RWBY doesn't belong to me etc etc
Greetings readers, I decided that I'm going to change this story radically. I had to study for a big chem test so I didn't have time to update. So after I wrote the second chapter yesterday, I reviewed and the story I had planned for Alric. I read it and holy crap, it sucked. I had tried to make him into a likable character, but only thing I did was make a character that was Shadow the Hedgehog and a razor blade combined into the edgiest thing ever. He was 200% Mary Sue. He was the main stereotypical "dark and edgy past" and "I don't like to talk to people because of my special powers and omgimsocool" He was blattantly OP having 2 semblances. So I decided to scrap almost everything about him and remake him. Expect the story to be a little bit more light hearted than others. The main character might be tad bit too simple, but I'll try to forge him into a better character as the story progresses. The next chapter will either come out a bit later on today or tomorrow. I'm going to try to make the characters fall in love in a normal pace, not "omg you saved me i want da dick". You can ask me to include certain characters into the main pairing, but Pyrrha and Nora are off limits. I don't want to have a douche going in and screwing with the official pairings.
Reviews are appreciated always :D
P.S BTW what do you guys think of a talking weapon? And include weapon ideas, I might give the main character the weapon if it's not too ridiculous or OP.
