll of course answer to future reviews, here, on this chapter at the end, so feel free to post them and see later below, I answer rather quickly on a usual day.
Thanks a lot for yout attention, your ideas ect, I loves writting this fic, bye :P
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