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So I first inspected the female of the group. She was fairly good-looking except for the fact that she had a huge billboard brow! Also whenever she talked it sounded like someone was squeezing 1 million tiny chipmunks, god I swear my ears weren't bleeding from the kunai they were bleeding from the wretched voice of hers! She also had pink hair. Like who the hell has pink hair! It just screams out "I'm a freaky brainless wannabe!" then there was the dress. God it was some dress. Who the hell runs around in a red dress!
Then my attention was taken to the first male. He wasn't talking. He just stood there, holding this big book of porn. I couldn't see his face because he had this bandana covering one of his eyes and this weird mask thingy covering his mouth. But from what I saw he looked so damned sexy! I mean I respect the fact that he was good-looking. Yes that's it. The Easter Bunny is not gay!
The next boy was one of those creepy emo kids who get too much attention just for being the creepy emo kid. He was wearing all black and his hair resembled that of a cockatiel's. He looked like the sort that would run away to an emo farm.
The next one was the loudest. He had blonde spiky hair and wouldn't stop saying "believe it!" what the hell? What does he want me to believe? Is he one of those crazy Mormon's? Did he want me to "believe" in Christ? Is he going to come to my house during suppertime and lecture me that the world is going to end and the only way for me to survive is if I "believe it!" well I wasn't prepared to switch my religions, BELIEVE IT!
Ok its kinda a short chapter, sorry! I'm also trying to expand my vocabulary to please my reviewers! So tell me what I have to change to make this the best story of all time! (Or at least the best story involving the Easter bunny and ninjas!) Also I apologize to all Mormons! This was a spur of the moment thingy!