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Louise went into my bedroom but i continued on into the bathroom. i sat on the floor. how could this be happening? how does she know? No one knows, no one has ever knew. something wasnt right. Something strange was going on. maybe im just being paranoid. I shrugged it off.

i came out of the bathroom and into my bedroom to find Louise lying in my bed.

"uh, Louise maybe you should sleep on the camp bed." i said kinda annoyed cause im tired.

"thats not very fair! and you get a comfy bed!" She replied.

"um louise its my bed," i said "plus im sure if your wanting a bed you can go to Eve's room"

"fine, but tomorrow i want to share a room with you" and with that she left the room and went to eves.

I closed the door and was just about to lock it when there was a knock at my door

"Lou go sleep in" i said opening the door only to see him standing there. I looked left and right down the hallway, he gave a little wave meaning my attention to be focused on him. " how did you get in? who let you in?"

"uh, girl, brown hair?" Jared replied, Louise let him in. he leaned against the door frame. he had on a leather jacket. His beautiful eyes twinkled in the light. "can i come in?"

I nodded and he made his way into my room.


We spent hours talking, he told me his father was a preacher, he spent most of his childhood travelling with his brothers, Caleb and Nathan. i told him most things about except from the vamps.

"you know Claire your so pretty" i laughed out loud! yeah right "Claire you really are"

i dont know where the sudden braveness came from but i leaned in and kissed him. it was amazing. tangling my fingers in his hair, his in mine. he pushed me down and all of a sudden was on top of me.

Making out with me like i have never experianced. he sat up breathless.

"uhm i should go" he said grabbing his jacket and hopping of my bed. he shut the door and left.

wow! that was amazing.

i sat up and there she was infront of me.

"claire, what are you doing? what about shane?" Alyssa asked me.

"he, he doesnt understand me Lyssa. Jared is so nice. Shane, shanes, well im over him. A tear streaked down my cheek. "anyway dont you think its about time you crossed over?"

"Claire we have been over this, i have un-finished business!" Alyssa said and dissapeared.


i know this chapter was short. please review! i want to know what i can do to make it better and i understand you dont want claire and shane to break up but you need to wait and see what happens at the end! REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW.