yamishun-thanks!im trying!and also, you'll be suprised, trust me!
and its ok if it was flamish, i need flames, they tell me how to
improve and what to stop doing!
fantisylover-not picky at all, andi'm using notepad, so its hard to grammar check.also, its my first time writting in paragraphs, so yea, i'll try to improve it!
starblastz:CHAPTER #3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
chapter 3:an idiot and an old friend
'why do i have to marry someone I don't even know!'thought mikan.'mom married dad by law, but they knew eachother!'
"mi'lady, we've arrived!"yelled the coachmen in an unbearable squeeky voice."ok, im coming out!"mikan yelled back mimicking his voice.
as she stepped out here mouth practicaly dropped to the ground.yes, as the rumours said, it was creepy, no, downright dreadful, but boy was it HUGE!
"wow...""princess, wouldn't you like to be IN the castle more than
stare at it?"asked a castle gaurd."um..."(((sweatdrop)
"lets go princess.."he said.
"ok..."said mikan, obviously frightened of the huge,dark castle.
as they entered,mikan saw servents, all dressed in black and red.
they scared mikan to, mostly cause they were more emotionless then
hotaru."creepy..."
"did you say something miss?"asked the guard."ano...so many servents"
"yes, i supose we do have many."(((sweatdrop)))
about 12 min. later they reached a door painted black."this is the young masters room, he'll be in shortly."after that was said, the guard walked off.
'what now"thought mikan,'might as well go in'. and with that she opened the door and went in.
inside, it was blue walls,with a white ceilling and carpet. a giant white bed with light blue sheets and dark blue blankets.
"wow..."said mikan, unaware she was being watched.'this is so much different from the rest of the castle"she thought wide-eyed, as she walked in.
she went striaght to the balcony, that was hidden behind white curtains.
she went to the rim and leaned over as the wind danced in her hair.
the boy who was watching her was amazed at how her beauty had developed over the years.'beautiful...'
"excuse me...""AHHH!!!"screamed mikan at the sudden noise."its not to polite to ignore your host is it princess"said a boy, unfamiliar to mikan.
"who are you?" she asked, truly bewildered."I'm ruka, prince of the dark kingdom,your fiancee, and an old friend."he said with a smile.
starblastz:so, good bad? R&R!