Hey guys. This is another remake for one of my favorite episodes. I think we can all agree that the final fight scene in "An Invisible Thread" was rather disappointing. I have already created a one shot fight scene fan fic on this episode, called "Invisible Thread Remake. This story will be longer. Please leave reviews. Sorry, if the writing sounds kind of amateur, I have never really written stories before.
Peter screamed with a frustration, "Nathan, you son-of-a-!" Peter couldn't continue. How could Nathan be so stupid? Couldn't he just wait a little more? How could he be so stubborn and he was going to get himself killed. Peter knew that he would be the one who would have to save his brothers ass. He sighed and turned to Hiro and Ando, "Look, thanks for your help, but I've really got to go."
He knew that if he got to New York just a little bit late, then he would lose his brother forever. And then the realization slowly hit to Peter. How was he going to get to there?
Whooshhhhhh. The Senator made rough landing on the roof of the Stanton Hotel. He scurried toward the doors that led inside. I got to stop Sylar, Nathan thought to himself as he scurried down the steps. This is my responsibility and I can't bring Pete into this, Nathan had now entered the building.
He hurried over to a nearby elevator and selected the first level. He needed to first find out what room, Sylar was staying at. As the elevator went from floor to floor, Nathan's mind scrambled with thoughts of what might occur. How was he going to kill Sylar? After this how was he going to end the Building 26 operation? His thoughts were interrupted as he heard a soft ring signaling that the elevator head reached the ground floor. Nathan made his way through the slowly opening elevator doors only to come face to face with the last person he had hoped to meet. Himself.
Peter looked to Hiro frantically, "You got you powers back right?"
"Yes, but I-" Hiro responded.
"I need you to teleport me to the Stanton Hotel in New York" Peter demanded with urgency in his voice.
"Peeta Petirelli! I can no longer teleport or travel through time! I have been greatly weakened, " Hiro stated, with shame in his voice.
Peter looked from Hiro to Ando very confused. Ando came up, "Ever since Hiro got his abilities back, he could not teleport or anything else. He can only stop time, and this brings him pain to even do that"
"Have you tried supercharging him?"
That's the story so far. Please answer this question you guys. Would you prefer that Sylar dies or lives on to remain Peter arch enemy? I need some opinions for writing the fight scene.