I love the response I've gotten with the first chapter. Yay!
Soooo, I'm just going to go straight into the story.
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN ANYTHING...DARN
Olivia arrived at Mercy General Hospital a few minutes later, rushing into the E.R. where she saw Elliot standing near the corner of the room. "What do we have?" she asked, walking up to him.
Elliot, who didn't need to look up to know it was his partner, pulled out a small notepad and read off the details. "Ana Davis, twenty-four, raped in the alleyway walking home this morning." Olivia watched as Elliot put his notepad back in his pocket. "Rape kit?"
"Already done" he answered. "No fluids, but evidence of spermicide."
"So, he used a condom?" Elliot nodded. "How's she doing?" Olivia heard her stomach growl. Somewhere between talking to her daughter's half-brother on the phone, and telling Avery about the appointment with Alex and Donnelly, she had forgotten to actually eat anything. She heard her stomach growl once more, making a mental note to stop for something to eat when the two headed back to the precinct.
Elliot led Olivia down the hall, walking to their victim's hosiptal room. "A little shaken up. She just wants to get things over with."
Olivia nodded, before walking into the room the two had stopped in front of. "Ana Davis?" she asked the young woman laying in the hospital bed. The blonde nodded, before Olivia continued. "I'm Detective Benson, this is my partner, Detective Stabler" she said, pointing to Elliot. "We need to know what happened."
Olivia sat at the edge of the hospital bed, as Elliot continued to stand. She pulled out her own small notepad, before looking at Ana. "I was walking home, around four this morning" she began, keeping her eyes on Elliot, making sure he stayed a good distance away.
"Do you always walk home at four in the morning?" he asked, watching her reaction. Both Olivia and Ana looked at him, before she answered. "I work the overnight shift at a local diner. My shift ended at three." Ana looked back at Olivia, as she continued her story. "A man, came up from behind me. He put his hand over my mouth and said that if I screamed, he would kill me." Olivia could tell she was getting teary, so she placed her hand on top of Ana's, letting her know they were going to catch him. "He dragged me into the alley, where he continually hit and kicked me."
Elliot looked at the young blonde in the bed, and sighed. There was no doubt that she had been beautiful, but the multiple cuts and bruises covering her body, made it hard to see. "He ripped my jeans open, pulled them down, and raped me."
"Ana, I know this may be hard, but do you recall anything specific about your attacker? A smell, the way he spoke to you? It could really help us out." Olivia gave her hand a small reassuring squeeze.
"No."
"Well, did he say anything to you?"
Ana looked at Olivia with a straight face. "He said, that if I told the cops what happened, he would kill me."
Olivia looked at Elliot, wide-eyed. "We can protect you, and I just want you to know that we'll do whatever we can to catch your attacker."
Ana nodded, as Olivia got up and walked to the door. She walked out of the room, Elliot right behind, but was met with chaos. She was nearly hit by a group of nurses rushing a patient through the hallway, but thanks to Elliot, she was pulled out of the way. The two made sure it was all clear before they moved down the hall, stopping a familiar face on the way out. "Dr. Hinder" Olivia said, placing her hand on his forearm, causing him to stop. "What happened?"
"Major accident. Bus collided with a few cars" was all he said before a few more people, all bleeding and crying, were rushed past them. "I'm sorry, I have to go." Dr. Hinder quickly ran after the nurses, a few doctors following after him.
Olivia turned to face Elliot, when a familiar voice called out to her. "Olivia!"
The two turned to see Cragen, rushing up them. "Captain? Did we get another case?" Olivia moved out of the way, allowing paramedics to rush another two people past them.
"No, it has to do with this" he said, motioning to the chaos around them.
"What do you mean?" Elliot asked, a little confused.
Cragen looked up, as his eyes met Olivia's. "A man tried to hijack a bus. When a few civilians tried to stop him, the gun went off. He shot three people, including the driver, making him lose control. The three people shot are in the worst condition."
Olivia looked at Elliot, confused, before turning back to her captain. "I don't understand, why did you come to the hospital?"
"I couldn't get a hold of your cell phone" he said, glancing at Elliot who seemed to understand what he was trying to say. "Olivia, Avery was on that bus."
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yeah I know it's short. I was really tired, and had a bunch of stuff to finish, but I thought I'd get at least another chapter in by tonight.
So, tell me what you think, please
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