Dear readers,
It's been a long time. How have you all been? Do you even remember this? If you do, thank you. I've found it quite rude of myself to just write a chapter and leave you hanging, and for that, I are a few things I'd like to say, though.
First of all, to those of you who've reviewed positively, thank you very much, and I don't feel I quite deserved it. To that one person who left me a nice con/crit, thank you even more. I love hearing what I did wrong. To that person who left a couple of anon cries of "fail!" and "you suck" and the like, you're funny. Did I say something mean to you at some point? If you're trying to hurt my poor, fragile feelings, it isn't working.
Actually, those flames are what inspired me to start writing this story again. Y'see, I started plotting it out. Then I started jotting down a few details I wanted to add in. Then I didn't stop doing that, and I was left with a big mess of a chart-thing which was basically a summary of the whole story. So I lost all will to write it. But NOW. Now I have reason to write this. After checking that con/crit again, I found it was pretty legit and matched up with my own ideas on how the chapter was. That is to say, choppy, rushed, clunky, a little unnatural, and a few typos here and there.
So here is the actual news: I'm rewriting it. I had a second chapter in the works, I mentioned. It would have been the first chapter from Blitzwing's POV, which I now find wholly unnecessary. That's going. I'm just gonna rewrite it, and it'll be a whole lot better. I will also delete this A/N later, when I get the rewritten version up, so this won't be redundant.
TLDL, my first chapter sucks and I'm rewriting it.
Happy trails,
Ink Molotov