Disclaimer: I don't own Pokémon, the comments, or hints pertaining to certain companies and merchandise. Pure and simple.

Claimer: I own the story this is based on.

This fic will speak for itself.

"Hello everyone, and welcome to Team Nova's Comment Corner! CP is about to go on holiday for a few weeks, which equals more waiting. Knowing how good you guys have been to us, he decided to keep you a little entertained by having some of us respond to your reviews. The host for today will be everyone's favorite duo, me, Wes, and my brother Brendan!"

Brendan, standing next to Wes, had his arms folded and his eyebrow twitching. "Yeah, isn't that just thrilling…" He spoke in monotone.

"Don't make such a fuss! This will be fun! Besides, I'm sure the readers will like to hear what we got to say! You remember how it works, right?"

"Yeah. We basically pick a random review from each chapter and answer to it. Given we have a staggering 13 chapters; we'll just split it between us. Sounds fair?"

"Me first, me first!" Wes raised his hand high, hoping to get called on.

"Wes, this isn't school. Put your hand down and go ahead." Brendan sighed.

"Okay, so let's check out the first comment!" Wes leafed through a list of comments on an index card until he found one he liked.

Yeah, that was nice, funny too. But what was disapointed me was Ash. He was in the same bed with Misty for goodness sake! Alone, in the room! In the whole house in fact! Do something, man!

But except for that, the story's great. Gonna check out the rest of the chapters.

Keep it Sick.

-Sickly

Wes nodded with a smirk on his face. "Sure thing Sickly, we plan to keep it sick. Also, I gotta agree, Ash should've done SOMETHING! Seriously, if that was me, there would've been enough fan service for guys everywhere."

"…As well as an arrest record for you…" Brendan mumbled.

"Hey, I'm just being realistic!"

"Right, sure, the most naïve teenager in existence just so happens to want to do his best friend while she was sleeping. Yeah, very realistic."

Wes shrugged nonchalantly. "Nonetheless, it could be said that Ash needs more lessons from Brock. Speaking of which, I really need to get in touch with that Pikachu of his…"

Brendan decided not to question Wes's thoughts and continue. "Alright, let's keep going."

Wow, that was . . . intense. Really reminded me of a video-game . . . I get the feeling that you based it on one. Was it "Splinter Cell"? I loved the part where the spy stops the Rockets from attacking until she can change her music. So anyway, the battle sequence with the giant robot was really good. Just like a boss battle, especially the part where the armor drops off and it gets quicker and stronger. May was my first guess for the spy, but then I thought "Nah!" I can't wait to hear the explanation for that one. I sense that there's gonna be a little love triangle. But I'll save the rest for later.

- Hakajin

"As if Chaos Paladin hasn't ripped off enough stuff, even Splinter Cell joins the fray. Oh well, I guess I can't complain. I just find it strange how weird that girl May is. I mean, listening to music while sneaking and fighting? Wouldn't that cause distractions?"

"Um, Brother? You do realize that there's music in just about every single battle, right?"

"Good point. Anyway Hakajin, I can see what you mean by a love triangle, except the fact that Ash is quite clueless."

"Well hey, if it were me, I would've—"

"If that sentence has the chance of mentally scarring young minds, shut up." Brendan demanded.

"Err…yeah…alright, moving on!" Wes said quickly, reading the next comment.

So...now we have TWO super-secret anti-crime teams?! Whoa.
And they do not like each other, it seems.
And Rui's got a giant robot and way too much sugar...

Ri2

"Hmm…yeah. I think Rui had a bit too many soda pops before suiting up for battle. No wonder she was bouncing around like a lunatic…"

Brendan released a heavy sigh. "Wes…you've got to learn how to control what she eats. Do you remember the LAST time she was energetic?"

Wes winced at the thought. "Ooh…yeah…well, look on the bright side! We have a new HQ now!" He laughed off.

Brendan exhaled another sigh. "Next comment please."

i like it please update soon and do pokemon/gundam wing crossover whith ash misty brock max may and please update soon

sonic 1

Brendan sweat-dropped fiercely. "People are actually encouraging Chaos Paladin to rip off more than he already has? That's like giving 4kids more anime to desecrate horribly!"

"Man, good thing we weren't in the anime. I can picture myself dancing like a ballerina while shooting a water gun at some huge teddy bear…" Wes shuddered. He shook his head to get rid of the dark thoughts. "Let's go with the next comment before I fall into depression."

Wahoo! I finally get to read the next chapter of this story! xD Poor Ash getting punched by Satoshi. Oh now Misty has a spirit who's next? Brock? When I first read the title of the story I thought it was going to be a Final Fantasy story; I missed the destiny part.

Sounds like Inuyasha all over again. xD Though with spirits and..other stuff. ;

Hope you update soon, more humor!

- Yomi Kobito

Wes blinked several times before responding. "…What the hell does XD mean?"

"Besides being a major spin off of Pokémon Coliseum, it's supposed to display some sort of expression. I think it's…it looks like how someone looks when they cry after getting punched in the face. And what's this, Final Fantasy? Inuyasha? When will Chaos Paladin's reign of piracy end!?" Brendan shouted in frustration.

"I wouldn't count him off too much. I mean, doesn't America do the same thing?"

Brendan thought about it for a moment. "…Yeah. At least Chaos isn't degrading it by butchering what hard work the Japanese did for the community. And what credit does America give Japan?"

"The movie Pearl Harbor and a load of dishonor?"

"Precisely. Okay, let's go with the next comment before some secret agents gun us down for talking about America."

8-bit Theatre references, RPG fights, AND some-yet-to-be-seen character named Zero? Why the heck does this sound like something "I" would write:P

Yeah, leaning on that fourth wall wasn't really pleasing, but it was still a good chapter. Hopefully the others won't be as... well... wall leaning.

leans on the fourth wall, which tips over and smashes into pieces

...now you what you made me do. :P

Maverick hunter Cyros

"Yes, Cyros, leaning on the fourth wall is a bit of a stretch. Hopefully, this won't be a continuous practice."

"Hey, I've leaned on a fourth wall before, and it wasn't that bad! I mean, once you use the X-ray goggles, you can see some sweet stuff!"

Brendan tossed a flat glare at his supposed brother. "Wes…peeking into a woman's bathroom is not only illegal, but not what a fourth wall is. And where does the fourth come in?"

"Team Nova HQ has four women's bathrooms hooked up throughout the building!"

"Wes…please, just continue." Brendan groaned. Wes was just a hand full.

Yay! That was a funny chapter! I laughed lots! Boss Man was funny, especially with Misty. I like his name, lol. Wes calling Brendan his brother all the time was funny too, and I loved the part with Brock and Rui, and Wes getting jealous. Seems like I've heard that line about staying friends before from Brock. Hmm . . .

Anyway, the part about Brendan and his clothes machine was good too. I liked Ash's reaction. Satoshi's lines were good too there. And Misty getting jealous. But what does concave mean? Nevermind, I probably don't wanna know. Oh, and Ash not getting the joke about the answering machine was funny too.

Cute moment between Ash and Misty! You know I love that stuff! Cool part with Ash doing a syncronization with Satoshi. Hope to see the same with Misty and Kasumi. Loved the part with Team Rocket. Kasumi kinda scares me . . . "I could do better in my sleep,"? Lol. Rui was hilarious with her mech. Lazer tag . . .

So anyway, I love your characterizations. Not just with Ash and Misty and the others, though you've stayed pretty well in character with them. I like the personalities you've given Wes, Brendan, and Rui especially. They're really . . . lively! Well, 'til next time!

Hakajin

Wes had a grim look on his face as he stared long and hard at Brendan. "Brother…do you have something you would like to share with me?"

Brendan sweat-dropped at the look he was getting. He just KNEW this was coming. "It wasn't meant to happen like that!"

"Just as I feared…your lack of perversion is turning you into some kind of yaoi fan!" Wes held onto Brendan's shoulders, shaking him. "You need emergency treatment! Quick, to the hentai store! We'll need some strong material for this rescue mission!"

"WES! FOR CRYING OUT LOUD, I'M NOT GAY!" Brendan yelled, breaking Wes's hold. "Listen, I was not trying to make Ash strip for perverted reasons. This just comes to show how perverted the world is. What scares me most is that I think some people enjoyed that moment…"

"On a bright note, it looks like we got some fans at this point! Finally, true recognition."

"If you call being paired up with you recognition, I suppose so…"

"Bring on the next comment, brother!"

Brendan did so, but not without sighing. "Why me…?"

That conniving harlot! What happenned to waiting until the situation actually turned to the worst case scenario?! But, then again, you can't intend to kill Ash off, can you? looks left and right and then throws himself to the ground in front of CP
CAN YOU?!

DestinyDeoxys

"Of course Ash can't be killed off. He's the main character. After all, it's not anime unless there's a lovable idiot in the scene."

"Yeah…I've been wondering about that. You were watching her, weren't you? Why didn't you shoot?"

"It wasn't in the script. Apparently, Chaos thought it would be a funny idea to throw in a random scene to piss off and confuse a lot of people. Much like 4kids, except they throw in random crap rather than scenes."

"Uh-huh…" Wes gave Brendan a sly look. "But tell me this, what did you have your scope on exactly? Working the zoom function of the sniper?" He emphasized.

Brendan coughed, attempting to hide the small blush on his face. "T-that's not important. Please continue the next comment, Wes."

"Right…" Wes drawled, flipping through the index cards.

pretty cool

ffgirlmoonie

"Sweet! Brother, a chick said I was cool!"

"Don't be so slow. She's obviously talking about the story itself. You are about as far from cool as Brock is in his chances of getting a girlfriend."

"Ouch, low blow man!" Wes cried.

"Anyway, on with the next comment." Brendan announced.

the story's pretty cool, but you pretty muche ripped every important scene of another movie or game or summat, other than that its all good

Gr1ev3r

"FINALLY! SOMEONE NOTICED!" Brendan exclaimed. "Now, if someone will help me prepare a strike, we can get Chaos to produce material that WASN'T ripped from some sort of game or anime."

"I don't care. As long as I'm badass, I'm good."

Brendan gave him an odd look. "What 'badass' spends his time flirting with random girls and drooling over unholy images on the internet?"

Wes tossed Brendan an equally flat gaze. "It was in YOUR favorites!"

Brendan glared harder. "Which YOU put in after hacking into it!"

"Which, by the way, was never deleted!"

"…touché." Brendan conceded.

"Random reviewer's comment, I choose you!"

nice ... yeah ... reall liked it ... post soon

Tennisdesi91

"Why thank you…err…tennis? Or is it Desi? Maybe even…91!?" Wes raised an eyebrow, completely confused.

"Sheesh…what an idiot…" Brendan mumbled.

"I wonder why there are so many dots. Is this person being sarcastic or just really tired?"

"Moving on." Brendan said.

very good story man, like the humour and suspense, brilliant characters and very well written chapters. please take a look at my story, Legends Heroes and Idiots. First Pokemon story but hoping that it isnt the last. keep up the story and any idea of what sort of length is good for a chapter

Pjac the fighter

"Hey Wes, you might want to take a look at this "Legends, heroes and idiots". I think there might be a position there for you."

"Oh really? Like I'm a legendary hero that saves the world?"

"No. More like the legendary idiot that destroys it."

"You confidence in me is inspiring…" Wes shot sarcastically. "Looks like we have time for one last comment, so let's get it on!"

Sweet chapter dude! It was well worth the wait.

Lol, i can't believe that you're bringing characters from other anime into this tournament. I couldn't help but laugh when Yugi came into the picture... That poor little shrimp... he wouldn't last on his own for any more than 60 seconds.

I can't wait to see more of the tournament, and to find out more about Crisis and Zao... Ja ne

Peace,

SaiyanLegend

SaiyanSatoshiLegend

"Hmph, poor little shrimp my ass! He made a mockery out of me!" Brendan bellowed. "Not only that, but more plagiarism! That's probably why he never updates, since there's nothing left for him to swindle!"

"Brother, why are you always so irritated? You always seem to have some anger issues or something!"

"If you must know, my life happens to be stressful, you being the main part of my stress."

"More like you need to get laid…" Wes murmured.

"I heard that!" Brendan roared.

"Whoops! Looks like I've made him angry. Oh well, we're out of time anyway, so see you guys next time on: The legend of Final Destiny. Look forward to it as my brother gets lucky!" Wes joked, running out of the room.

"Dammit, stop it with the pervert jokes!" Brendan yelled, chasing Wes.

Yeah, sorry for the months of delay. Be assured that I'm very, very, very close to done with FD. It's just a matter of getting over the writer's block to finish the end. Thank you for all of your support, and I hope to get around and appease you for your assistance.

Also, if you like this one shot, I MIGHT do one for BL too. Of course, it probably won't be one review for EVERY chapter, given that will take forever.