Oh my StarClan guys, I am so sorry for all the confusion! That's what happens when it's late and I forget to proofread! Especially to BooksOnFire, I was thinking of another cat! SO sorry! I revised this one, but please forgive me for messing his name up! Once again, so so so so so so sorry, please forgive me! Here's the revised version:

Ello my wonderful friends! XD If you said the white cat was Whitestorm, you are CORRECT! *Gives everyone Eucalyptus trees* Have a Eucalyptus tree! You guys are awesome-amazing-friggin-coolio-pimpin-people! I love you guys with every corner of my heart!...Do hearts have corners? O-o


"MOONECHO!", I heard yowled across the camp. I struggled up, shaking the fog of sleep away. "MOONECHO! BLOSSOMFALL'S KITTING!", was yowled. It was Foxleap, Blossomfall's mate! I grabbed borage leaves, some juniper berries, and rasberry leaves. I ran over, with many confused looks at me. I burst into the Nursery to see Foxleap fretting, trying to calm Blossomfall, but making her more nervous.

"FOXLEAP!", I yelled. I pointed to the entrance with my tail, and he padded out, fretfully looking behind him like I was going to eat his mate. I shoved him the rest of the way out, then turned to Blossomfall. Her eyes were distant, as if looking somewhere else. She yowled in pain as a ripple was sent through her body, and I shushed her comfortingly. I remembered this was Millie's kit.

Millie wasn't clan blood.

These kits weren't clan blood.

Blossomfall yowled again, and I shook my head. I couldn't do that. I gave her some rasberry leaves and juniper berries, leaving the borage near the entrance. Cherryfur woke up on the other side of the nursery with her kits, Wolfkit and Sparrowkit. She shushed the almost-apprentices and asked me, 'Do you need any help?" I didn't look up from Blossomfall and said, "Just wait." Another spasm passed through Blossomfall, and soon a reddish she cat was born. I gave her to Cherryfur, and she instinctively licked it until it began breathing. Another spasm, and a torteiseshell she cat was born. I licked this one quickly, and set it beside the other kit to suckle. By the end of Blossomfall's kitting, a red and white tom and a torteiseshell and white tom was born.

I was satisfied as I watched Blossomfall fall asleep after eating the borage, the kits suckling. It seemed like life was good as Foxleap came in, amazed at the beautiful batch of kits. That's when another thought came to mind.

Kits.

What a fine thing it would be to have kits.

~~~~~~~~line thingy= new day~~~~~~~~~

I woke up from a nap to hear Bramblestar yowling, "Everyone going to the Gathering, come to the Entrance!" (AN: LOL I couldn't remember what they say for a gathering, so this seemed pretty straight forward XD) I shook my fur and trotted to him, standing next to Rabbitcloud. Her fur looked a mess, and when she saw me looking she said "Border Patrol. Thorns." I sighed at my friend's foolishness, and plucked the thorns out. None were deep enough to draw blood, but with her long fur, they stuck. I helped her clean her fur when I saw Bramblestar rush out of camp with everyone in tow.

Flashpaw came up beside us. "Hi guys!", she sqeaked, excited about her first gathering. "Hi", Rabbitcloud and I said at the same time, before Flashpaw rushed on, bursting with energy. I shook my head, wishing I was as carefree as her. As we entered the Island, I saw him again. Rabbitcloud sat down, but I got closer to the tree as a medicine cat.

He sat right behind me. The Gathering hadn't started yet, so I turned around and said, "Hello. I'm Moonecho." He gave me a charming smile and said, "I'm Hawkfire." I was lost again in those amber eyes, but I managed to hold up some small chat with him, well small chat for two cats from different Clans. Then, Bramblestar called the Gathering to start and we all settled down.

I didn't pay much attention to what was going on, but when Mistystar spoke about foxes my hackles raised. Everything after that was fairly boring, the usual new warrior, new kits. Soon the Gathering had ended, when Hawkfire stood in my path to leave. "Meet me here tomorrow at midnight", he whispered in my ear, then he sprang away, disappearing into the brush. I was startled, and I pondered whether to go or not the way home.

~~~~~~~~~~~~ling thingy=new day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I was waken from my daydreams as I heard Bramblestar yowl, "All cats old enough to catch their own prey, come beneath the High Rock!" I made myself look..decent then padded out with my fur slightly less messy. Bramblestar was up on High Rock, strutting his usual strut, but something was different. Everyone was standing around Wolfkit and Sparrowkit, and Cherryfur was bustling around, licking Wolfkit's back fur, smoothing Sparrowkit's head fur. I gave myself a mental slap as I remembered: They were being apprenticed today!

I listened to Bramblestar's annoying speech, blah blah future, blah blah ThunderClan, blah blah Moonecho...Moonecho?

I raised my head to see Wolfkit eagerly looking at me from HighRock, her silver fur puffed out with excitement. I tried to look like I knew I was going to ber her mentor as I strode up, touching noses with Wolfki- erm Wolfpaw. Sparrowkit was apprenticed to a very excited Rabbitcloud.

After Wolfpaw was congratulated, I bustled her over to my den, and settled a little nest for her. I then began showing her herbs. She caught on pretty quickly, but she was eager to really do something. "Just wait Wolfpaw, oppurtunity requires pati-"

"Moonecho!", I heard yelled, and as i walked out I motioned to Wolfpaw to follow. I trotted in the direction of the yell, leading me to Sparrowpaw. Wolfpaw was about to greet him, when he burst out, "Bramblestar got bitten by a fox!" I gasped, he was leader even if I didn't like him. I grabbed a collection of herbs, with Wolfpaw following with some herbs. We ran after Sparrowpaw, until he lead us to Bramblestar.

He was sprawled along the ground, a deep gash in his side and a bite insicion (sp?) on his throat. Wolfpaw gasped and I quickly set her to licking the wound. All annoyance at him was gone as I saw what pain he was in. I ran off until I found a bush with cobwebs. I swatted them off and ran back to Bramblestar. As I padded them onto his wound i realized I carried his life.

Me.

I snapped myself out of it again, and continued padding the blood away. I instructed Wolfpaw to do the same, until the blood was soaked up. His body shuddered, and turned cold.

He was dead.

Wolfpaw began fretting, and I yelled for help. I listened for any signs of breathing and then it returned. I sighed with relief, and Wolfpaw gave me an inquiring look. "He lost a life, little one", I said , and her eyes grew wider.

"I...feel...better...take me...back to...camp", Bramblestar wheezed out, and we helped him hobble back to camp. Luckily it wasn't far, but by the time we got back, we had stopped five times. Everyone bustled around, giving our now weak leader questioning looks, until my father cut in and yelled, "Everyone! Bramblestar needs to rest!" He wheezed slightly and I gave him my own questioning look. Lionblaze seemed to shrug it off though, as if he would always wheeze. I turned my attention back to Bramblestar and led him to my den.

~~~~~~~~Fast Forward to Midnight~~~~~~~

I waited until I was sure Bramblestar and Wolfpaw were asleep. I then snuck out, listening to the calm breathing. Lucky for me, Rabbitcloud was on a potty break, so I snuck out of camp without questioning. I spread some wild garlic over my scent, so Rabbitcloud wouldn't notice I went out.

I went to the Island, and I saw Hawkfire waiting there. I smiled as I walked across the tree, waving my tail. "You came", he said, more to himself then me. I smiled as I approached him, and I slid my tail under his nose to tease him.

"Look Moonecho..I'd like to ...get to know you better", he said kindly, shuffling his paws. "I would too", I replied and I sat down, my tail wrapped around my paws. He spoke about himself for a little bit, then he listened to my story.

I liked this tom, very much. I started to tire, and I lied down, resting my eyes. He took a risk and lied down next to me. I purred loudly, and he purred back. I meant to rest my eyes, but I ended up falling asleep, with one thought on my mind.

Hawkfire.

What a fine tom.


Did you like it? I hope you did! :3 Did you like the length? I was thinking about this, and I could do one this long every 2 to 3 days, or I could do one the size of inbetween chapter two and three almost everyday? So Review For: What Size You Want, Plot Suggestions, Writing Advice, Size Suggestion, Ideas, or All of the Above. :) I love you guys! Peace Is International! Oo! Almost forgot! If you figure out where I get Peace Is International from, you can help me with the Plot Suggestion and I'll give you where I think this story is going! Hint: Peace Is International is part of a certain song's lyrics. If you have the answer review, then I'll PM you if you were the first one and winner! Love you guys! PEACE IS INTERNATIONAL X)