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Chapter 34

Sherlock Holmes, the Truth, and the Biggest Mistake

It was 8 o'clock and the party had officially started. The music was on, people where dancing, and the common room looked amazing.

It was decorated for Halloween. Black candles were charmed to float over the crowd. Bouquets of black roses sat on long tables, covered in black table cloths. Black rose petals were sprinkled everywhere. Fake skulls and skeletons decorated the room, as well as stereotypical witches, for irony.

Everyone was in costume, dressed as princesses, vampires, famous witches and wizards, animals, and almost anything you could think of. Naturally the costumes were more than a little revealing, because as Sirius had said "On Halloween, the hard core girls just wear lingerie and some form of animal ears."

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The girls were still in their dorm getting ready.

Kay stood in front of the mirror. Clad in a basically tight shiny black spandex sleeveless bodysuit, knee high heeled boots, a plump pink bow around her neck, cat ears, and a tail. She was a kitty. She had straightened her hair, and drawn whiskers on her face. For makeup she wore heavy mascara and eyeliner, and a very light orange tinted eye shadow, with a hint of light lip gloss. The dark eyeliner contrasted well with the light eye shadow.

Lila laughed as Kay made a purring noise while examining herself in the mirror.

'What?!'

Lila just kept laughing, 'Nothing, nothing at all.'

Lila was dressed as a fairy. She had on a short sparkly blue tutu, silver tights, a barely-there tank top that was such a light, powdery blue, it almost looked like skin, silver wings with blue swirls on them, and subtle blue heels. Her face looked like she was part butterfly, with swirls of blue next to her eyes, and blue and silver eyeliner. She had on a minimal amount of mascara, and sparkly lip gloss.

'So what do you guys think?' Rach asked as she walked in and stuck a pose. She was a "bad" witch. Meaning she wore black dress with a slit all the way up her thigh, high heel black stilettos, and a witch's hat. Her makeup was on heavy, eyeliner, mascara, and silver eye shadow; she topped it off with a stunning red shade of lip gloss.

Lily was sitting on her old bed, with a book.

'Lily, you are coming to this party.' Rach said, grabbing Lily and trying to pull her off the bed.

'I don't want to, and I'm tired.'

'No your not!'

'You can't tell me if I'm tired or not!'

'I can, and I am. Look I know something happened with James, but the truth is, the best way to get over a guy, is to get under a different one. So put down the book, get into costume, and let's go par-tay!'

Kay and Lila laughed hysterically, even Lily cracked a smile.

'I don't have a costume anyway.'

'Yes you do!' Rach cried.

'No I don't, I haven't even thought of what I should be, so I didn't buy one.'

'Are you daft?' Kay asked. 'You're a witch. Use your bloody wand!'

'Oh yeah.' Lily said.

They all waited.

'I don't know if I want to go.'

'If you don't go, he wins.' Lila said, she was perceptive, and knew how to get to Lily.

Lily would not let her win.

'Ok…what should I be?' She said finally.

'Oh, something sexy!' Rach yelled.

This time, they all laughed.

'I know,' said Kay, 'be a French maid. It's sexy, but not full-out slutty.' *cough 'like Rach' cough cough*

'Hey, I resent that.'

Kay gave her a look.

'I said resent, not deny.'

'Girls, I like to think you see me as having some class."

They stare at her, baffled, until with a flick of her wand she is transformed.

Lily wore a short dress of a dark forest green; it was sleeveless and formfitting, and extremely flattering. Brown ballet shoes made her legs seem endless and her feet look impossibly dainty. A fitted brown plaid trench coat went down to her knees and lay open, accenting her curves. Her hair spiraled down in perfect curls that sparkled slightly from underneath a brown plaid hat that looked distinctively familiar...

"That is the sexiest bloody Sherlock Holmes I have ever seen," said Rach; the other girls were still speechless.

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The guys were busy hosting the party. Dancing, talking, flirting…always flirting, and whatever else was needed.

They all had the same costumes essentially…they all went topless with wolflike wigs, as werewolves.

They found it hilarious, no one else really understood the joke, but they didn't care.

It was officially 8:37 according to James's watch, which he kept glancing at. He had been sure to stay by the entrance to the common room that led to the girls' dorms. Lily wasn't there yet, he was waiting. Hoping that her friends where forcing her to come. He knew she wouldn't come alone. With a sigh he absent mindedly sat down on the stairs. They immediately turned into a slide, and he ended up on his bum.

He saw the shadow of people descending the stairs, and he scurried up and back, pretending to be occupied.

The girls made their entrance. They had a habit of making big entrances, not on purpose of course, they just happened to be four of the "hottest" girls in the school. They were essentially the female Marauders. You had the sexy slutty one (Rach), the sexy cool one (Kay), the sexy sweet one (Lila), and the sexy smart one (Lily).

Of course as they made their way across the dance floor people stopped and stared, but eventually went back to their dancing.

Lily, not enjoying the attention, threw Rach a pleading look. Naturally, Rach ignored it.

With a sigh, Lily grabbed Lila by the arm and pulled her aside.

'I don't know if I can do this.' She said.

'Lily, you can! And you have to!'

'But—'

'No buts! Either talk to him, or don't let him get to you!'

'BUT—'

'NO BUTS!'

Sirius, who happened to be walking by chimed in with a 'Haha! You said butt!'

Lila stuck her tongue out at him.

Glancing around the room, she noticed Remus standing over by the punch table.

'And that's my cue to leave.' She said with a wink and slowly walked over to him swinging her hips.

Lily laughed as she watched two of her best friends flirting.

'Hey' said a voice from behind her.

She knew who it was instantly, and was internally debating whether or not to turn around.

He made the decision for her, by taking her arm and gently turning her to face him.

She looked down refusing to meet his eyes.

She knew if she looked into those hazel orbs all her anger would melt away, and she wouldn't be able to stop herself from falling for him.

'Lily you need to listen to me! I had a reason—'

'What you got bored of her, moved on to the next thing?!'

'No Lily! She cheated on me! I swear! I di—'

'You expect me to believe that?'

'Yes! It's true.'

'I doubt you'd know the truth if it bit you in the arse. Goodbye James' She said wrenching herself out of his grasp and storming off.

As she stormed off, she felt tears welling up in her eyes. She ran into a closet as they threatened to fall.

She opened the door and ran right into a couple in the middle of a very heated hookup session.

'Uh…' Was all Lily could say as she looked up into the eyes of none other than Lizy Caplin.

'Shit!' She muttered.

'Umm…I'm just gonna leave then.' Lily said as she backed out of the closet. She was absolutely shaken by what she had seen.

And suddenly it donned on her.

James wasn't lying, and she had walked off.

And she may have just made the biggest mistake of her life.

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