Naruto no Satetsu
I have decided to take a challenge fic. And make a Naruto with the Iron Sand bloodline story. This is my first fanfiction so please go a little easy on me, but I do like constructive criticism so if you have suggestions on how to improve my writing I would greatly appreciate it.
Chapter 1
In the streets of Konoha, a young blond haired boy was running from a small group of people. This group was composed of two angered Chunin and two ANBU, who sadly got in the path of the running blond. The Chunin were after the boy because of his latest prank on the village. He managed to sneak past them and paint the North Wall up with graffiti.
This merry chase had been going on for the past few hours and the blond ball of energy showed no signs of slowing down or stopping.
"Come on don't ell me you two are tired already?" he yelled behind himself.
"Get back here Naruto!" screamed one of the angry Chunin.
The chase continued on toward the Hokage tower. The Hokage himself was sitting in a small garden near the front with some of the clan heads gathered. He took a moment and gazed at the stop-watch beside him. 'Hm, and eight hour chase, I have to admit this is some of the best training my ninja have ever gotten,' he thought with an inner chuckle thinking of the course the ANBU designed focused around catching Naruto after a prank. He continued to watch as the blond ball of sunshine ran up to him with a large grin on his.
"Mission accomplished, Hokage-jiji," he stated as the Chunin stopped beside him collapsing to the ground in exhaustion. The ANBU that were involved jumped out of the trees gasping for breathe at the run they were put under by a six year old. "Come on Ojii-san (1sp), give me something harder to do for training, painting the village is to easy," he said slightly complaining. The Sandaime merely chuckled at the young boy in front of him that he was helping train. "Well Naruto-kun, how about we start strategy with Shikaku-san?" he questioned the ninja in training. Naruto got a smile on his face as he took a seat in front of the Nara Clan head. "Now did you read the rule book I gave you Naruto-kun?" asked the aged leader. "OF course I did Ojii-san, do I look like an idiot?" asked the blond looking down at himself.
He had discarded the awful orange jumpsuit that the Hokage made were for stealth training. He said something about 'If you can get away with something in broad daylight with this on, imagine what you could do in black'. Now he was wearing his simple white tank-top and baggy black shorts. If you looked really closely then you could see the little orange book in his pocket that he stole from the Hokage and kind of got hooked on. But still no one seemed to notice.
"No Naruto-kun, I didn't mean it like that," the Sandaime chuckled. "It's just that sometimes your forgetful."
Naruto looked up indignant. "Jiji, do you really think that little of me?" he asked in hake shock. "I am deeply, deeply offended."
Everyone present began to laugh and chuckle at the blond boys antics. He just really made it to easy.
"Well Naruto, lets get playing," Shikaku said beginning the game by moving his piece forward. Naruto responded by moving his own.
Over the course of the next hour, the two players battled their minds and come out in the most surprising outcome ever. Naruto won a game of Shogi against a Nara Clan member, its head even.
Everyone present was staring at the board in shock. Shikaku's king was set up for and easy capture and checkmate. Naruto's lances were set up at one square outside of each movement column promoted of movement for the king fully promoted to dragons, unreachable to the Nara. A bishop cut off escape routes to either direction. A pawn set to capture in one move with backup from rook.
Finally the Hokage regained his bearings. "Naruto-kun, how did you win?" he asked slightly breathless. "Well I just thought about the different types of ninja teams and how they related to the game itself, but the strange thing was whenever Nara-san would make a move I always thought up like a dozen different outcomes for the game," he said in puzzlement. "H-Hokage-sama, I would like to perform and i.q. test on Naruto-kun here," Shikaku says not believing his eyes.
(Three hours later)
The head of the Nara clan walked out of a testing room with his mouth agape. The gathered clan heads were looking at him questioningly, expecting the results. Finally Tsume broke the silence. "So what was the outcome Nara-san?" she asks. The Nara stood there for a few minutes. He took a deep breath. "I didn't think it was possible, but the kid's i.q. score is higher than mine with him clocking in at 371," he mumbled out causing everyone's jaws to hit the floor.
The first to find his bearings was Hiashi. "Nara-san, surely this is a joke, he is just a kid," he said hoping too het a response that confirmed it.
Shikaku looked at the man and simply shook his head. "The only possible theory is he got it from Kushna, considering she had a large one herself, and add in the Kyuubi and you've got brainiac central," he said.
Everyone nodded at the easily acceptable logic in his answer to their problem.
(With Naruto)
After he was released from the test he ran straight to Ichiraku's Ramen.
"Hey Teuchi-ji-san, can I get a pork ramen?" he says walking through the curtain and climbing onto a stool.
The old ramen chef smiled down on his young friend. "Coming right up Naruto," he called smiling at the boy. Just then his daughter joined them. "Oh hey Naruto-kun, how've you been?" she asked her surrogate outoto(2). "I'm fine Ayema-neechan," he said giving her a big smile. Ayema smiled back and leaned over the counter to ruffle his hair. "Hey, don't do that to me Ayema-neechan," he cried dropping his head indignant, eliciting a chuckle and a giggle from the stand owners.
"Alright Naruto, the ramens ready," said Teuchi bringing a bowl of steaming hot ramen. Naruto's mouth began to water at the smell of his favorite food. "Thanks Teuchi-ji-san," he cried digging into the ramen. "So Naruto how's training been going?" the chef asked. "Its been great Hokage-jiji had me do strategy today with Shikaku-san, but everyone was surprised that he let me win a game of Shogi," he said thinking that the Nara head was letting him off easy. Teuchi showed immense shock when Naruto said he beat the Nara clan head, and that the man actually let him win. Teuchi knew better than that and pulled out a board. "Hey Naruto-kun did the board look anything like this, where he had more pieces than you?" he questioned. "Yea it did, why?" he asked not knowing what the chef meant by this. "Naruto I know for a fact that Shikaku Nara would never just let anyone win a game of Shogi," Teuchi said looking at Naruto.
After he got a fill of ramen he decided to head to the library to research stuff.
When he got there he went and found some books that looked interesting. One was a book on how to manipulate elemental chakra, another was on chakra solely, and the last was on bloodlines of all the elemental nations.
He began to read for several more hours as he got more and more interested in the books. When he finished reading the books on chakra and elements he put them back and got the one on bloodlines to keep for reading. He went to a shinobi store and managed to steal a piece of chakra paper from it because the clerk was asleep.
When Naruto made his way to an empty clearing he decided to test his chakra nature first so he would know what to study. 'Alright I just pump chakra into the card and then see the results,' he thought as he tried to put as little chakra as possible in the card. He opened his eyes to see something truly weird. His card had spit into third signaling that he was wind natured. One piece was dust, the next was wet, and the last was crumpled. All of them were to the extremes of each. "Oh crap now I have to do so much more practice," he cried out thinking he would have one affinity and be able to learn it. "Well I guess I'll get started on wind and water first," he said getting to his task.
Two months had past and Naruto was finally able to get water and wind down to almost no trouble at all. He was walking down the streets one night when he made a wrong turn and came to an angry mob that he somehow knew was formed for him.
He began to run as fast as he could but in his panic he forgot the right path and came to a dead end alley. He was turning back to run the other way when he was grabbed and tied down. On closer inspections he noticed that he was tied to a cross by barbed wire at his hands, feet and around his chest. They all took turns each and everyone of them coming to stab in with something. They became frustrated because every cut the made no matter where it always healed so they decided to up the pain level if he could regenerate so quickly. On either side of him was a man who held a large back of salt. A villager came up and stabbed Naruto in the gut and the men started to throw salt over the wound. He cried out as the happened again and again. They kept doing it and started to laugh.
"Bring out the oil!" shouted what was apparently the leader of the mob. Four men came hoisting two barrels carried between them. They slowly poured the oil over his body. Then a middle aged villager stepped away from the crowd with a lighter in hand. "This is for my son you Hell spawn," he yelled bringing the lighter down to ignite the oil.
Soon the scream of pain began to morph into beastly roar. Suddenly Naruto looked up and every piece of metal in the area shattered and began to come toward Naruto. The barded wire that restrained him fell as well. He collapsed onto the ground in a bloody heap as the crimson fluid began to spread still.
He slowly stood and looked at the metallic sand substance that was shifting around him. He looked up and whispered a jutsu no one had ever heard before as his eyes began to slowly change to a light grayish color. "Iron Sand: World Law," he called as the sand shifted and started to form a dome like cage where at each joint spikes of more iron sand came down on them (think Sasori's or something a little like it). The descending spikes pierced the bodies of several of the civilians as the sand continued to shift around Naruto. It creped around his back and began to form wings. He began to raise of the ground slowly ascending to the top of the cage. A large serrated scythe began to form out of the sand as he charged towards them on the ground, descending like an angel of death ready to end their lives.
The Sandaime arrived at the scene just as Naruto fell back to the ground as the cage collapsed to the ground as the sand made its way back to Naruto. The last of the mob about to charge at him when he raised a hand and called out. "Iron Sand: Piercing Shot," he cried in a raspy voice as the sand formed large spikes in the air and they began to impale the civilians and random shinobi alike. He collapsed from the mental overload as the Sandaime picked him up. "ANBU, clean this up I want no evidence," he ordered as he began to make his way back to the Hokage's office with the sand either clinging to Naruto or trailing behind him. 'Well this changes things,' he thought as he thought of the woman he drove away from Naruto. His own mother, Kushina Uzumaki.