Hello all, once again!
Second update of the day! I must be sick or something.. Or just maybe because I have so many ideas in my head right now I need to write them out before they disappear elsewhere!
WOW - 14 REVIEWS for chapter 1! OMG - Thank you all so very much! I'm really grateful that you are still with me, following etc :D
Again, if your just tuning in to this 'A Touch Of Youth' - this is the sequel to 'A Touch Of What' over 40 chapters long, and it's still up, completed available for reviewing too if you do wish :P
Right: Fan fiction to recommend here because they recommend mine on their last chapter!
Author: MaisieIrvette27: Title : 'On Hyperly Obsessed Tides' - Maisie, Erin, Flik, and Tori are back for another swashbuckling adventure! Join them as they search for the Fountain of Youth! Wow, that sounded so cliché! Anyway, see what happens when they come face to face with Blackbeard and Angelica! REVIEW!
This is ALSO set during OST and the sequel to her other one, so if you want to read it - please read her first one 'Hyper Obsession' to make sense of it? Yes?
Review feedbacks people:
-MizzTroublezxx: My first review! THANK YOU! *throws you a party!* Hehe, I loved that part too always makes me laugh!
-CaptainSkitzoVamp: Don't worry about the short review! I think I'm the second girl to do one, MaisieIrvette27 is also doing a fan girl fic set during OST too! Check it out!
-BlackShadow878: Thank you for continuing reading! Thank you for the review too :D
-MaisieIrvette27: The idea about the officer was swimming in my brain whilst I was writing my last scenes for 'A touch of what'! lol Love Will's line though!
-CountCresent: Yup, another fan girl! And meeting the king and Mcbeardy! Scary! :P
-Dani: Thank you for continuing as well! Glad your happy for this :D
-Coconut Coral: I know, I'm fast updating all because if I don't write it down, my mind goes blank and I'll forget! And your in this chapter :P
-Sangofan4ever: Welcome! *waves* thank you for the review, glad you love it!
-LittleMissDreamer7: Oooooh, I like your idea! I will certainly think on that one - thank you for the suggestion! I love them!
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-CrossBreed777: Thank you for the review, also glad your loving it too! :D
-Anon reviewer: Oooh, anon eh? No name? Mysterious! Thank you for the review, and I plan to keep going! Lol :D
Right: 2nd chapter anyone?
Chapter Two: Mad, Meetings, and Ta-rah!
Maisie
"Oh..my…Legolas…"
Maisie looked wide eyed at the man still sitting in front of her, she shifted herself backwards till her back came against the wall in shock.
"Again, my name is not Legolas!" Will said to her once again, she already asked him a few times who he really was and he was getting annoyed with answering the same answer.
"This can't be happening…no…no…" Maisie whispered, turning herself round feeling the wall behind looking for the cupboard entrance but it seemed to have disappeared like magic.
Will sighed out loud, and stood up coming over to the girl looking down at her - he reached down and started to grab her hand but she pushed him away rising to her legs standing opposite him afraid.
"I'm mad… this is just a dream, I knocked myself out or something… this is just…" Before Maisie could finish, Will pinched her arm hard making her scream and fall once again on her back.
"WHAT WAS THAT FOR?"
"To prove to you that wasn't a dream… now, what is your name?" Will asked her, his hand reaching back down to her level she hesitated for a moment but then accepted it and he took her over to the table sitting her in a chair.
"Um, I'm Maisie… Maisie Irvette…" She replied back, confused as ever that Will Turner was sitting opposite her staring.
"And you know who I am..?"
"Your Will Turner, blacksmith in Port Royal married to Elizabeth Swann…" Maisie said quickly remembering the Pirates of the Caribbean movies in her mind.
"Not married…" Will sighed, looking down and showing Maisie his left hand where there was no ring on his fourth finger.
"Hold on…? What?"
"I'm not married.. Me and Elizabeth.. Well she met someone else, a man called George Williamson" Will admitted to her, she was now really confused by all this.
"I knew this was a dream! Because you have to be married..!" Maisie rose from her seat and started to pace the room trying to think of an explanation for all of this.
"Maybe this is a joke.. Flik and Jenna must be…" Maisie muttered to herself, thinking that this was a joke played by her work friends thinking that they will surprise her any moment.
"Flik…? Jenna…? You know them?" Will asked, making her stop and face him - she nodded and he also rose from his seat sighing.
"You better sit down then…"
"Why..? How do you know Flik and Jenna?" Maisie asked curiously, staring at him.
"It all started roughly 2 years ago…"
Maisie sat there listening to every word that Will had to say to her - he explained about when he first met the girls, what they did, and who they loved etc.. She couldn't believe her ears! This is just strange she thought to herself, Flik and Jenna have been here for 2 years yet through the cupboard they were only there for 10 minutes..
"HOLD ON!" Maisie stopped him in his explaining, snapping out of her thoughts at what he just said.
"Flik married Jack? As in Captain Jack Sparrow, ladies man?" She repeated to him and he nodded to her.
"Jenna was set to married Cutler Beckett too.."
"But he died? During when the Endeavour.. FUCK, YOUR SUPPOSE TO BE…!" Maisie gasped out loud, she just remembered that Will was suppose to be on the Flying Dutchman as the captain!
"James Norrington is the captain of the Dutchman…" Will answered her question before she could ask it, making her more puzzled than before!
"Wow… are we in Port Royal now?" Maisie ingested the information that was given to her, the long story about what Flik and Jenna had been up too.
"No, we are not - We are in London.." Will pointed to the single window behind her, she went over and looked out - the window was facing the Thames river, their were also old fashioned houses too - no skyscraper type buildings, London Eye anything..
"Hmm…."
London… London… why… She thought, furrowing her eyebrows trying to think about why she was in London then it came to her!
"We need to go!" Maisie went back over to Will, grabbing his hand roughly pulling him up heading for the door but Will stopped her pulling her back but he pulled a little too hard and she crashed her body into his.
"Where are you going…?" Will whispered down to her, she never noticed to now how brown Will's eyes were like deep dark pools… she shook herself back from those thoughts looking back to Will.
"Captain's daughter.." Maisie simply replied to him, gulping slightly.
"That's a pub on the other side of London…"
"Better get started then before night time comes!" Maisie half smiled, pulling away and dragging him through the door.
St James Palace.
Flik and Jack were getting dragged through the long hall of St James Palace - Jack went quietly whilst Flik was trying to struggle the two officers holding her arms tight shouting through the gag that was placed on her mouth.
Finally, they reached an extravagate room with paintings, rich wallpaper with a large dining table in the middle that had cakes and other desserts laid on the top of it also in the room was two large chairs with chains.
Jack and Flik were taken over to the chairs, placing each of them into them and chaining their wrists with the chains to the arms securing them tightly - at last one of the officers took the gag off Flik's mouth with a smirk.
"Much better… bloody idiot…" Flik pursed her lips together trying to get rid of her dry lips making them wet again.
The officers left leaving them two alone with the food on the table.
"Jack, are you okay?" Was the first thing Flik asked over to him, he looked over to her with a smile.
"Am now.. That cream puff has my name on it…" Jack's finger pointed to the cream puffs on the table as he licked his lips.
"Um Jack, my lovely.. Our chairs are chained together so if your…" Flik started to say but the banging of their chairs interrupted them, Jack had started moving both chairs forward dragging hers along to closer to the table trying to reach for the puff but it wasn't working.
"Oh goodness sakes…" Flik rolled her eyes, her leg came up to the table kicking it hard underneath making the puff jump from it's plate and on to Jack's boot..
"What would I do without you…?" Jack asked her, looking at the puff and then Flik.
"Probably sailing the seas with tentacles on yer face…" Jack shot her a look after that and was about to kick the puff to his mouth but the big doors in front of them both opened so Jack kicked the puff up to the ceiling but it caught on the chandelier hanging there.
"Good going…" Flik whispered to him, as men were coming in with an larger man in a another white curly wig wearing very expensive clothes with a silly little grin on his face which made Flik tried not laugh so much.
The man behind him came up behind the chair of this man looking at Jack and Flik..
"Are you Jack and Felicity Sparrow…?"
"Who are you?" Flik replied, asking an question with another question.
"Lord John Carteret… Are you Jack and Felicity Sparrow..?" He asked again, directing his question more at Jack than Flik.
"There should be a 'Captain' in there somewhere…" Jack replied back smugly, looking over to Flik and then John Carteret.
"I've heard of you…" Both Jack and Flik looked at the man sitting in the chair, chewing on a grape pointing his finger.
"And you know who I am…?" He asked again, Flik glazed over to Jack shrugging her shoulders - she had no clue who this man was whilst Jack narrowed his eyes at the man trying to figure out who he was..
"Your face is familiar.. Have I threaten you before.. owe money too?" Jack randomly asked out loud, then John Carteret stepped forward his eyes wide open in the shock of this.
"You two are in the presence of George Augustus, Duke of Brunswick-Luneberg,, arch treasurer and prince -elector of the holy roman empire, King of Great Britain and of you two!" Carteret told them both.
"Doesn't ring a bell…" Flik smiled back, moving her hands rattling the chains as she looked around - she spotted an inside balcony, and also the massive window to Jack's right thinking..
"I am informed you have come to London to procure a crew for your ship…" King George asked, putting another grape into his mouth chewing it loudly.
"Vicious rumours, not true…" Jack replied, as Flik rattled her chains it made Jack's chains rattle and then he started rattling his also pulling on Flik's tugging her hands to the side.
"No! I'm quite certain from what my ministers told me, Jack Sparrow and wife has come to London to procure a crew" King George said again to them, Flik shook her head side to side.
"It may be true that is what you were told, but it's nonetheless false that I come to London to procure a crew…" Jack replied, still shaking his chains and pulling at Flik's again.
"Stop pulling mine…!" Flik muttered silently over to him, he stopped rattling and gave her a grin.
"Then you lied to me when you told me that you are Jack Sparrow?" King George asked getting quite angry now.
"Oh, for fuck's sake… He is CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow - but it's not true that Jack Sparrow has come to London to procure a crew…" Flik burst out to King George, she was starting not to like this man - The King smiled strangely at her which made her pull a face at the sight of his teeth..
"Ewww... Do you know any dentists or anything...?" Flik asked, but the King ignored her comment.
"Are you now claiming not to be in London?" King George laughed gently, making his ministers and others laugh too.
"Look…"
"Felicity.. Luv, I've got this…" Jack cut her off giving her a wink, and began rattling his chains as he spoke.
"No.. No, I AM Jack Sparrow and I am in London, but I'm not here to procure a crew.. That's someone else" Jack replied, pointing his finger up at the King, the chains rattling more - Flik looked over to him, wondering why he was rattling them so much thinking that he must be up to something…
"AH! Someone else named Jack Sparrow…" King George looked over to Carteret, nodding him over to him which made him come back over to the chair.
"You've brought me the wrong Sparrow! Find the real Jack Sparrow and dispose of these impostors…" He waved his hand towards Flik and Jack.
"OI! I'm not an impostor..!" Flik argued, watching the officers come near her and Jack.
"I agree, we are not! I am Jack Sparrow the one and only and this is my wife Felicity Sparrow and we are in London" Jack told the King again, trying to explain to him.
"To procure a crew, to undertake a voyage to the Fountain Of Youth…"
"What?" Flik and Jack said in unison, automatically looking at each other perplexed - Jack was rattling the chains even more now, lifting each arm into the air getting them twisted and pulling on Flik's chains once again making her shift to the right as he did.
"SOMEONE remove those chains from them!" King George huffed out, an officer came over to them releasing the chains from their wrists.
Flik sighed out in relief, rubbing her wrists with her hands as Jack got up from his seat making his way along the table of food.
"We know you are in possession of a map…" Carteret spoke up, everyone watching Jack, Flik stayed quiet as she was figuring out a plan to get out of here then it came to her and she smiled mischievous to herself.
"So confiscate the map and off to the gallows with the both of them!" Another man called from the group of ministers. Flik got up from her seat, grabbing an random napkin as Jack was at the other end of the table moving an chair slightly on an angle.
"Oooh, cherries.. I love these…" Flik mumbled, picking up a few cherries off the plate and eating them.
"Have you a map?" King George asked, looking them both - Flik came next to Jack throwing the napkin over her shoulder.
"Do we have a map dear?" Jack peered down to Flik, she shrugged and began searching her body and so did Jack - both of them shrugged to each other.
"Nope.. Sorry mister King.." Flik replied back, smiling sitting down in the angled chair.
"Yup, we must of lost it.." Jack began walking down the table facing the King and others.
"I have report, a trustworthy one that the Spanish have located the Fountain Of Youth and I WILL NOT HAVE SOME MELANCHOLY SPANISH MONARCH A CATHOLIC GAIN ETERNAL LIFE!" King George shouted, banging his fist several times on the table madly whilst Jack was trying to reach down for a cherry on top of a dessert then he finally got it putting it into his mouth.
"Do you know your way to the fountain?" Some other minister asked, his glaze settling on Flik and Jack.
"Sure!"
"Absolutely! Yes!" Jack replied back, smiling wide to them all.
"And you could led an expedition?" Carteret asked them both, Flik just nodded as she got up from her seat making her way to Jack, linking arms with him.
"With your permission and will you be providing a crew and ship then?" Jack asked again.
"And a captain…." King George wickedly smiled, then suddenly the side doors under the balcony opened revealing someone the couple didn't expect to see!
"Bloody hell, is that Mcbeardy…?" Flik whispered, shocked looking at the man.. This man had a peg leg, dressed in fine clothes, wearing makeup and a wig - indeed it was Mcbeardy aka Barbossa but changed!
"Afternoon sire…" Barbossa bowed to the King before turning to face Jack and Flik.
"These two should be chains, and that one with a gag over her mouth!" Barbossa pointed his stick to Flik who gave him an evil glare back.
"And you should get yourself a mirror…" Flik replied, Jack sniggered and stepped in front of her smiling over to Barbossa.
"In my palace? Hardly!" George sighed, shaking his head to Barbossa.
"If I may be bold, Jack Sparrow and his wife be easy enough to catch, it's holding them that's the problem…"
"Hector! Good to see a fellow pirate making something of himself!" Jack smiled over to the man.
"Pirate? Privateer now! On a sanctioned mission, under the authority and protection of the crown.." Barbossa replied, his hand adjusting his wig.
"How did that happen?" Flik asked out of the blue to him, he frowned to her before smiling fully.
"Yes, and what of my beloved Pearl..?" Jack also asked him - Barbossa looked at them both shaking his head.
"Lost…"
"Lost?"
"Lost…I defended her, and lost my leg - I came to Port Royal where I found Lord Cutler Beckett, he was willing to give me a crew and ship and in return I had to give him my services to the crown.." Barbossa explained, slamming his peg leg on the table showing them.
"You saw Beckett.. How is he.. And Jenna…?" Flik asked out of the blue - she hadn't stopped thinking about Jenna since the day they left Port Royal, she remembered everything about it.
"BUT what of the PEARL…?" Jack butted in, glazing at Barbossa.
"Sunk…"
Without warning, Jack pushed Flik out of the way as he climbed onto the table to try and hit Barbossa, but Flik and two other guards grabbed him back restraining him.
"You should have been sunk with it!" Flik hissed out of anger, holding onto Jack's jacket making sure he didn't go over the table again.
"Now now, Mrs Sparrow… don't take that tone with me…" Barbossa told her, she frowned at him wondering what he was on about.
"What do you mean…?"
Barbossa nodded over to two officers, and they left the room and came back a few minutes later with a girl in the middle of them holding her arms tight.
Flik tilted her head to the side, trying to look at the girl's face which was facing the floor, her dirty blonde/brown hair was long and over her face, she was dressed in simple dark blue dress - it was till the girl looked up, Flik gasped out loud…
"JENNA!" Flik cried, letting go of Jack and headed that way - she didn't recognise her! She was much taller, and changed as well.
Jenna gasped too, and a smile found it's way onto her face looking at the sight of her best friend Flik, she too noticed that Flik had changed too, she didn't look like the girl from 2 years ago but someone new, a different girl all together - both of them had realized that they had both grown and didn't recognise each other anymore due to their apperances.
"FLIK! Is it really you…!" Jenna cried back, struggling from the officers - Flik made her way over but was stopped by Barbossa himself.
"Let me pass! What have you done to her?" Flik demanded, looking straight into Barbossa's powdered face.
"She is mine…"
"I'm sorry… WHAT?" Flik looked between Barbossa and Jenna puzzled..
"Jenna…?" Flik muttered to her friend, and she slowly nodded gulping.. She felt the tears slowly come down her cheeks looking back to Flik's face.
"WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE TO HER?" Flik screamed into Barbossa's face again, but Jack pulled her back from him before she could him hit!
"ENOUGH!" Everyone turned to King George standing up looking at them all..
"Captain Barbossa, I do not care for your pet or what grudges you have with these two! The Spanish outdistance us, and I have every confidence you will prevail and you will rewarded with a high station you so desire…" King George explained..
"YEAH! HIGH STATION IN HELL!" Flik yelled out, she felt her blood boiling at just looking at Barbossa, but she looked over to Jenna calming her down..
"What happened Jenna…." Flik asked to her, but the girl didn't reply..
"You sir.. Have stooped…" Jack held on to Flik's arm tightly giving Barbossa an evil glare again.
"Our sands be all but run. Where's the harm of joining the winning side..?" Barbossa replied to them both.
"But.. The wig…"
Jack then turned himself away from Barbossa, grabbing the two officer's guns behind him making them fire into the air, which snapped the string of the chandelier making it swing - Jack grabbed Flik's arm dragging her with him onto the table, knocking over all the food to the floor then they jumped down - Jack grabbed the chair throwing it at the window smashing it from the inside.
Flik turned, stepping over the napkin and dodging it as a officer was about to grab her - he slipped up and headed straight out of the window.. Flik started walking over to Jenna but her arm was dragged back and she found herself in the arms of Jack holding her tightly.
"We got to free her from Mcbeardy!" Flik told him, both looking over to Jenna who was staring back at them in shock.
"Don't worry luv, we will.." Then the rope Jack was holding, snapped making them fly into the air and they both grabbed the chandelier swinging themselves over to the balcony, and they both jumped onto it whilst everyone from below was staring at them in disbelief!
"JENNA! I WILL SET YOU FREE!" Flik called down to the girl, Jenna nodded back knowing that Flik would be right and smiled.
"I LOVE YOU FLIK!" Jenna smiled wide, watching them both - there was hope she thought to herself.
Jack waved his hand in the air, and Flik went back to the chandelier grabbing the puff from it, giving it to Jack.
"Want some?" Jack asked her first, raising an eyebrow.
"Maybe later… let's go…" Flik whispered to him, she watched him take a bite out of the cream puff and she turned herself back to everyone below.
"Ta-rah!"
And then they were gone.
Oooooh! Interesting chapter eh? More of a back story with Jenna in the next one I promise :D
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P.s Sorry if I didn't get most of the scenes right with the whole napkin/chair - I've got the script and trying to remember how the movie when, so I'm sorry about that! :D